Stop Burning Paper! I Turned into a Girl and Came Back to Cultivate Immortality

The author originally wanted to write about the arrival of the strange, about sexual transformation, about cultivating immortals, about spiritual recovery, and about the city, but he didn't have that much energy, so he suddenly had a whim and decided to write this book and prepare to write it all [laughs] Strictly speaking, this is the first novel written by the author that is not purely original by a fan. The author is purely a newcomer, and the writing style may be a bit unsatisfactory and a bit jerky. I hope it can be tolerated. If readers have any opinions, the author will carefully read it and revise it.

The subject matter is very good, there are no big problems, but there are still a few minor problems. First of all, the heroine's character is too cowardly, and she was also a man before she transformed, so it is hard to tell. Secondly, the relationship progresses too fast, too abrupt, and there is insufficient foreshadowing. It does not have the feeling of a story about changing marriage. Finally, the character of the second heroine who has traveled through time is pretty well portrayed in these pictures.

Yes, the subject matter is good, it's interesting to watch, and the author's writing style is okay.

The ingredients are very complex and the plot is bold and innovative. It is a rare potential stock. That's right, Chapter 15 mentions the "Yan Kingdom" and "Dragon Kingdom", which makes it hard not to think of the plot where the male protagonist behaves politely towards the female protagonist (feature of Arknights Foot Smell Bar)

The writing is really good, so far

Very good, very much to my liking [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

I just realized that I didn't give the author a good review [face covering] This book is so beautiful~

I want to ask if it is 1v1, why does it feel like a harem?

Be sure to write it down.

Great, no need to say more

Author-chan, come on, work hard [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

I love this couple so much! Update soon, author! ! !

Well, how should I put it? The traditional Bianjia text incorporates a little element of cultivating immortality. I can't see anything at the moment, I just hope there will be more updates. Let me give you five stars first to encourage you.