Bunny Girl Senpai Never Meets a True Dragon Fairy

It looks good, and the male and female protagonists are well portrayed. The contrast is really a mountain of human XP🍉. However, the logic in some places is not smooth, and it can be slightly revised after writing. There are also some paragraphs of description that are repeated and feel a bit unnecessary. Just mention one sentence. If it really needs to be summarized in two or three sentences. The overall narrative rhythm is quite good, so you don't need to move it. I don't care about other minor issues that much, but there is one point that really makes me uncomfortable. When describing actions or scenes, the sentence pattern "It's not..., It's..." Is used a lot. It comes every few paragraphs, and it's exhausting to read🤦

The writing is quite good, although the setting is very strange. Alas, it's quite interesting, but it's a pity that it was written by an AI. The AI's writing style is not bad but sometimes it doesn't make sense, and there are still less things than what a real person writes.

It's hard to comment. First of all, I didn't see any great training. Secondly, the woman is a time traveler and the man is a local. The woman is a princess, which is fine, but the soul is a time traveler that has polluted the original body. The male protagonist is a beast, which is great, but it is a pity that he is not a time traveler. It would be great if the female protagonist is not a time traveler, but it is a pity. Summary: This book should be regarded as a middle-of-the-road female-oriented book. If both men and women were written as locals and well-educated, it would be a very good book. If not, I can only say that girls like big pet one-dimensional female videos.

This book is very interesting, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Fight for hundreds of rounds. But Xue Baochai is indeed too strong. If it weren't for Noxian's outer ring + Noxian guillotine. This wave of M4's six times strafing will kill you, among other things. I rather appreciate what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is so proud, don't stop in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot. [OK]

It's okay, but there's no need for the male and female protagonist to be shy every time someone around them hears it. What's going on 🤦

Yes, the difference in appearance and body shape between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is well described. I look forward to the interesting description of the male protagonist learning to speak and write. It would be great if the two concepts of wilderness and civilization collide and think in the male protagonist's mind. I hope that if the male protagonist's combat power is to be upgraded, he will only strengthen his body instead of awakening his fighting spirit, and that his unique characteristic of being as strong as an inhuman body will be implemented to the end instead of being integrated into the mainstream. Anyway, the label also states that it has a low martial arts worldview, and a high physical strength value is enough.

Oh my god, brothers, it's so beautiful. Oh my god, you looked at it so happily in the middle of the night. 😄 Oh my god.

The protagonist who was raised by a wild beast is no different from a wild beast. I can't see it, but everything is normal, but it's a little weird

The subject matter is very good, but the author doesn't want to use AI for everything, and makes changes by himself. There are too many traces of AI.

It's very good. He is good at writing about women. It would be better if he polishes the details. I hope the author will improve. There is so much that needs to be polished and there is a lot of back and forth. It feels like the author forgot about it after writing it. When I was writing xo, I really liked having people around me, or in the wild.