The Promised Scholarship, Why Do You Want Me to Slay the Dragon?

The protagonist is a being similar to Lu Mingfei. He has a younger sister like Lu Mingze. She doesn't show off on the surface. She is friends with Lu Mingfei but looks on when her friend is being humiliated. The author's writing style is relatively good. I haven't noticed it for the time being. Is it an AI text? The part I'm reading so far does not have the mechanical flavor of AI. There is an original female character named Ashley, which is a classic dragon fanfic model, but the description of Zero's hair is wrong.

Four stars, I thought it was five stars before chapter 29. I wanted to write about the taste of Jiangnan, but it gave me the impression that it is a bit middle-class. Literary youth has it, but the literary youth is a little middle-class [face covering]. The order of the two chapters in chapters 31-32 is reversed. The author can change it. After Chapter 32 of this book, I felt that the transition was too fast. My impression is that the plot of this book is more like inserting the protagonist into the timeline of the original work, but is it positioned more as a passerby, a third-party perspective, and basically has zero involvement in the main plot? There's nothing wrong with pushing the plot back and forth, and it's also good to write original plots. I feel like I want to write a lot to express a lot of things, but instead everything I write is a bit messy? I don't know how to describe it. It gave me the feeling that the transition was so fast that after going to Siberia, I skipped the rest of the movie. But in general, the current version of fan fiction is quite good. Due to the subject matter, the number of viewers may not be very large. Come on, author, after all, the feeling I got from the beginning of this book is still okay.

This book is really good. I feel that the author is getting better and better. The more he writes, the more he resembles the shadow of Jiangnan. There is nothing to say about the writing style. The writing may not be very good at the beginning, but it only lasts a few chapters (the male protagonist may be a bit unlikable), but the writing is getting better and better later on, much better than before.

It looks pretty good, I support my brother

Come on author, I believe in you

I hope Eriyi is okay [crying][crying][crying][crying] I want to know when Teacher Xiami will appear

I was a little speechless when I saw it before, it just wasn't pretty enough. But I resisted and saw the little monster, and I felt that it was really well written later.

This book is amazing [laughs] It's even better than what Jiang Nan wrote. It's like Jiang Nan himself.

Recommended, but there is a slight AI

The writing is very careful and great [Like] [OK] [OK] [OK] It is currently a high-quality fine grain

Good looking [shy] well written

Pretty good fanfic

This novel is amazing, the character interactions are very interesting, a bit like what Jiang Nan wrote, but why is it that in most cases, the protagonist is more joyful? [What]

Looks more and more like Jiangnan