清冷圣女不会主动开口说爱我

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A blood contract between a demon cultivator and a righteous saint began. On the way to find the release of the blood contract, the two fell into different world lines. The demon cultivator met the Wanfa Immortal Sect thousands of years ago and faced the catastrophe together. The saint came to the human world before the demon cultivator traveled through time and looked for a way to leave with the demon cultivator who had lost his memory (before the time travel). It connects three world lines from a familiar timeline, but it is not obtrusive and just right. The entanglement of fate always emerges faintly. It seems particularly beautiful at the moment, and the foreshadowing is very exciting.

Putting the quality of this work on a tomato scale, a score of 7 or more is definitely too low. Many works have a lot of poisonous points at the beginning, sometimes more than 8 points. This one is not too toxic, it only scores over 7 points, I don't know why. Of course, the previous plot is more fun-oriented, and the male protagonist is less poetic in his behavior, a bit like the roommate in the magic pill. But the Ten Thousand Fa Immortal Sect chapter is very good. The heroine doesn't say anything but acts like a cold coquettish person who brings the two of them closer together. It's great [licking the screen]. Out of 10 points, I would give 7 to 8 points for the previous chapter, and 15 points for the Ten Thousand Fa Immortal Sect chapter. The modern chapter hasn't been finished yet, so it feels like it's just so-so at the moment. It depends on where it goes from here. In short, the author does not need to rush to update, but he must do it quickly.

It looks good. It was pretty good at first, but then I strayed into the old times. I went, and it was amazing. The writing was much more interesting, and the image was completely established. It was as if someone else had written it. I am now looking forward to the follow-up. More to come. I love reading it.

It's worth reading - I originally just read it as a mindless fairy tale, but after reading it, I actually felt that it was quite good. The overall writing style is quite relaxed, and there are often some jokes in the article. As you read it, you will feel like another chapter has passed with laughter. The content of the cultivation of immortality is indeed slightly lacking, but if you think of this book as a pure love story with a template of cultivation of immortality, it is really not bad. Especially when the plot progresses, I can feel the changes of the heroine more intuitively, which makes me feel very comfortable. One of the biggest advantages of having a single heroine is that there is enough space to create a feeling for the heroine. The character creation of the heroine is really good. I have to say that the two secret realms are indeed well written, and the ability to mobilize emotions is indeed a blessing - of course, it may be because I haven't seen any details in it. The male protagonist's character and behavioral motivations are not satisfactory, and some plots have some minor problems due to lack of explanation, but overall they are acceptable. So far, there aren't any major flaws in the whole book - if you treat this book as a pure love story (although the pace will be a bit slow, there will be no actual progress until around Chapter 150). If you are in a book shortage or if you like this kind of work, I would recommend it. The rating of seven points seems a bit low. There is still a lot of room for subsequent plot development, just don't end it unfinished or cut it off in half. I believe in the author, come on [Sending Hearts] Everyone has different opinions. I just read this book, which is only the author's second. There may be some poisonous points in other people's eyes. However, considering the author's psychological endurance, why don't you just criticize it a little bit? I think the author still has a lot of room for improvement. Keep at it. Maybe one day in the future, you will be able to write novels and become a senior who can improve your life by writing books and be worthy of learning from the younger generations.

It's also very interesting. There are some jokes and interactions in the book which are quite good [Like] For simple love, the pace is a bit slow. But as I watched, a new way of tuning (crossing out) to cultivate emotions came into my mind. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] These two small "worlds" opened are quite interesting. I feel like there could be two chapters, one in the old days and one in the modern era, describing the lives of the male and female protagonists who have not left the small "world" [Like] The updates are a little slow, but as long as you keep updating, you can still write a lot [smile] If there is a knife at the back, I will come back and add another star [smile]

It's okay, I can see that the author is slowly making progress. It is essentially a romance light novel, and then it is covered with a layer of immortality. Anyone with a discerning eye can see it, and ignore the fake people who are looking for trouble (this kind of man-machine is the most popular on Tomato, such as the comment with the most likes). It's pretty good in Tomato, but I feel that the author is a bit avoiding the development of the main world view and the main plot, and has been using dungeons (although the dungeons are okay, and the look and feel are acceptable), and the fighting lacks the visual sense of cultivating immortals (however, it is covered with this layer of skin). I hope I can write better

I used to think that I had no desire to write romance novels, but after reading this book, I realized that maybe I just had a shallow knowledge. The beginning of the story actually didn't have much appeal. I, a remnant of the demon cultivator, was chased by the righteous saint. I accidentally hit and triggered the ancient formation. Since then, the demon cultivator and the saint were bound by a blood contract, and we had to go together to find a solution. In this way, the two of them stumbled all the way to the secret realm, obtained the hosta and ink sword, found the token, and opened the ancient ruins. Then came the Ten Thousand Fa Immortal Sect. The consciousness of the two people who opened the ruins came to the ancient Ten Thousand Fa Immortal Sect. They had the same appearance, the same name, and different identities. They were both disciples of the two peak masters of the Ten Thousand Fa Immortal Sect. In the pursuit of love by their masters, different emotions also arose in the hearts of the male and female protagonists. But after all, it was a big dream, and the hero and heroine who woke up found the solution to the blood contract, and the two of them became different. If I had to say, it's probably a touch sweet or slightly greasy, with a youthful bravery and youthful frivolity. It's a charming love fragrance. I think I will stick to watching it, thank the author for writing the story, and hope that more exciting plots will allow us to see more of the protagonists.

To be honest, the first few dozen chapters were average, but when it came to the part where I traveled through time and returned to the Ten Thousand Fa Immortal Sect, it felt like I had changed people. It looked more beautiful to me, and the writing style felt much better. It is suitable for reading as a light love story. Subjectively speaking, it is definitely out of the industrial saccharine level. The emotional lines are very natural, and the male and female characters are also very three-dimensional and full. Hope to keep updating.

The least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least sensational, the least nonsense, the least roundabout, the least obtrusive, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least verbose, the least procrastinating, the least tactful, the least disguised, the least hidden, The most straightforward, the most explicit, the most real, the most transparent, the most vicious, the most refreshing, the most refreshing, the most superior, the most powerful, the most enjoyable, the roughest, the most effective, the most ruthless, the most accurate, the most stable, the most absolute, the most top, the most explosive, The toughest, the fiercest, the sassiest, the most reckless, the most aggressive, the fiercest, the crispest, the brightest, the most transparent, the driest, the cleanest, the neatest, the most domineering, the most hard-core, the most vigorous, the wildest, the most straightforward, the most brutal, and the least hypocritical. , The least involved in routines, the least formal, the least fussy, the most talkative, the most focused, the most focused on giving results, the most focused on the truth, the least focused on the core, the least focused on key book reviews: mainly about love.

I quite like the style. The male and female protagonists are forced to go together. They want to kill each other but have no choice. The male protagonist really owes it. Having such a person around him is really annoying [facepalm]. The female protagonist is almost on the same page step by step, although she has not changed her view of the male protagonist yet. The plot has some bugs, but it's quite humorous and amusing. I like the idea of ​​the male and female protagonists cultivating immortality and upgrading together. It's not monotonous. It's good that the love line progresses slowly. It's better to end together quickly. It's more interesting to have the tension and confrontation in the middle.

Overall it's a novel worth reading. (1) The description and creation of the characters are relatively vivid, but not multi-faceted and three-dimensional enough (of course, it may also be because of the lack of space or the rigidity of the overall style of the novel). The male and female protagonists appear flat in the main line; (2) The overall plot has a certain tension. The antagonistic relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, immortals and demons, and the contract of life and death constitute a pair of distinct conflicts. On the basis of "finding a solution", the development of the plot and characters is promoted through the detailed depiction of the two fantasy scenes and the changes in the relationships between different characters; (3) The depiction of "immortality elements" such as the realm of cultivation and the process of cultivation is not detailed enough and rigorous; but this is understandable, because at present, the focus of the book should be on the plot, that is, focusing on the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist and the personal development of the protagonist, rather than fast-food fairy novels such as "copy monsters and monster upgrades"; the shortcomings of the appeal are not hidden, and it can be accepted in online reading; Looking forward to the author's update [Blowing a kiss]

As a reader who has been digging for gold in foreign persimmons for a long time, I think my vision is still good (*≧∪≦)👌🏻. At present, the score of this book is low, but the quality of the content is definitely more than this score. The emotional description of the article is delicate, and the handling of emotional transformation can definitely be regarded as excellent. Compared with the sudden emotional changes in some online articles, the emotional origins seen in this work are all traceable. In addition, the double-wearing setting adopted by the author also made my eyes shine. As far as the current 173 chapters are concerned, you can read it with confidence👀[laughs]

It's quite interesting. If you want a love story, you can check it out. The Wanfa Xianzong chapter and the modern chapter are very interesting and well-written. Only the plot of the world of cultivating immortals is bad (maybe it hasn't worked hard yet?), And there is also the feeling that the character of the heroine in the modern chapter has changed a lot. Looking forward to the follow-up The plot of Cultivation World is a bit boring, I almost want to give up.

It's really good, it picks up after chapter 60, there is no trace of AI (absolutely none), it's interesting to watch. It's a blessing to find a copy of 100 Ben. Highly recommended to all book lovers.

It is still very good. The characters of the male and female protagonists are both great. The male protagonist is not a bad person, and the female protagonist is not a vase with a lot of virginity. The bickering between the two is also very interesting. The pace is fast, and various events basically follow one after another, with no daily transitions. The emotional line is very slow, and I saw that the progress of the emotional line in Chapter 20 is basically 0. The two fight together very well, and both play their roles, which deserves praise.

Rating: (a little spoiler) The secret realm in the early stage of the plot has the feeling of being a chronicle, and the system of cultivating immortals is not clearly explained, and the combat system of the male protagonist who has only traveled through the world for two years is on par with the aboriginal saint. It is a poisonous point and this book can only be regarded as a daily semi-cultivating immortal. The above are the shortcomings in my opinion, The emotional transition between the male and female protagonists is very natural. Before they knew each other, they both wanted to kill each other. It took hundreds of chapters to ease the relationship, but the author made someone go back to the past where the other party was the main character to get to know the most real person and understand him (her). What kind of person is he? The improvement in the relationship between the male and female protagonists is visible to the naked eye but not obvious. The author of the emotional drama is very good, but the battle scenes can only be considered good. The author can change the label so that the score is higher. It tastes like a knife but eating a small knife is good. Come on author

The novel is very interesting, and it is obvious that the author wrote it with great care. The idea of ​​​​a fantasy world for each male and female protagonist. To be honest, it has already surpassed most of Tomatoes in terms of creativity, and it is only the second one. There are some problems with the fantasy, that is, the female protagonist. First of all, it is a bit out of subject, and it is too long. At least the background of the first one is still cultivating immortals, and the love-hate relationship between the two masters is also very interesting, but the second one is directly transformed into the city, is it okay? The characters are full-bodied and three-dimensional. It can be seen that the depiction of the saint was carefully thought out. The author is also very interesting and has a strong sense of life. The writing is very interesting.

The characters of the male and female protagonists are both lovable. The plot design is well written by the author. He has his own design and can be watched with a smile. The unhappiness and cold humor of the male and female protagonists are quite funny. The relationship between the two is not progressing very fast. It can even be said that the fantasy world will not change a little if the male protagonist does not enter the past. The female protagonist is the same. It is not because the male protagonist is about to die because of the GG. Because of the thing that the author gave to bind the two of them, the female protagonist cannot reversely travel to the earth for a fantasy world. The author is very good. If you have your own opinion, don't write those dramas where emotions are heating up like running water. Instead, you can draw it slowly. Anyway, now both of them have a different fantasy experience. The experience here is the key to melting the ice. Sometimes in the article, there are some things that feel unnecessary to hide, but soon they are written for probably acceptable reasons. The main reason is that the male protagonist is like this, and the female protagonist is almost the kind of feeling that the male protagonist can guess and roughly know. It's pretty good. As someone who has been naked for more than 10,000 hours, this could have been a lot of fun to watch. Again, if I say it's good, you weigh it, if I say it's a piece of cake, don't be stubborn, unless you are a real Shennong. It's highly recommended, after all, there aren't many people writing about fantasy on Tomato these days.

Although the setting of the male and female protagonists is very classic, the author's description does not make people feel cliche, the writing is natural, and the jokes and jokes are inserted smoothly. Seeing that only two characters, male and female, have been created so far, even if there is no deep story depth, the interaction between the two will not be boring, and some of the detailed descriptions are also touching. The descriptions of the change in the male protagonist's attitude towards the female protagonist after returning to the past, and the change in the female protagonist's attitude towards the male protagonist are both delicious. Seeing the part where the heroine reaches modern times makes me want to write a novel. All in all, a non-toxic little sweet article [like][like][like].

Okay, at first I thought it was a very conventional fantasy novel, but after reading it, I found it to be quite good. The overall style is funny and lighthearted, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is well written. So far, there is nothing particularly sweet. It is not the industrial saccharine of the assembly line. It is considered slow-paced. If you like this genre, don't miss it [Got it] [Adoration] [Adoration]

The relationship between the male and female protagonists is well written. The previous female protagonist thought that the male protagonist was not a good person because of his identity as a demon cultivator, so she was more aggressive in her language. Later, I learned that the male protagonist was a good person and that becoming a demon cultivator was not a voluntary act. His attitude towards the male protagonist also improved. After experiencing the dream, the male and female protagonists both had a good impression of each other. The interactive plot between the male and female protagonists is very interesting, and the various abstract activities of the male protagonist are also very interesting. [Praise]

It's quite interesting. The male protagonist was accidentally bound to a blood contract when being chased by the female protagonist. The male protagonist is a time traveler who carries the inheritance of the Demon Emperor, and the female protagonist is a saint from a righteous sect. While looking for a way to unlock the blood contract, the male protagonist and the female protagonist traveled back to the ancient times together (the female protagonist has no memory at this time), and then the female protagonist traveled back to modern times (the male protagonist has no memory at this time). I think the part about Ten Thousand Fa Immortal Sect is quite interesting. Anyway, I quite like this style. Modern movies are also okay. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs [Original Party]

It's nice, but it's too short. Please write more. Write more about the physical contact between the male and female protagonists, and be more detailed, as well as the psychological activities of the male and female protagonists, etc. There's a lot of fighting now, so I'll write more about the little cookies.

So far, I have seen the plot of the modern drama, which is really good and very comfortable to watch. It has been recommended many times on the home page, but every time I see the name, I lose interest. I thought it was an AI novel + giving away seafood for free at the beginning, but the most annoying thing is the plot of giving away seafood for free without any foundation. I clicked on the first chapter out of boredom, only to realize that it was not an AI novel, so I decided to continue reading. Only then did I realize that the author had written this novel with great care, and the plot design was very clever. Whether it was the plot of the ancient sect or the modern plot, it was intertwined. The attitudes of the protagonist and heroine slowly change, not abruptly but smoothly. The author has interesting ideas, the integration is very smooth, and there are many interesting souls in the comment area. The most important thing is that the whole text does not feel like it was written by AI. [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

The writing is really good. I read it all in one go. The early writing was quite average, I can't say it was exciting or ugly, but by the time I got to about 60 chapters. . Where the old things are, I write regrets, and the past things are so cruel, I forgot to invite you, Wenquxing came to earth, I gave up my life, I have no words to say, it is great, it looks good, I will update it quickly.

It's quite good-looking, and the emotional lines are well written. There are candies and knives. It's not a traditional fairy tale. The realm of the male and female protagonists has never changed. In the middle, there is a plot where the male protagonist travels back to the ancient times and the female protagonist travels back to modern society. To be honest, it is a bit fragmented. For example, the heroine in the ancient times was very cute, but it was very uncomfortable when she suddenly switched back to the main heroine. They are completely like two people. Let's see how the author comes back. I will give it four stars first. The author will update soon

After reading it for a few days, I reached 150+ chapters, and I really like it. To be honest, the author has created the male and female protagonists very well, with distinct and natural personalities. He has accelerated the emotional line of the male and female protagonists through two time-travel stories. The overall look is not weird, and I personally think it is good. I hope this book will get better and better results (it is definitely not because I am worried that the author will run away if the results are not good!)

This is undoubtedly fat, and the book is really beautiful. Generally speaking, the character's mental journey is like that of a robot, completely inconsistent with normal thinking. This book is very satisfying, you can read it.

This book is quite good. I don't understand those who give negative reviews. The name and introduction of this novel tell you what kind of novel it is. If you don't like reading this type of novel, just don't read it in the first place. Why give it a negative review? I still hope the author can come to the end.