A fan of the original American TV series "The Walking Dead", slightly adapted + Not the Holy Mother + Sinister + Invincible Combat Power + The Protagonist Big Daddy (a slow-paced narration of survival, trying to restore the apocalyptic atmosphere and human relationships of the original work)
What kind of ending is worthy of this journey of wandering...
When can we build a home in this wasteland and have a picnic together in the wild at dusk...
When the lawless Negan brought Lucille to trial that day, he didn't want to see the helplessness of the protagonist group...
Garp traveled through the beautiful country and became the leader of a small street gang. Unfortunately, he was arrested by the police after a fight. Then when he learned that the policeman who arrested him was named Rick Grimes, he suddenly realized something... After reviewing the entire plot, he will become Rick's most powerful follower and defender of the team. He will let this big family go on forever in the end of the world!
Reader comments
Why didn't Moore save his hand and let him have a broken hand like before? Maul is also very powerful.
I read it from beginning to end in one go, and I have some thoughts and suggestions I want to make:
1. I think that the system of the protagonist cannot be further strengthened. If it is strengthened, there will be no suspense and interest. At the same time, you can keep a large section of the system description to make up the word count (I have no objection to this), but do not continue to overexaggerate the existence of the system. In this way, the protagonist will lose his independence and seem to be led by the system tasks.
2. It can be closely related to the setting of the original work, but you need to add some small innovations of your own. For example, the protagonist can cultivate his own small team (or confidants), develop his career (the content of the career will not be elaborated here, it depends on the author's ideas and writing style), and see unique highlights that are different from the original work.
My main suggestions are these two points. I also want to say that I don't know much about the original work (I only read a lot of explanations).
Finally, you are welcome to receive advice from the author and readers.
It's so restorative, it's like watching the original drama again
Keep writing, don't give up, but I personally think that the author can mix the original line and the plot line more closely when writing. When I read books now, I always feel like I am reading two novels.
It's okay, but the updates are too slow.
Go faster. I'm afraid you'll stop updating the book. Just read two chapters and you won't be able to enjoy it.
Come on, author, write more about children👶🏻I love reading your books
Not bad, good, very nice. Please update soon.
First of all, this is not a cool article. The protagonist's role is a bit small. Maybe there are too few chapters. From my personal experience, it's pretty good in The Walking Dead.
Come on, the author is good-looking and don't stop updating.
So far, it's a pretty good book, and the character of the protagonist is also to my liking.
Very good, very beautiful
Why have you stopped updating?
The author has fully practiced what it means that the general trend cannot be changed, but the small trend can be changed [eating melon]
Why didn't Moore save his hand and let him have a broken hand like before? Maul is also very powerful.
I read it from beginning to end in one go, and I have some thoughts and suggestions I want to make: 1. I think that the system of the protagonist cannot be further strengthened. If it is strengthened, there will be no suspense and interest. At the same time, you can keep a large section of the system description to make up the word count (I have no objection to this), but do not continue to overexaggerate the existence of the system. In this way, the protagonist will lose his independence and seem to be led by the system tasks. 2. It can be closely related to the setting of the original work, but you need to add some small innovations of your own. For example, the protagonist can cultivate his own small team (or confidants), develop his career (the content of the career will not be elaborated here, it depends on the author's ideas and writing style), and see unique highlights that are different from the original work. My main suggestions are these two points. I also want to say that I don't know much about the original work (I only read a lot of explanations). Finally, you are welcome to receive advice from the author and readers.
It's so restorative, it's like watching the original drama again
Keep writing, don't give up, but I personally think that the author can mix the original line and the plot line more closely when writing. When I read books now, I always feel like I am reading two novels.
It's okay, but the updates are too slow.
Go faster. I'm afraid you'll stop updating the book. Just read two chapters and you won't be able to enjoy it.
Come on, author, write more about children👶🏻I love reading your books
Not bad, good, very nice. Please update soon.
First of all, this is not a cool article. The protagonist's role is a bit small. Maybe there are too few chapters. From my personal experience, it's pretty good in The Walking Dead.
Come on, the author is good-looking and don't stop updating.
So far, it's a pretty good book, and the character of the protagonist is also to my liking.
Very good, very beautiful Why have you stopped updating?
The author has fully practiced what it means that the general trend cannot be changed, but the small trend can be changed [eating melon]