Group portrait + heroine + time travel + no CP + cool article
In the Yue Dynasty, a 996 office worker, after working overtime for 4 consecutive days, encountered his long-distance boyfriend cheating on him, and passed out on the spot.
She originally thought her life would end here, but in the end she transformed into the little beggar she had read in Long Aotian's novel "A Sword at the Beginning: Counterattack on the Immortal World", who was "saved" by the hero at the beginning.
Yes, that's the cannon fodder passerby who was saved by Long Aotian in the first chapter and received a box lunch because of an "accident" in the third chapter.
Yue Chao:? ? ?
She stared at the handsome face in front of her, wondering if she should say it or not. This is Long Aotian, the male protagonist of the original book, a light of righteousness, unrivaled in chivalry - and a sinister and cunning hypocrite who kills people and seizes treasures.
Yue Chao decided that since she was here, she would never let Long Aotian have an easy time.
The "hero saves the beauty" and the "genius rises", get rid of them all! She wants to expose his true identity and rewrite this bloody script!
But - why is her talent so ridiculously strong? When testing the spiritual roots, it was clear that he had a useless physique, but as a result, he was able to practice at a frightening speed, and he was omnipotent in talismans, alchemy, swordsmanship, and formations.
Why did her senior brothers and sisters become more and more outrageous after she joined the Tianyan Sect? The third senior sister is a cold-blooded alchemy madman, the second senior brother is a gossip, the fourth senior brother is mindless and brags about his junior sister, and the eldest brother is cold-faced and protects her shortcomings.
Why did the silver dragon cub that I picked up at random burst into tears when I saw her?
Yue Chao: She just wants to expose Long Aotian quietly and practice to become stronger. Why are there so many teammates cheating on her way to immortality!
No male protagonist! No emotional line! The heroine focuses on her career! The group portrait is funny and immortal!
Reader comments
OK, you guys have also chosen this one among a lot of new books, so let's review it directly [Note]
The early rhythm of this book is more towards the daily and relaxed type, and each person's image is different. The senior brother seems to be difficult to get along with, but he will silently care about his junior brothers and sisters, and he will accurately point out the reasons when Yue Chao is confused. The second senior brother is a person who likes to gossip and talkative. The third senior sister is the kind of person who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. His ears turn red with a word of thanks or praise, and he will encourage Yue Chao when he is frustrated (although the way of encouragement is very niche). One of my favorite characters in the whole book is the fourth senior brother Lin Xiaoman, who is like a golden retriever. He is very enthusiastic, lively, and unconditionally supports the junior sister. Well, even though he admires Long Aotian very much, he will always say that he will always stand by On Yue Chao's side, he is not like other people who don't show their concern for Yue Chao openly or just care about Yue Chao silently. He expresses all his love for Yue Chao directly in the open (he does not mean to say anything bad about others). Other senior brothers and sisters are also very good to Yue Chao. Even if they know that Yue Chao deliberately hides his strength, they will not interfere when they see that Yue Chao has no intention of showing it. The sect is full of love!
Looking at it now, the heroine's upgrade is not very easy, it is not the kind of brainless upgrade. She will also experience caring too much, which makes her whole person in a state of impatience and can't calm down. Everyone will experience this, and after experiencing these, she figured it out, and then she improved her cultivation. Now it seems that it is not brainless. Although the heroine has a lot of She has unparalleled qualifications, but her alchemy was not achieved in one go (but that doesn't mean she didn't hide it), and her swordsmanship was also improved under the guidance of her senior brother and her own continuous practice. The same is true for the talisman. From only a success rate of 3% to a success rate of 50%, she actually experienced the feeling of failure in the middle. She actually has a process of continuous improvement.
However, I personally feel that the previous life was mentioned a bit frequently in the first few chapters (of course, if she later said that she would completely integrate herself into this world, just think I didn't say it) and I think that when the heroine encounters a bottleneck, there should be less guidance. I think having someone to provide guidance is faster than finding the problem by yourself, but I would rather I hope that the heroine can discover the problem by herself, and then continue to grow, and there can be guidance, but what I hope more is that she can find the source of the problem when she encounters a bottleneck, and then think about the process by herself, like for example, you can let her go to the Ten Thousand Beast Forest or take on some tasks that are similar to her own strength, so that she can break through herself in the process.
And then I saw that the author's previous book was discontinued💔 I hope the author can stick to writing this book. I still think it's okay if the characters are well-shaped, yes.
(OK, since this is my first time writing a long review, well, I'm not very good at writing, so I'll just read it)
Now that I'm reading Chapter 30, let's take a look at what happens next [Thinking]
Hmm. . . The author is updating...
Strong writing skills and full visual sense, highly recommended
I haven't seen such a good novel in a long time.
A very interesting novel, the more I read it, the more I like it.
It's a nice novel, I like it very much.
The plot is novel, the rhythm is tight and the ups and downs are ups and downs, and it's beautiful to watch.
OK, you guys have also chosen this one among a lot of new books, so let's review it directly [Note] The early rhythm of this book is more towards the daily and relaxed type, and each person's image is different. The senior brother seems to be difficult to get along with, but he will silently care about his junior brothers and sisters, and he will accurately point out the reasons when Yue Chao is confused. The second senior brother is a person who likes to gossip and talkative. The third senior sister is the kind of person who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. His ears turn red with a word of thanks or praise, and he will encourage Yue Chao when he is frustrated (although the way of encouragement is very niche). One of my favorite characters in the whole book is the fourth senior brother Lin Xiaoman, who is like a golden retriever. He is very enthusiastic, lively, and unconditionally supports the junior sister. Well, even though he admires Long Aotian very much, he will always say that he will always stand by On Yue Chao's side, he is not like other people who don't show their concern for Yue Chao openly or just care about Yue Chao silently. He expresses all his love for Yue Chao directly in the open (he does not mean to say anything bad about others). Other senior brothers and sisters are also very good to Yue Chao. Even if they know that Yue Chao deliberately hides his strength, they will not interfere when they see that Yue Chao has no intention of showing it. The sect is full of love! Looking at it now, the heroine's upgrade is not very easy, it is not the kind of brainless upgrade. She will also experience caring too much, which makes her whole person in a state of impatience and can't calm down. Everyone will experience this, and after experiencing these, she figured it out, and then she improved her cultivation. Now it seems that it is not brainless. Although the heroine has a lot of She has unparalleled qualifications, but her alchemy was not achieved in one go (but that doesn't mean she didn't hide it), and her swordsmanship was also improved under the guidance of her senior brother and her own continuous practice. The same is true for the talisman. From only a success rate of 3% to a success rate of 50%, she actually experienced the feeling of failure in the middle. She actually has a process of continuous improvement. However, I personally feel that the previous life was mentioned a bit frequently in the first few chapters (of course, if she later said that she would completely integrate herself into this world, just think I didn't say it) and I think that when the heroine encounters a bottleneck, there should be less guidance. I think having someone to provide guidance is faster than finding the problem by yourself, but I would rather I hope that the heroine can discover the problem by herself, and then continue to grow, and there can be guidance, but what I hope more is that she can find the source of the problem when she encounters a bottleneck, and then think about the process by herself, like for example, you can let her go to the Ten Thousand Beast Forest or take on some tasks that are similar to her own strength, so that she can break through herself in the process. And then I saw that the author's previous book was discontinued💔 I hope the author can stick to writing this book. I still think it's okay if the characters are well-shaped, yes. (OK, since this is my first time writing a long review, well, I'm not very good at writing, so I'll just read it) Now that I'm reading Chapter 30, let's take a look at what happens next [Thinking] Hmm. . . The author is updating...
Strong writing skills and full visual sense, highly recommended
I haven't seen such a good novel in a long time.
A very interesting novel, the more I read it, the more I like it.
It's a nice novel, I like it very much.
The plot is novel, the rhythm is tight and the ups and downs are ups and downs, and it's beautiful to watch.