Miss Tatsumaki, Stop Stepping on Me, I Really Am Not a Lolita Control Person.
龙卷小姐别踩了,我真不是萝莉控
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Inexplicable cohabitation, inexplicable doormat, the plot is very classic
Okay, okay,, I haven't written a review for a long time. I'm so scared of this book. It's great that I have more time on vacation and I'm in a good mood. I'll write a little bit. I wanted to write it after reading it, but I forgot about it. Let's talk about the book first. It's a more conventional cool novel, but there are few that are accepted by single women. It's not like a slap in the face or a gold-worshiping girl. It's probably a type that dominates the world with one punch and can travel through other worlds. It has a positive outlook on life (which is really rare in a cool novel, but some people will say it's decisive not to kill, like the Holy Mother). The writing is quite comfortable. At least there are no mistakes that newcomers often make, such as using metaphors and psychological descriptions indiscriminately. Unlike AI, there are three to five chapters a day ( Big bonus!), The author is more active and gentle, even when scolded, he doesn't retaliate [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying], but as others said, it is enough to fake death twice. Death escape mostly requires foreshadowing, otherwise it is a tear-jerker, but the kindness between people is very good, you can rely on this aspect but not too much, and you can learn from other people's emotional lines. For example, those sweet articles, the description of the light expression is too stiff. Let's talk about the author. As I said above, he is gentle, corrects his mistakes when he sees them, and is good at listening to opinions. Although there are more of them in Tomato, I can't accept them even if I want to read them. In short, this is an advantage, but writing well is the most important thing. In short, Shuhuang is readable and non-toxic. Although it is not in any elegant hall, it is quite good. Does the author have a fan base? I feel that the author's personality may be compatible with mine (although I don't often read the group). I also need to have a good rest. I don't want the author to be sick and then update less or even discontinuously [laugh][laugh][laugh] Overall evaluation: Excellent food
Trivia, stripes will not strengthen the physical body. On the contrary, ordinary people will die if stripes are worn. The body cannot bear it, and the reason why they cannot live for a long time is because their physical fitness is not enough. Judging from the fact that Jiguoyuan is in his seventies or eighty, he is still fine, but eventually he dies of old age.
First of all, this book is not a fun book. If you have to read it for fun, then I think you can just write it off. This is a daily book, pure daily life, and occasionally fighting. Then, regarding combat power, can you not come to Xiabibi just after seeing a single work? There are monsters who are equal to or even inferior to wolf-level monsters. It is indeed a bit of fun. It is true that this book has its parts that overwhelm the protagonist's fighting ability, and the protagonist also has moments of maggots, but this book is not mainly about fighting. If you find this kind of thorn in a daily novel, of course I have nothing to say. You have to say that since you have chosen to write, why not write more comfortably? Then I can only say that the author's ability is limited, and he is indeed not thoughtful. If he had considered everything, this book would not have achieved this level of success. Anyway, this book will not make any money, and the author does not make a living from it. The author will definitely not think about being wronged and scolded. If he encounters very annoying comments, he will definitely refute it. If you really can't accept some of the content written in the book, I can change it if you make good suggestions. If you go directly to the pressure, I will also directly pressure you back. Thank you everyone [learned]
A very good book, with a single female protagonist and a tornado, which is not boring. The protagonist is a smiling person who always has a smile on his face and has a unique personality charm that brings the heroes together and has a good pyrotechnics atmosphere. There is no transgression that is common in Bankai novels. The world of One Punch Man is used as the main anchor. The main story line mainly takes place in the world of One Punch Man. Other worldviews are just foils. There will be no visual fatigue when reading, but there is no behavior that overwhelms the protagonist. Pure daily love, single female protagonist Tatsumaki, Buhe and other women are unclear, including Buhe Fubuki, Highly recommended reading, the rating should be 7.8~8.1, Good luck to the author! [Laughs] The protagonist is a rare protagonist, he is a pretty normal person. He is polite to everyone, and everyone is not tired of being with him. If you really use your hands, you don't have to worry about it, just do what you want. For those you like, you won't take advantage of them when they are drunk. Wait until you sober up. To put it bluntly, it means being measured and having a bottom line, which makes people feel at ease. I finished reading it in one sitting and commented that the author really liked Tatsumaki. He described some... Ahem, unique places... In quite detail. The male protagonist's contribution is not one-way. The male protagonist's contribution has also gained the favor and respect of others. As for some people who say that the protagonist is licking, if this relationship makes you feel more and more hopeful and the other person is actively approaching you - then congratulations, you are just loving in a mature way. Don't be stigmatized by the word "dog licking". The core difference between sincerity and "dog licking" is: whether the other person also cares about you.
It looks good. The character of the protagonist is to my liking. He is gentle and unassuming and has no lack of contrast. Tatsumaki is tsundere, awkward and a bit irritable, which is not bad. It is just that some of the protagonists have a lack of brains, but it is not a big problem. Most of the rest is daily life, and although it's pretty good, I wish there were more battle scenes.
Now when I think back to watching Avengers, I feel like I'm watching a child's play [face-covering] I can't do anything [face-covering] I might as well be a picket team in black robes [thinking] A group of people who say their mission is more important than anything else use their mission as an excuse for their actions [thinking] Isn't it better for everyone to just be sincere [face-covering]
"Frying" and "stewing" are both ways to make it delicious, and so is "adding oil"!
Overall it's pretty good, but it's a bit difficult to get along with the summons, and the emotional line with the tornado is a bit inexplicable, but those are the highlights, the rest is good (by the way, are goblins considered cute pets?)
Very nice! ! Even if there is no OOC character creation, the emotional line is still very sweet and delicious. The book started to feel weak later on, the plot dragged on and I didn't get to enjoy the tornado in the end. There were also some problems with the character creation... It was originally a good book...
The writing is pretty good, slightly OOC, but innocuous. It can be read as a love story. Four or five chapters are updated a day. This is very good and deserves five stars. The author has lost his strength in the late stage, and the plot has become draggy and has become two updates a day.
Goblins have become cute pets, and they are so pleasing to my eyes!
It's okay, you can get it in, ignore some flaws, it's still pretty good.
The writing is really beautiful. The author will add more updates. Don't delay the updates. Don't delay the updates. You must write eloquently every day [angry][angry][angry][angry][angry]
Yes, yes, but the branch line could be sped up a little.
I haven't read much, but I think it's okay. I hope the author can keep updating it until the end. I originally wanted to give it to you later, but after thinking about it, I'd better call it first and treat it as recruiting people for the author. Some people say that there are some plot codes, but I think there are some, but it does not affect reading. The overall sense is good, and the relationship is confirmed very quickly. There are more than 100 pictures.
There are some small flaws, but they are still visible. Just don't run away from them again. Two times is enough. The most important thing is not to update too often. [Eat melon]
AI is still very useful
It's pretty good, I hope there will be more
Beautiful, highly recommended
It's very beautiful, nothing toxic, you can watch it with confidence [Eating Melon]
Not bad, it's my favorite Tatsumaki-sama pure love line! ! !
Honorable, no doubt
Ok ok ok
It's okay, but a bit boring for me
Not bad, not bad. When will the demon slayer end?
It's good, but the main plot was pushed too slowly in the later stages.
As long as the author keeps updating, you can do whatever you want! 😋
It's very interesting. I hope the protagonist can draw the Divine Light Stick in the future.
If you are interested in reading, you can take a look at the single female protagonist Tatsumaki Tsundere Lolita. I hope it will be more sweet everyday.