F1: Take over a Down-And-Out Giant at the Start

The writing style is a bit immature and there are no structural errors or common sense errors. It feels like writing LOL for 13 years. It can be seen that the author has a relatively deep understanding of F1, and the overall content is relatively novel and reasonable. Expect!

Come on, big brother who writes F1, there are really too few of this type. Although I had psychological expectations and felt that this was not a cool article, it was still a little bit weird to do this in the latest chapter after having a system. It was true that there was a lack of time, but there was no description between the lines of the protagonist seizing the time to run the simulator to clear the rain and fight proficiency. Basically, it was all based on the rewards from the competition. It's easy to improve your rain fighting ability, it depends on the author if you want to. But the author chooses to suppress the first move here simply to highlight his rapid progress later, and to suppress the first move before he wants to advance. But to be honest, I can press it, but I don't think it's necessary to press it so hard. It's true that I can understand it, but it's also true that it doesn't feel very good. The main reason for reading a novel is to make you feel happy. Another point is that the seven books didn't have this kind of plot, but you did it in Tomato, which was a little bit unsettling. A three-star supplementary review, because I really have no interest in this kind of plot and even hate it, but what you wrote before is indeed pretty good, and two stars is not enough. That's it, I can only say that I hope you write better and better.

A very good new article: pure talent as the main course, supplemented by system shortcomings, supplemented by a small amount of news forum barrages, outsider's perspective, paddock intrigue, paddock childish children and other desserts... This writing is very reasonable, and there is currently no meal replacement.

It's rare to find a good FI racing novel on this site, it's very good. To be honest, writing it touched my heart, and I always felt itchy after reading the updates every night. Worth recommending, cheers for the author✊

The writing is good, but is the tire changing data of F2 asked by AI? I don't watch F2 that much but I have watched a few games from 2024. Basically, it takes about six seconds, and there are three-second tire changes in the book. In F1, it would take three people to change a tire after changing the tire size to 18 inches. In F2, where only one person is responsible for one tire, it is basically impossible to change it in five seconds.

It is a rare F1 article. It can be seen that the author is a relatively senior F1 fan, and some professional terminology is not a big problem. Some AI traces can be seen, but they are within an acceptable range. The shortcomings are that the protagonist is too smooth, I hope it won't be written as a cool novel, and the personalities of each driver are a bit strange, such as Lando, who is actually not such a fun-loving person, and Pan Zi, who is described as an unhuman and cold-blooded machine in the article, but in fact Pan Zi is also a very gentle person in private, and talks a lot with the drivers, and he also has the attributes of a fun-loving person. I hope the author can make some changes and add a female protagonist [laughing]

There is no fast pace like joining Red Bull, Mercedes or Ferrari right from the start, but a more realistic starting point from the career of an ordinary driver. Although there is a system, it is not as outstanding as other novels. The protagonist still catches up from the basics bit by bit, but there are more interesting things in the pursuit than other novels. Overall, this is a relatively realistic article, but the realistic descriptions are also very interesting, and the storyline is also good. It is considered a top-notch article in the F1 genre.

Although there is some AI flavor at the beginning, it disappears later on and the language is humorous, allowing people to understand the lives of the players behind the scenes. In addition, the wheel-to-wheel personal attack and defense in this book are very detailed, as if you are actually on the scene. Highly recommended

From what I've seen so far, the protagonist's character is quite cute, and I really like this kind of person who is talented but works harder. I hope it won't crash in the future, and the author will update it soon! Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this! ! ! !

It's really a rare F1-themed novel, but even people who don't know much about this sport can read it and like it very much. The protagonist really became famous at a young age. He is a genius, smart and hard-working. The career line is well written. Although there are losses and wins, it is still very exciting. I can see that the protagonist is growing and getting better. Moreover, the friendship lines between teammates and opponents are also well written. They compete with each other but cherish each other. It is a bit like a real-life fairy tale. There is nothing to worry about, but it is good. I hope the author can keep updating and come to the time when the protagonist truly dominates the game as soon as possible.

I have read more than 50 chapters so far, and there are no poisonous points in my opinion. There are no emotional disputes outside the paddock. The protagonist's character is also very good and he grows up through his own efforts. The relationship between the drivers is also very interesting, especially the Lego trip to Miami. Of course, no one understands the relationship between 3363 and 3363. [Laughing evilly] Wow, in more than sixty chapters, I saw someone bribing and trying to harm the protagonist. The supporting character did not calm down and reported directly. There was no victimization of the protagonist or a slap in the face. [Blowing kiss]

I haven't read F1 and came across this book by chance. It's very well written. It would be better if you could write some basic knowledge about the game. (It's not a good idea to search for yourself if you don't understand, but sometimes I want to read the plot behind it and don't want to interrupt the rhythm of reading. I want to search for it later and then forget it.)

Although the author is not very good at describing the character of the protagonist and the daily life of other drivers, as far as racing is concerned, it is definitely a masterpiece and deserves 5 stars, let alone winning or not. The opponent is Verstappen in 23 years.

I like it very much. The protagonist is written with flesh and blood, and at the same time there is a sense of contrast.

In fact, there is no need to be so deliberate in the comments made by netizens. In points-based competitions, few people mind saying that a certain driver cannot compete in the rain. At most, it's a pity that it still has shortcomings. Well, well written!

It's really rare for F1 to be written so smoothly. I recommend everyone to take a look. I hope the author can update it stably. Small suggestion: Domestic and foreign commentaries can be given more to make the viewing experience more enjoyable.

The protagonist is not very powerful from the beginning The system is not very useful, it is just an ability to display numerical values. You can see that the protagonist realizes it by himself and strives to improve it. Some of the regrets include the Chinese driver's first domestic podium, which was shocking to watch. There should be some jokes in the paddock. The protagonist gives each driver a distinct personality and intersperses interesting clips between each grand prix. It does not make people feel repetitive. It is very strong in F1 fan fiction.

It's very beautiful. The interaction between the characters is much better. It's much better than the book next door that writes about inner activities every day and has long and difficult sentences. It's rare that Tomato F1 doesn't write about Korean entertainment, it's very good, keep it up!

Although it is a system novel, there is no such vulgar reward mechanism. Everything about the protagonist is learned through hard work. The system only acts as a progress bar. Compared with those verbal novels that reward 100 million at every turn, this book is definitely interesting and in-depth. As readers, you can see the changes in the protagonist's personality, skills and habits. This is exactly what many online articles cannot write. Here, the growth of the protagonist is no longer just a number jumping on the system. It is a very good article and must be taken seriously.

Marvelous! 🍅Rare F1 novel The writing is delicate and the plot is reasonable. Come on, author! 10 Updates every day [Like]

It's beyond imagination. I'm glad I clicked on it instead of missing this novel because I'm not familiar with racing. The author's description of the characters' psychology is very realistic and delicate. The content related to racing will not be affected by lack of understanding, and you can quickly understand what the author wants to express. The distribution of daily, training and competition content is very reasonable, and the reading rhythm is very comfortable.

The content is rich and the plug-ins are reasonable. As an F1 fan, I enjoyed it! ! ! ! !

Is the order of the races at the Red Bull Ring wrong? Because the complete sprint weekend should be training session-sprint qualifying-sprint race-main race qualifying-race, and then it is written as sprint race and then directly to the main race. I don't know if I accidentally wrote it wrong or how, but other places are still very good.

There are not many F1 racing articles at the beginning, which is strange

So far, I like it better. I just want to explain a situation to the author, that is, the system is more about giving readers a way to understand the protagonist's growth progress, rather than a plug-in that makes the entire article unbalanced.

To be honest, Tomato writes very little about racing topics. I feel like the protagonist is introverted and doesn't know how to communicate and will be nervous when there are people around. First of all, I want to ask why I feel nervous. Is it caused by lack of confidence? The protagonist has won the championship and it shouldn't be. There are too many casual games.

The best F1 novel I have read, author, come on

Slow-burning, genius, it feels like raising a child. It seems to be very good so far, and the update speed is relatively stable. Highly recommended.

Objectively speaking, the writing is very good. Although the writing was a bit weak in the early stages, it really improved in the later stages. The only thing I want to complain about is that for a rough guy like me, the writing is too formal [laughing awkwardly] Overall I can give it a 4.5, Come on.

The writing is very beautiful, without relying too much on the system. After the protagonist has tempered himself, the system helps to correct it little by little. Very good, not a brainless article