Tycoon: The System Forces Me to Become the Big Brother

Real review: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ So far I have read 282 chapters, and I have read about 500 chapters. ——Many female protagonists, weak system. ①Writing style: The pace is fast and refreshing, and the program effect is very effective. It is neither tiring nor frustrating to watch. ②Protagonist: His subordinates have huge power, and each of the core team can stand alone; the pattern is not limited to one city or one place, but has influence at the global level; he acts decisively and exerts strong pressure. ③Plot: The foreshadowing is reasonable, link by link. It's not like in reality which industry is difficult to work in, or which industry is high-end; the plot focuses on eating, drinking and having fun - the system takes care of the details and the team executes it; there is no such thing as the protagonist has to take action in all big and small matters. ④Character relationships: handled just right. There are thousands of people with thousands of faces, and not everyone will submit as soon as they meet. The villain appears and exits very neatly. Watching the villain is just fun. When it is time to exit, it is crisp and neat, without any sloppiness.

The writing is pretty good, but the fun points are not too outstanding. I feel that the main plot is similar to that of Yu Heng Wang, but it is not as exciting as Yu Heng Wang wrote, and Yu Heng is not as curious as Yu Heng. You can rewrite a main plot that makes readers interested, so that it will be interesting. The main plot of writing so much is to solve the problem for the protagonist, to show off his swords and guns, or to make the protagonist's reputation more solid. However, this kind of main plot is not very satisfying and looks a bit boring. It may be better to focus on one direction.

Hey, the author writes very well. Is this really his first time writing a book? He writes better than some million-word authors. However, some of the plots are a bit strange. Two things obviously happened on the same day, but the author always likes to write it as if it happened yesterday. There are also some people who are crying one second and laughing directly the next. There is not much poison. If the author is really writing a book for the first time, I feel there are no shortcomings at all. It is better than some million-word authors.

Is the author the author of the knife, gun and cannon system?

The writing is good, and the humor has a bit of joy. To be honest, there are very few books that I keep up with. This book makes me feel sick if I don't read it for a day. I punish you by updating 2,000 chapters. There are few bad points. I hope I can continue to keep the pace!!! Come on

I have caught up with the big army. To be honest, as far as this novel is concerned, the author's writing style has been improved with the naked eye. The first 50 or even 60 pictures are not immersed in it at all, giving me a feeling of a third perspective. But after more than 90 chapters, it becomes more and more beautiful. Originally, the system rewards were not displayed in the early stage, which looked very fragmented and uncomfortable, and even the foreshadowing was not clear, but as you go back and see that there is no system, it becomes particularly smooth, which is great!!!

It's so cool, it's serious, logical, and the writing is cool. The system has a weak sense of existence, but God's will does exist. He quietly plays deus ex machina for you, a lot of brothers who are loyal and strengthened, uncles and grandfathers in different positions, technology companies that are leading the world, female protagonists with various styles, and a prophet male protagonist who has been reborn. All the cool points are there, and the protagonist is still on the path of a giant enterprise in the manufacturing, high-tech, and financial industries. Line, can divide cakes, make cakes, directly start from the 24th heaven to attract people to eat, directly rely on loyal brothers to occupy countries abroad, and collude with Commissioner Smith to buy beautiful weapons. Wow, it is really a fun setting to watch, and the plot is also so exciting. To put it bluntly, this is a modern urban novel that all the fun stories in this episode are set to be dazzling, and the writing is quite bold, and it is really beautiful. Unfortunately, the number of words is too few, and the ending is estimated to be a million words, which is not enough to read. In the end, the overall evaluation is top-to-bottom. I don't care about the disadvantages. I still want to watch it. It's definitely not a favor. Just watch it quickly.

After reading it for a while, I felt happy writing it, but not happy watching it. I have always wondered why this happened, but now I suddenly understood: there is less dialogue. If you look at the four major classics, they are almost all about a certain doctrine, but the characters are very vivid and it is very enjoyable to read. On the contrary, although this book has a lot of meat and benefits, it is almost all described by narration, which always gives people a very stripped-down feeling and is difficult to take in. This was also my problem before, but unfortunately it's easier said than done... Therefore, in order to be enjoyable to watch, the protagonist cannot be like a mute. Everything must be written by the author's pen and he must speak for himself. Sure enough: after reading the book a hundred times, its meaning will appear by itself.

Okay, thank you. Sorry to trouble you. I'm sorry. I've been busy. I didn't look at my phone. Sorry, I've been busy. I didn't look at my phone. Sorry. I've been busy. I didn't look at my phone. Sorry. I've been busy. I didn't look at my phone.

It's okay. The biggest problem is the length of the plot flow. The plot that should be a classic plot or a fun plot based on the situation is not continued, but there are a few more character plots that should be mentioned in one stroke.