Wang Chen, a man who was unhappy in life, accidentally entered the eighth universe, Tianyuan Universe. He joined a small sect here, and everyone in the sect took good care of him, making him feel like home. However, fate seemed not to let him go, and he lost everything again. Since then, he has tried his best to recover everything, and gradually discovered the secret of the ninth universe's spirit prison universe!
Reader comments
I wrote it myself, and after listening to it again, it's great, [face covering]
I have to praise myself no matter what, it's not in vain that I've worked so hard to code.
The storyline is pretty good, it's not a mindless novel, it's not too exaggerated, it's not a harem novel, it's not a fast food novel, it's not a joke novel.
Serious fantasy ideas.
This book is very good. From a macro perspective, the structure of Jiuchongtian is very reasonable. The author's ideas are very clear, the whole plot is smooth and reasonable, with ups and downs and endless exciting plots. It is very worth reading.
I rarely write reviews when I read books. I came across this book by chance today and read more than a dozen chapters. This is the cleanest opening chapter I have ever read. Write your own opinion on this.
I don't know why, but the author puts the prologue after the third chapter.
The author did not rush to throw out complicated settings at the beginning of the chapter, but first used a delicate style of writing to describe the "paradise" of Xiaoyao Sect. From the "Flower Valley Pond" in the back mountain to the simplicity and vitality of the Lecture Pavilion, to the laughter and playfulness of the senior brothers and sisters during the night barbecue, this paragraph of writing is full of the romance and warmth of classical fairy tales. This warm written description not only gives readers a stronger sense of involvement with the protagonist Wang Chen, but also makes this small Xiaoyao Sect an emotional anchor in the readers' hearts.
However, when the prologue opens, the grand mist first opens, chaos first appears, the chaotic green lotus blooms, and there is also the chaos shaking stick and the chaos source spirit. With a twist of the author's pen, the readers who are still addicted to the small sects are instantly brought down to the grand world view of the nine-dimensional space and universe. This progressive history of the evolution of the universe (Hongmeng - Chaos - Prehistoric - Origin Spirit - Ancient Times - Ancient Blue - Galaxy - Tianyuan - and the unknown ninth universe) is not only logically self-consistent, but also full of the weight of Eastern mythology. In particular, the multi-dimensional setting of "the same star position, nine-dimensional space and universe" explains the coexistence of nine-dimensional space and universe, and also foreshadows the protagonist Wang Chen's later adventure across latitudes.
The creation of the protagonist Wang Chen is a typical successful example of "anti-routine". He is not Long Aotian in the traditional sense, but an ordinary person with the memory of the earth's social animals and anxiety about survival. Faced with the sudden time travel and the cruel world of immortality, he did not become blindly arrogant, but chose the most pragmatic survival strategy - pretending to have amnesia, hugging his thighs, and practicing basic skills hard.
His tenacity in collecting herbs while carrying three thousand kilograms of boulders on his back in the mountains, his skillful life skills while barbecuing, and his calm empathy when he heard the secrets of the sect all made this character appear flesh and blood. He has both the rational thinking of modern people (such as an instant understanding of the multi-dimensional universe) and the background of traditional Chinese chivalry (such as repaying kindness and valuing love and justice). This "mortal glimmer" quality makes him appear more real and moving when facing the magnificent epic journey in the future.
At the same time, the depiction of group portraits of the Xiaoyao Sect is also a highlight. Whether it is the protective and affectionate patriarch Xie Junhao, the cold-hearted Mu Qingshuang, or the fighting madman Qiao Lin'er, each character has a distinct memory point. In particular, the tragedy of the sect's destruction a hundred years ago, told through the mouth of the senior brother, not only gave the older generation characters a deep tragic color, but also made the bond between Wang Chen and this new family even deeper - this is not only a place of cultivation, but also the last harbor for this group of "poor people" to warm each other.
In terms of rhythm control, the author has shown a very high level. From Wang Chen's shock after jumping off the cliff, to the funny scene of being carried flying by Xiao Qi; from the embarrassment and warmth of apprenticeship in the main hall, to the comfort of the barbecue party under the moon and the subsequent revelation of secrets. The entire story line flows smoothly, and the emotional transitions are natural and smooth.
Especially when dealing with the issue of "amount of information", the author does not use boring instruction-style indoctrination, but cleverly integrates it into dialogues and scenes. For example, Xiao Qi's mouth is used to popularize science and the realm of immortality, the campfire night talk is used to introduce the history of the sect, and the grand narration in the prologue sets the tone of the whole book. This "moisturizing and silent" processing method not only ensures the complete output of the settings, but also does not interrupt the flow of the story.
At the end, the senior brother proposed to take Wang Chen to the Warcraft Mountains tomorrow to practice. This plot arrangement was just right. It transforms the warm daily life accumulated before into the actual conflict that is about to break out, making readers moved and immediately full of expectations for the life and death fight in the next chapter.
To sum up, the opening chapter of this work is amazing. It successfully found the perfect balance between the warm daily life of "Farming Style" and the grand epic of "Primordial Style". The author uses delicate brushstrokes to outline a desirable Xiaoyao Sect, and uses his majestic imagination to construct a multiverse filled with dangers.
The story structure is grand and logically self-consistent, the plot rhythm is relaxed and moderate, and the world view is detailed and full. Integrating interstellar science fiction with exploration of the heavens, civilization changes, time and space folding, and law games are intertwined and parallel. It has the grand epic feeling of an interstellar expedition, as well as the suspense and mystery hidden in the depths of the dimension. It outlines the vast and vast picture of the universe word by word. The more you read, the more immersive you become. It is recommended for book lovers.
The author is very thoughtful, and the novel he wrote is both beautiful and humorous, and the writing is smooth. The story and character of the protagonist and supporting characters are more suitable for me. I read it again and again, and I like it very much. I recommend it to my friends.
The logic is clear, rigorous and reasonable, and the ideas are unique and worth savoring.
This is such an underrated book! Let me first praise the author's imagination, it is really big. Can you knead everything you can imagine? The further you look back, the more you feel like "the situation has opened up", and it's not boring at all. My favorite thing: the main character doesn't really fall in love. If there is no heroine, there really is no heroine. Even the ambiguity is pitiful, and there are no protracted emotional scenes. The heroine takes the lone wolf route, doing things neatly, a little cold-blooded but reasonable. It's very refreshing to watch. You don't have to worry about her suddenly falling in love and falling in love, which gives you a sense of security. As for the world view, it is not just an empty air to fool people. The setting is quite clear and the logic is online. It can be seen that the author's writing power is also improving as he writes. It is a little jerky at the beginning, but the characters and plot are much smoother at the end. The supporting characters like parchment and quill are actually a little cute and warm. The pacing is also okay, not too watery, it's fun where it should be, and there's a little twist where it should be foreshadowing. It reads smoothly, and I finished one chapter after another without realizing it.
All in all, I sincerely recommend this book, and I feel it is completely worthy of five stars. I even feel that the platform's upper limit of only five stars is a bit of a loss. If you want to read a book with a novel setting, a sober protagonist, and no love brain, this is the book for you!
After reading it, post it. First of all, you must give it a five-star review. Secondly, unlike the previous protagonists who cultivate immortality, the protagonist is not gifted, nor does he have special opportunities from the beginning, such as the grandfather in the ring. The protagonist's talent and bloodline are ordinary, but the protagonist is a genius who works hard. In addition, unlike most novels nowadays, the supporting characters are just to set off the protagonist's existence. The author must stick to it.
This book uses a rigorous and self-consistent nine-dimensional world view, a compact and reversal of the plot, and three-dimensional and vivid characters to create a hard-core and easy-to-read science fiction universe adventure. It is worth reading.
An opportunity arises in a tragic life, and the unlucky guy suddenly becomes the favorite of the group, thinking that the follow-up will be a warm emotional drama, but it is not the case, there is a reversal.
The plot is rich, the structure is rigorous, and it's beautiful to watch!
The plot has a tight rhythm, the protagonist goes through levels to explore the mysteries of space, and the upgrading counterattack line is refreshing and smooth. The settings of space laws and cross-domain adventures are novel and eye-catching, and the fantasy atmosphere is full of fantasy. The more you watch, the more you will get hooked. It is worth a look for those who like interstellar fantasy and space flow to cultivate immortality!
Don't be modest, I think you are awesome, keep shining🌟Listen well, I have been listening to it for a long time, the author is really awesome, the writing is great, the best, the best, the best👌🏻
It is indeed a breath of fresh air in the fantasy world. I was attracted immediately, but the number of words is a bit short, so you have to work hard!
The world view is grand and the setting of the nine-dimensional universe is novel. The plot has ups and downs, and the protagonist's counterattack is full of excitement. The writing is fluent and the emotions are delicate. It is not a brainless novel and is worth reading.
The beginning is interesting, all the tragic things happened to the protagonist, but Naihe: How can the long sky be inferior to me. Only by counterattack can you reach the top.
It's very well written, I like it so much, it's a book that I can read for a long time [laughs]
It's so brain-burning. I don't dare to jump a little because I'm afraid I won't be able to understand the back part. I admire the ingenuity.
Hahahaha, it's really good, I feel like I 😎 really like ancient style, especially this one, it feels like a monster
I watched it again in one go, and I still like the ancient themes [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]
For a novice author, from the article structure to the content, from the rhythm to the author's writing style, it is not easy to write to this level. I would like to give you five stars to encourage you. Looking forward to more exciting things to come.
I wrote it myself, and after listening to it again, it's great, [face covering] I have to praise myself no matter what, it's not in vain that I've worked so hard to code. The storyline is pretty good, it's not a mindless novel, it's not too exaggerated, it's not a harem novel, it's not a fast food novel, it's not a joke novel. Serious fantasy ideas.
This book is very good. From a macro perspective, the structure of Jiuchongtian is very reasonable. The author's ideas are very clear, the whole plot is smooth and reasonable, with ups and downs and endless exciting plots. It is very worth reading.
I rarely write reviews when I read books. I came across this book by chance today and read more than a dozen chapters. This is the cleanest opening chapter I have ever read. Write your own opinion on this. I don't know why, but the author puts the prologue after the third chapter. The author did not rush to throw out complicated settings at the beginning of the chapter, but first used a delicate style of writing to describe the "paradise" of Xiaoyao Sect. From the "Flower Valley Pond" in the back mountain to the simplicity and vitality of the Lecture Pavilion, to the laughter and playfulness of the senior brothers and sisters during the night barbecue, this paragraph of writing is full of the romance and warmth of classical fairy tales. This warm written description not only gives readers a stronger sense of involvement with the protagonist Wang Chen, but also makes this small Xiaoyao Sect an emotional anchor in the readers' hearts. However, when the prologue opens, the grand mist first opens, chaos first appears, the chaotic green lotus blooms, and there is also the chaos shaking stick and the chaos source spirit. With a twist of the author's pen, the readers who are still addicted to the small sects are instantly brought down to the grand world view of the nine-dimensional space and universe. This progressive history of the evolution of the universe (Hongmeng - Chaos - Prehistoric - Origin Spirit - Ancient Times - Ancient Blue - Galaxy - Tianyuan - and the unknown ninth universe) is not only logically self-consistent, but also full of the weight of Eastern mythology. In particular, the multi-dimensional setting of "the same star position, nine-dimensional space and universe" explains the coexistence of nine-dimensional space and universe, and also foreshadows the protagonist Wang Chen's later adventure across latitudes. The creation of the protagonist Wang Chen is a typical successful example of "anti-routine". He is not Long Aotian in the traditional sense, but an ordinary person with the memory of the earth's social animals and anxiety about survival. Faced with the sudden time travel and the cruel world of immortality, he did not become blindly arrogant, but chose the most pragmatic survival strategy - pretending to have amnesia, hugging his thighs, and practicing basic skills hard. His tenacity in collecting herbs while carrying three thousand kilograms of boulders on his back in the mountains, his skillful life skills while barbecuing, and his calm empathy when he heard the secrets of the sect all made this character appear flesh and blood. He has both the rational thinking of modern people (such as an instant understanding of the multi-dimensional universe) and the background of traditional Chinese chivalry (such as repaying kindness and valuing love and justice). This "mortal glimmer" quality makes him appear more real and moving when facing the magnificent epic journey in the future. At the same time, the depiction of group portraits of the Xiaoyao Sect is also a highlight. Whether it is the protective and affectionate patriarch Xie Junhao, the cold-hearted Mu Qingshuang, or the fighting madman Qiao Lin'er, each character has a distinct memory point. In particular, the tragedy of the sect's destruction a hundred years ago, told through the mouth of the senior brother, not only gave the older generation characters a deep tragic color, but also made the bond between Wang Chen and this new family even deeper - this is not only a place of cultivation, but also the last harbor for this group of "poor people" to warm each other. In terms of rhythm control, the author has shown a very high level. From Wang Chen's shock after jumping off the cliff, to the funny scene of being carried flying by Xiao Qi; from the embarrassment and warmth of apprenticeship in the main hall, to the comfort of the barbecue party under the moon and the subsequent revelation of secrets. The entire story line flows smoothly, and the emotional transitions are natural and smooth. Especially when dealing with the issue of "amount of information", the author does not use boring instruction-style indoctrination, but cleverly integrates it into dialogues and scenes. For example, Xiao Qi's mouth is used to popularize science and the realm of immortality, the campfire night talk is used to introduce the history of the sect, and the grand narration in the prologue sets the tone of the whole book. This "moisturizing and silent" processing method not only ensures the complete output of the settings, but also does not interrupt the flow of the story. At the end, the senior brother proposed to take Wang Chen to the Warcraft Mountains tomorrow to practice. This plot arrangement was just right. It transforms the warm daily life accumulated before into the actual conflict that is about to break out, making readers moved and immediately full of expectations for the life and death fight in the next chapter. To sum up, the opening chapter of this work is amazing. It successfully found the perfect balance between the warm daily life of "Farming Style" and the grand epic of "Primordial Style". The author uses delicate brushstrokes to outline a desirable Xiaoyao Sect, and uses his majestic imagination to construct a multiverse filled with dangers.
The story structure is grand and logically self-consistent, the plot rhythm is relaxed and moderate, and the world view is detailed and full. Integrating interstellar science fiction with exploration of the heavens, civilization changes, time and space folding, and law games are intertwined and parallel. It has the grand epic feeling of an interstellar expedition, as well as the suspense and mystery hidden in the depths of the dimension. It outlines the vast and vast picture of the universe word by word. The more you read, the more immersive you become. It is recommended for book lovers.
The author is very thoughtful, and the novel he wrote is both beautiful and humorous, and the writing is smooth. The story and character of the protagonist and supporting characters are more suitable for me. I read it again and again, and I like it very much. I recommend it to my friends.
The logic is clear, rigorous and reasonable, and the ideas are unique and worth savoring. This is such an underrated book! Let me first praise the author's imagination, it is really big. Can you knead everything you can imagine? The further you look back, the more you feel like "the situation has opened up", and it's not boring at all. My favorite thing: the main character doesn't really fall in love. If there is no heroine, there really is no heroine. Even the ambiguity is pitiful, and there are no protracted emotional scenes. The heroine takes the lone wolf route, doing things neatly, a little cold-blooded but reasonable. It's very refreshing to watch. You don't have to worry about her suddenly falling in love and falling in love, which gives you a sense of security. As for the world view, it is not just an empty air to fool people. The setting is quite clear and the logic is online. It can be seen that the author's writing power is also improving as he writes. It is a little jerky at the beginning, but the characters and plot are much smoother at the end. The supporting characters like parchment and quill are actually a little cute and warm. The pacing is also okay, not too watery, it's fun where it should be, and there's a little twist where it should be foreshadowing. It reads smoothly, and I finished one chapter after another without realizing it. All in all, I sincerely recommend this book, and I feel it is completely worthy of five stars. I even feel that the platform's upper limit of only five stars is a bit of a loss. If you want to read a book with a novel setting, a sober protagonist, and no love brain, this is the book for you!
After reading it, post it. First of all, you must give it a five-star review. Secondly, unlike the previous protagonists who cultivate immortality, the protagonist is not gifted, nor does he have special opportunities from the beginning, such as the grandfather in the ring. The protagonist's talent and bloodline are ordinary, but the protagonist is a genius who works hard. In addition, unlike most novels nowadays, the supporting characters are just to set off the protagonist's existence. The author must stick to it.
This book uses a rigorous and self-consistent nine-dimensional world view, a compact and reversal of the plot, and three-dimensional and vivid characters to create a hard-core and easy-to-read science fiction universe adventure. It is worth reading.
An opportunity arises in a tragic life, and the unlucky guy suddenly becomes the favorite of the group, thinking that the follow-up will be a warm emotional drama, but it is not the case, there is a reversal. The plot is rich, the structure is rigorous, and it's beautiful to watch!
The plot has a tight rhythm, the protagonist goes through levels to explore the mysteries of space, and the upgrading counterattack line is refreshing and smooth. The settings of space laws and cross-domain adventures are novel and eye-catching, and the fantasy atmosphere is full of fantasy. The more you watch, the more you will get hooked. It is worth a look for those who like interstellar fantasy and space flow to cultivate immortality!
Don't be modest, I think you are awesome, keep shining🌟Listen well, I have been listening to it for a long time, the author is really awesome, the writing is great, the best, the best, the best👌🏻
It is indeed a breath of fresh air in the fantasy world. I was attracted immediately, but the number of words is a bit short, so you have to work hard!
The world view is grand and the setting of the nine-dimensional universe is novel. The plot has ups and downs, and the protagonist's counterattack is full of excitement. The writing is fluent and the emotions are delicate. It is not a brainless novel and is worth reading.
The beginning is interesting, all the tragic things happened to the protagonist, but Naihe: How can the long sky be inferior to me. Only by counterattack can you reach the top.
It's very well written, I like it so much, it's a book that I can read for a long time [laughs]
It's so brain-burning. I don't dare to jump a little because I'm afraid I won't be able to understand the back part. I admire the ingenuity.
Hahahaha, it's really good, I feel like I 😎 really like ancient style, especially this one, it feels like a monster I watched it again in one go, and I still like the ancient themes [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]
For a novice author, from the article structure to the content, from the rhythm to the author's writing style, it is not easy to write to this level. I would like to give you five stars to encourage you. Looking forward to more exciting things to come.