My Youth Romantic Comedy Is Wrong, as I Expected: Warmth

First of all, I was attracted by the beautiful cover. With the participation of the protagonist, most of the current plot events are handled in a relatively gentle way, giving people a very gentle feeling. The writing style is very comfortable and interesting, and Yatsutsudang said it was very enjoyable. Finally, I stayed up late last night to catch up, but the doctor ordered me to confiscate all my electronic devices if I stay up late again. Author, what do you owe me in return?

It's a pretty good Harmono fanfic, especially the fact that it doesn't remove the original partner. It's so eye-catching. It's much better than the Stallion protagonist and the fanfic that directly deleted the big teacher. I give it a thumbs up. However, I would like to give you a suggestion. The pace is a bit too fast and the daily descriptions are too brief. Because I just finished reading the original novel, I remember some plots more clearly. Others The same cannot be said for other readers. Many of the daily descriptions and dialogues in the original work have been omitted by the author, and the psychological dialogue of the great teacher is also much less. As a result, some daily relaxed feelings are much less, the sense of waste is also a bit worse, and the pace is a bit fast. In less than 50 chapters, four books for the main story have been written. Anyway, keep going, the future is promising.

I think the protagonist basically solved the major events in the original work alone. For example, the first conflict between Hachiman and Yuigahama, and the problem of studying in the United States, were all solved by the protagonist with words. The conflict between Hachiman and Yuigahama will definitely happen, because Hachiman has hated gentle girls from the beginning. He thinks that Yubi may be friends with him out of guilt. He hates this kind of gentleness, so he will definitely have a conflict with Yuigahama. There is also the problem of Rumi. Hachiman chose to destroy their group so that Rumi would no longer be a person. But later, when Hachiman met Rumi again, he realized that she was still a person. Hachiman realized that he could not beg anyone with his previous methods, so he regretted it, and wanted to find the real thing, and asked Yukinoshita and Yuigahama for help. Only with these problems and contradictions can Hachiman grow up, and the protagonists have been solved, and Hachiman will only be a person who thinks in his own awkward way. Sorry for talking a lot of nonsense. I hope you can write better as you write.

Reply to a recent book review: Reading experience is very subjective. If the story does not meet the love of this book lover, it is understandable to give such an evaluation. However, I would like to briefly explain my thoughts on the points in the article. I don't think this game has a character breakdown. In my understanding, this is a completely independent IF parallel line. Changes in the environment will make the characters make different choices. The deviation of the plot route does not mean that the core of the character has been rewritten. Take the case of studying in the United States in Chiba Prefecture as an example: the original character in the book did briefly propose a compromise idea of ​​looking down on the opinions of others, but the end of the story still overturned the false collective, allowing Liu Mei to confess his inner thoughts, and did not choose to always wear a mask to get along. The book review intercepted fragments of the process to use as evidence, and did not fully present the direction of the whole thing. In the original work, Hachiman's personality charm is displayed in the pain of constant self-depletion and mutual pulling. This fanfic sets the tone of "warmth". I hope to explore another possibility: is there a path that can minimize the harm to each other. I am not denying the narrative logic of the original work. But in this parallel world, I try to imagine that when Yukino and Haruno notice Hachiman, they may not have to rely on self-sacrificial self-destruction. Maybe there are gentler ways to bring each other closer. This is also my original intention of writing this story. Every reader has the freedom to choose whether he likes this IF line or not. Even so, I still welcome all spring lovers who understand the original work to take a look at this different path.

It is a fan novel that is very friendly to readers who have read the original work. It generally follows the plot (laughs), and the protagonist also has a certain sense of existence. In the Zaimokuza chapter, a light novel writer setting was suddenly added. Later, he did not choose to use the writer's setting to expand the world view (referring to turning it into a comprehensive comic). Instead, it was used to introduce Isshiki (a bit like adding an OC setting), which is relatively novel. To be honest, the design of adding the original male lead is a bit unclear. Maybe it represents the author's sustenance? (I can't see how the addition of this character will help the plot) What's worth complaining about is that it's not clear why the main characters (especially Yukinoshita) have an inexplicable initial favorable impression of the protagonist, but it's quite comfortable to watch the plot this way. In the middle, the title of the protagonist suddenly changes from Kurono to Tomowa, and Hikigaya and Hachiman even cross-appear. This is to show that Hikigaya and Hikigaya can call each other by their first names, but this is not friendly to readers and makes them a bit confused. Finally, the heroine (Isshiki) has very few scenes, although I still support the one who wrote the heroine Isshiki...

Except for the lack of Isshiki's plot, everything else is fine. Yuigahama Yui is indeed the most troublesome one. She doesn't need the "real thing" because she is originally a member of the group. She is beautiful, gentle, and has many suitors. It is really difficult to write Yuigahama's CP, or it is unnecessary. I think it is well written, five stars 😘!

From the time I clicked in three days ago to now. This book is the most comforting spring novel I have ever read. Unlike other Harmono fans, there is a feeling of excessive self-awareness.

It can be seen that this article is incompatible with ordinary tomato novels. The author should have a deep understanding of the original work and try his best to restore it and create his own. However, this is also the reason why the reviews are few and far between but basically all have five stars. ... The author may be a novice, and compared with the original work, it just adds a patch here and there. He doesn't seem to be able to let go. There's nothing wrong with staying true to the original. But it can't be too original. It seems like the original work has been reprinted. Four stars encouragement

The addition of the male protagonist makes all the psychological conflicts of the great teacher disappear in the early stage, making the daily life of the waiting department more warm, and the character design is basically non-ooc and looks good.

Except for the fact that the heroine's presence is too low, all other aspects are quite well written.