A Young Pig-Headed Boy Will Never Meet a Real Dragon Fairy

It looks good, the male and female protagonists are well portrayed, and the contrast is really a mountain of human XP [eating melon] It's just that the logic in some places isn't very smooth. You can make some changes after writing it. There are also some paragraphs of description that are repeated and feel a bit unnecessary. Just mention one sentence. If it really needs to be summarized in two or three sentences. The overall narrative rhythm is quite good, so you don't need to move it. I don't care about other minor issues that much, but there is one point that really makes me uncomfortable. When describing actions or scenes, the sentence pattern "It's not..., It's..." Is used a lot. It comes up every few paragraphs, and I'm exhausted [face covering]

It's hard to comment. First of all, I didn't see any great training. Secondly, the woman is a time traveler and the man is a local. The woman is a princess, which is fine, but the soul is a time traveler that has polluted the original body. The male protagonist is a beast, which is great, but it is a pity that he is not a time traveler. It would be great if the female protagonist is not a time traveler, but it is a pity. Summary: This book should be regarded as a middle-of-the-road female-oriented book. If both men and women were written as locals and well-educated, it would be a very good book. If not, I can only say that girls like big pet one-dimensional female videos.

It's okay, but there's no need for the male and female protagonist to be shy every time someone around them hears it. What's going on [face covering]

The writing is quite good, although the setting is very strange. Alas, it's quite interesting, but it's a pity that it was written by an AI. The AI's writing style is not bad but sometimes it doesn't make sense, and there are still less things than what a real person writes.

This book is very interesting, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Fight for hundreds of rounds. But Xue Baochai is indeed too strong. If it weren't for Noxian's outer ring + Noxian guillotine. This wave of M4's six times strafing will kill you, among other things. I compare Appreciate Zhuge Liang's words to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, don't stop in front of your brother Liang." Angry at the monkey who beat him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot. [OK]

Oh my god, brothers, it's so beautiful. Oh my god, you looked at it so happily in the middle of the night. [Laughs] Oh my god.

The protagonist who was raised by a wild beast is no different from a wild beast. I can't see it, but everything is normal, but it's a little weird

Yes, the appearance and size difference between the male protagonist and the female protagonist are well described. I look forward to the interesting description of the male protagonist learning to speak and write. It would be great if the two concepts of wilderness and civilization collide and think in the male protagonist's mind. I hope that if the male protagonist's combat power is to be upgraded, he will only strengthen his body instead of awakening his fighting spirit, and that his unique characteristic of being as strong as an inhuman body will be implemented to the end instead of being integrated into the mainstream. Anyway, the label also states that it has a low martial arts worldview, and a high physical strength value is enough.

It's very good. He is good at writing about women. It would be better if he polishes the details. I hope the author will improve. There is so much that needs to be polished and there is a lot of back and forth. It feels like the author forgot about it after writing it. When I was writing xo, I really liked having people around me, or in the wild.

The author is suitable for moderators to write novels and I sincerely recommend it [face covering]

Pure love, do anything for her. I! Be willing to do so. "Pig Head" Li Sanyi... M.

Even among the emperor's uncles, he is considered a novelty.

The subject matter is very good, but the author doesn't want to use AI for everything, and makes changes by himself. There are too many traces of AI.

It's nice to watch. The female protagonist is in contrast. Is the male protagonist the strongest in the world by default? Or is there a plot of the male protagonist training later?

It's the first time I've seen such an agile fairy.

This is my first time watching this type of movie, Beauty and the Beast

Come on, is this a single heroine or multiple heroines? Now that I have read Chapter 21, I feel that the heroine still treats the hero like a beast. Well, although the hero himself is somewhat related, I always feel a little uncomfortable watching it. It feels like the heroine will stab the hero in the back at any time [face covering]

The heroine is a master of [laughs evilly]

The fairy who knows best about tomatoes

It's incredible, I can only say, come on, author

After watching it for a while, it's very good, but can the protagonist learn to speak later?

It's the first time I've seen the heroine Zhan Ji. Don't fall in love too much.

Yes, the protagonist is like the prehistoric wild man Pico in "Blade Tooth", with invincible fighting power

It's like a breath of fresh air from tomatoes. I'm optimistic about you!

It's very interesting. I look forward to the day when the male protagonist can find himself again [laughing evilly]

, So weird [laughing evilly]

It's good to watch, but there are some inexplicable plots

After reading the book for so long, you can give me a guarantee.

Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle [laughs]

Either doing it or on the way to do it [Adoration]