I Turned from Woman to Man: My Online Romance Unmasked Me, So I Have to Live Off Him

The subject matter is very novel and quite eye-catching. The plot is too everyday and has a scattered feeling. It is about daily life in a chronicle style. After moving to a new school, there is no plot development that can attract readers. Some changes are very abrupt, and some are illogical and fragmented. But the subject matter is very novel, female-to-male online dating, which should be a very attractive gimmick. If this point is grasped and written well, it will become popular. The author needs to improve his grasp of the plot. It's a deviation from the plot. Since you are using online dating to attract people, the plot must be written around this main line. Now the real-life chapter has started to be written, but it has deviated from the main line of online dating and entered a new school. It has nothing to do with the online dating partner. Can it be understood as opening a new map? However, the readers attracted at the beginning were interested in online dating, and the following chapters deviated from the main plot. I suspect this is based on AI-assisted thinking? A common problem with AI is that as it writes, it will completely ignore the previous main line and start to develop its own plot, and it will become more and more different from the previous one. The current plot is that the main trunk of a big tree stops growing, and then the side branches are supplied.

Looks good! Recently, I especially like books about women wearing men's clothes, because I always believe that our girls' personality background is kind and strong. Hehehe, the writing is super good, especially the change of the heroine's mother's identity, and the selfless love for her children. It makes me feel soft. I feel that girls can make the barren land better. Become rich and let the rich land breed a better self. Hahaha, I feel that the expression is wrong. Maybe it's been a long time since I wrote this. I just go and go every day. There are too many hot words on the Internet 😢 😢 😢 In short, this book is super good, hurry up and get into it!

Overall it's okay. But I personally feel that there are two points that are quite separate from the subject of online fraud. One is that the heroine looks more handsome than the boy in the stolen photos. Second, the heroine's mother's family is too rich. Putting it all together, online fraud incidents are also relatively easy to deal with.

It's very well written, I really like reading this type of book. When can the author change the male protagonist's name to his last name? Because now he relies on his mother's property, shouldn't he have his mother's last name?

It's true, but the title of the book, "Being a soft rice," doesn't match the novel. It's just the behavior of the original owner. The protagonist is very charming. When I read the novel, I felt it was better to be alone. The other characters are too realistic and have no desire to fall in love.

The writing is quite good, but should I change my name to Cheng Jingyi? Otherwise, it will be difficult for others to call the protagonist Qian Xin. Anyway, it is not bad if I can take my mother's surname after divorce. Can I change the name to unify it? 🤔

Not bad, I've already seen the latest chapter. The plot is okay too. In fact, at first I thought it was the kind of robbery where the heroine chases the hero and can't escape no matter how hard she runs, but it doesn't seem to be the case now. Now it seems that they have a two-way, slow and subtle emotion. The male protagonist is not very poor. After he followed his mother, his mother's family was very rich. Just pay back all the money of those good friends. And the male protagonist is very handsome. He used other people's photos to date online because there was a man who spread rumors that he was gay and lent him money and refused to repay it. He followed his father and had no living expenses, so he used that man's photos to cheat online.

The heroine is not one of those in online dating, I feel like none of them are likable😮‍💨

It's good-looking and quite interesting. It starts with cheating online. I just feel like the name abb is a bit too much.

Okay, okay, I have the desire to read on, but I feel like it would be better to have my mother's surname.