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Reader comments
The novel is not well written and has many flaws. First of all, the Japs machine gun has 6mm bullets instead of 7mm. The points given by the second system have not been used by the protagonist until Chapter 5. I don't even know what the points can do. There is no explanation in the novel. The third platoon leader asked him to fire three bullets to see how the hero's marksmanship was, but he was shot again in the army. Eight rounds were fired, and the Eighth Route Army was so short of ammunition that it was impossible for the male protagonist to fight like this. The four male protagonists and the platoon leader were initially surrounded by Japanese soldiers. The platoon leader asked the male protagonist to leave a grenade behind, but the male protagonist did not have a grenade at all.
The novel is not well written and has many flaws. First of all, the Japs machine gun has 6mm bullets instead of 7mm. The points given by the second system have not been used by the protagonist until Chapter 5. I don't even know what the points can do. There is no explanation in the novel. The third platoon leader asked him to fire three bullets to see how the hero's marksmanship was, but he was shot again in the army. Eight rounds were fired, and the Eighth Route Army was so short of ammunition that it was impossible for the male protagonist to fight like this. The four male protagonists and the platoon leader were initially surrounded by Japanese soldiers. The platoon leader asked the male protagonist to leave a grenade behind, but the male protagonist did not have a grenade at all.