Villain: The Male Lead I'm Bullying Is a Woman?

Soul Transmigration keeps mentioning the original body...

I was wondering what would happen to the male protagonist that day when he found out that he had been fucking Xiao Nanliang. After all, the previous system determined that this person was the male protagonist😏 And what would happen if the system ran away and the protagonist removed the gender patch on Xiao Nanliang?

The subject matter is very good, and the first page attracted me directly. But it just felt a little too fast, without much foreshadowing, giving people an inexplicable and abrupt feeling.

Although it is written about a woman disguised as a man, it is written as if it were a girl. It looks very curious, and it is not difficult to guess the author's curiosity.

The thunderous beginning left me like an eagle. The plot is okay, not clichéd, and the author is quite honest. He doesn't make up anything he can't think of, and just explains it in a few words (it's just what it says, don't ask how it came about). The plot could use more details and improve the logic. There is a lot of room for improvement.

The author's writing style needs to be improved. I feel that the average IQ is low. The heroine can't fight well, but she is stupid if she wants someone else to wipe her butt. The protagonist and sister also expose you to danger and you still agree with her actions. And isn't the heroine practicing martial arts? She is no longer an ordinary person. Her skin will swell when she is scratched by a tree branch. She is a bit too delicate. Moreover, it takes half an hour for the male protagonist to run 3 kilometers so hard, which is a bit outrageous. Isn't this the average level for ordinary people?

As long as it doesn't end badly, it's definitely a good book. It's sweet, refreshing and not brainless. I really like the heroine's character 😘. It's a type that arouses people's desire for protection. Come on, the author, teacher, can cure the bad ending.

It's just a test of writing, there's no need for so many requirements. If a newcomer is not good at writing, don't be so malicious. Just put forward your opinions. The author is just a little girl in high school. It's normal for her writing to be immature.

The smell of AI is really too strong, but this is not a problem with AI. It's because I didn't review the book at all after I transferred it with AI. The settings in it kept kicking the ball. I don't understand that the author wants to make a living in writing books and wants to use AI to take shortcuts. He must really want to write a book. I suggest the author I read it over from the beginning and corrected the deformed places first. After talking about the second secret realm, I just mentioned the ability of An Jin and below, and then directly overturned this setting. Isn't this ridiculous? Brother, are you here to write the story you want to write or are you using AI to take shortcuts and make money?

It's quite beautiful, and I finally found gold in 💩. It seems that the single female protagonist has no choice but to run away. Another point is what role does the male protagonist's sister play? 😄