The Aloof Saintess Won't Say She Loves Me First

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A blood contract between a demon cultivator and a righteous saint began. On the way to find the release of the blood contract, the two fell into different world lines. The demon cultivator met the Wanfa Immortal Sect thousands of years ago and faced the catastrophe together. The saint came to the human world before the demon cultivator traveled through time and looked for a way to leave with the demon cultivator who had lost his memory (before the time travel). It connects three world lines from a familiar timeline, but it is not obtrusive and just right. The entanglement of fate always emerges faintly. It seems particularly beautiful at the moment, and the foreshadowing is very exciting.

It's also very interesting. There are some jokes and interactions in the book which are quite good [Like] For simple love, the pace is a bit slow. But as I watched, a new way of tuning (crossing out) to cultivate emotions came into my mind. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] These two small "worlds" opened are quite interesting. I feel like there could be two chapters, one in the old days and one in the modern era, describing the lives of the male and female protagonists who have not left the small "world" [Like] The updates are a little slow, but as long as you keep updating, you can still write a lot [smile] If there is a knife at the back, I will come back and add another star [smile]

Putting the quality of this work on a tomato scale, a score of 7 or more is definitely too low. Many works have a lot of poisonous points at the beginning, sometimes more than 8 points. This one is not too toxic, it only scores over 7 points, I don't know why. Of course, the previous plot is more fun-oriented, and the male protagonist is less poetic in his behavior, a bit like the roommate in the magic pill. But the Ten Thousand Fa Immortal Sect chapter is very good. The heroine doesn't say anything but acts like a cold coquettish person who brings the two of them closer together. It's great [licking the screen]. Out of 10 points, I would give 7 to 8 points for the previous chapter, and 15 points for the Ten Thousand Fa Immortal Sect chapter. The modern chapter hasn't been finished yet, so it feels like it's just so-so at the moment. It depends on where it goes from here. In short, the author does not need to rush to update, but he must do it quickly.

It looks good. It was pretty good at first, but then I strayed into the old times. I went, and it was amazing. The writing was much more interesting, and the image was completely established. It was as if someone else had written it. I am now looking forward to the follow-up. More to come. I love reading it.

It's worth reading - I originally just read it as a mindless fairy tale, but after reading it, I actually felt that it was quite good. The overall writing style is quite relaxed, and there are often some jokes in the article. As you read it, you will feel like another chapter has passed with laughter. The content of the cultivation of immortality is indeed slightly lacking, but if you think of this book as a pure love story with a template of cultivation of immortality, it is really not bad. Especially when the plot progresses, I can feel the changes of the heroine more intuitively, which makes me feel very comfortable. One of the biggest advantages of having a single heroine is that there is enough space to create a feeling for the heroine. The character creation of the heroine is really good. I have to say that the two secret realms are indeed well written, and the ability to mobilize emotions is indeed a blessing - of course, it may be because I haven't seen any details in it. The male protagonist's character and behavioral motivations are not satisfactory, and some plots have some minor problems due to lack of explanation, but overall they are acceptable. So far, there aren't any major flaws in the whole book - if you treat this book as a pure love story (although the pace will be a bit slow, there will be no actual progress until around Chapter 150). If you are in a book shortage or if you like this kind of work, I would recommend it. The rating of seven points seems a bit low. There is still a lot of room for subsequent plot development, just don't end it unfinished or cut it off in half. I believe in the author, come on [Sending Hearts] Everyone has different opinions. I just read this book, which is only the author's second. There may be some poisonous points in other people's eyes. However, considering the author's psychological endurance, why don't you just criticize it a little bit? I think the author still has a lot of room for improvement. Keep at it. Maybe one day in the future, you will be able to write novels and become a senior who can improve your life by writing books and be worthy of learning from the younger generations.

It's okay, I can see that the author is slowly making progress. It is essentially a romance light novel, and then it is covered with a layer of immortality. Anyone with a discerning eye can see it, and ignore the fake people who are looking for trouble (this kind of man-machine is the most popular on Tomato, such as the comment with the most likes). It's pretty good in Tomato, but I feel that the author is a bit avoiding the development of the main world view and the main plot, and has been using dungeons (although the dungeons are okay, and the look and feel are acceptable), and the fighting lacks the visual sense of cultivating immortals (however, it is covered with this layer of skin). I hope I can write better

To be honest, the first few dozen chapters were average, but when it came to the part where I traveled through time and returned to the Ten Thousand Fa Immortal Sect, it felt like I had changed people. It looked more beautiful to me, and the writing style felt much better. It is suitable for reading as a light love story. Subjectively speaking, it is definitely out of the industrial saccharine level. The emotional lines are very natural, and the male and female characters are also very three-dimensional and full. Hope to keep updating.

As a reader who has been digging for gold in foreign persimmons for a long time, I think my vision is still good (*≧∪≦)👌🏻. At present, the score of this book is low, but the quality of the content is definitely more than this score. The emotional description of the article is delicate, and the handling of emotional transformation can definitely be regarded as excellent. Compared with the sudden emotional changes in some online articles, the emotional origins seen in this work are all traceable. In addition, the double-wearing setting adopted by the author also made my eyes shine. As far as the current 173 chapters are concerned, you can read it with confidence👀[laughs]

I used to think that I had no desire to write romance novels, but after reading this book, I realized that maybe I just had a shallow knowledge. The beginning of the story actually didn't have much appeal. I, a remnant of the demon cultivator, was chased by the righteous saint. I accidentally hit and triggered the ancient formation. Since then, the demon cultivator and the saint were bound by a blood contract, and we had to go together to find a solution. In this way, the two of them stumbled all the way to the secret realm, obtained the hosta and ink sword, found the token, and opened the ancient ruins. Then came the Ten Thousand Fa Immortal Sect. The consciousness of the two people who opened the ruins came to the ancient Ten Thousand Fa Immortal Sect. They had the same appearance, the same name, and different identities. They were both disciples of the two peak masters of the Ten Thousand Fa Immortal Sect. In the pursuit of love by their masters, different emotions also arose in the hearts of the male and female protagonists. But after all, it was a big dream, and the hero and heroine who woke up found the solution to the blood contract, and the two of them became different. If I had to say, it's probably a touch sweet or slightly greasy, with a youthful bravery and youthful frivolity. It's a charming love fragrance. I think I will stick to watching it, thank the author for writing the story, and hope that more exciting plots will allow us to see more of the protagonists.