Reborn at Fifteen: I Found a Sweet, Innocent Streamer Girlfriend

After watching it for a few hours, I feel that there are no major problems and the plot is attractive. The female protagonist is very cute, and the male protagonist is a pet type, but the number of words is a bit short and not enough to read. I like to watch this kind of sweet love story with a bit of commercialism. If it is just a simple show of sugar, it would be too boring and I need some external plot to sublimate it. 👍

Well, yes, the female protagonist is very cute, and the male protagonist is also a human being. As for my friend, his heart ached unconsciously when he saw this thing, especially after seeing the interaction between the male and female protagonists. In fact, I don't think he is envious or anything, it's just that it is immoral for me to have sex with each other like them in public. I feel pity for him too, I can't find such a little pet😎😎

The author has some sincere suggestions. First, if you want to write about someone being mocked and slapped in the face several times, you must have a sense of satisfaction. For example, the class leader said earlier that he could ask someone to take a photo with him, and then the interview could be more enjoyable, for example, let the whole class see that it was just him who had nothing to do with him, but he went to strike up a conversation with others but ignored him. And after reporting for the sports meeting later, you can let the protagonist respond. Or let him prove that he is not disgusting people all the time, and then he does not receive positive and satisfying revenge. The second picture of her mother cutting her wrists is really bad writing. After reading it, I felt instantly uncomfortable. I have always had a negative attitude towards the image of the heroine. You can say he is negative, but if you say he cut his wrists, you can read the feedback in the comment area. And in addition to that, the same goes for the boss. Don't keep arranging this kind of pretentious slap in the face, but there is no satisfying reply. It's fine if you just write about your feelings obediently, but if you want to write this kind of pretentious plot, you must think about how to feel happy. Rather than integrating this pleasure into the relationship between the male and female protagonists, because the relationship itself is considered sweet by everyone, it actually doesn't feel good at all if you add it to the relationship. I couldn't watch the rest of it because you kept arranging such provocative and slap-in-the-face plots. I don't have any thoughts of criticizing you. I feel that your emotional scenes, your story line and your language are very well written. But to be honest, this kind of slap-in-the-face plot is not suitable for you. You can consider less arrangements and a quick ending, and the ending must be enjoyable. Because the provocative plot you arranged is actually logically lacking, I feel that it still lacks some support, so your ending can be too logical, just a little more refreshing.

So far, it seems to be a good, non-toxic, sweet daily novel. However, the part where the heroine gets her wrists cut off by an Internet bully is a bit abrupt. It can also be seen that it is to pave the way for a relationship with the hero. It has no big impact. In the future, it is best for the hero to confirm the relationship with the heroine openly and early, and then lead the heroine to start a career.

It's pretty good, but the relationship between the owner and the cat is a little tense 🤦

It can be easily seen that the author is a little chef (

Total 10 points, 3 points for curiosity, 5 points for sweetness, 2 points for classic plot, and the pace is too slow, because there is an element of curiosity in it, it feels like it will take a long time to become a boyfriend and girlfriend. If it takes too long, it will be counterproductive.

The book is still very sweet, and the plot progression is quite reasonable, but the female protagonist is a bit sick, and the male protagonist feels suffocated. The evaluation is to sit at the same table with Brother Cat.

It's awesome. Although it's relatively straightforward, it just makes people feel like it's real daily life. The plot is not that ups and downs, but it is eye-catching enough, because daily life does not have too many bells and whistles. Finally, come on, author, I think you are still awesome.

Not a bad little sweet article, the author should write less about self-media! Just write about entrepreneurship and feelings. It's a bit redundant to write about self-media. It's okay to do it occasionally. When will the male and female protagonists be able to confirm their relationship? Be clear about it. Come on, author. @ If you write sweet articles, write sweet ones for me!!