[Micro-group portrait + high martial arts + ease + soul beast + system + cool writing + hot blood]
This is a story about "losing" and "winning".
When he was eight years old, Yun Xian's unique physique was stripped away and divided among three people.
From then on he became mortal.
When he was seventeen years old, he contracted a crow and thought that would be it for the rest of his life.
Yun Xian wanted to lie down, but suddenly a "Tiandao Rewarding System" popped into his mind.
Wait... The golden finger is not bound to him, but to the crow? !
That night, Yun Xian was sleeping and Crow was practicing.
That night, others were practicing hard, and the crows were busy.
From then on, while others worked hard and worked hard, smashing pots and selling iron to pile up resources, his crow became stronger and stronger as he practiced.
When the crow rushes from the mortal level to the spirit level, king level, and emperor level, when its feathers change from black to red gold, when it crows to shatter the sky -
Everyone went crazy.
"What kind of soul beast is this?"
Yun Xian touched Crow's head and thought about it seriously.
"Hmm... A rather diligent bird."
One is a fiery and protective foster sister, the other is a gentle and steady foster brother, and the other is a "brother" who betrays him.
Will the Three Talents Soul Seizing Formation from back then continue to return to their origins?
Reader comments
When I see the slow-heat label on Tomato, it is basically attributed to poor writing skills in the early stage.
I find that many authors like to use "slow heat" to hide their shame. What is slow heating? Without promoting the main plot, expanding the world view, and rapidly taking off in terms of strength, three-dimensional characters, interesting interactions, and novel ideas are used to fill the context. Although the progress of the main plot is slow, the reading must be smooth, just like some books on cultivating immortals after reading hundreds of chapters in one go, only to react when seeing the update reminder button: "Damn it, I haven't built the foundation yet!"
Instead of relying on an invisible hand to suppress the subjective initiative of the protagonist and supporting characters, and forcibly compressing them into a plot full of boring ambiguity. Occasionally, there are some specious "human feelings and sophistication"
The male protagonist's character is a little soft, but it's not a big problem and overall he's pretty good.
I hope that the male protagonist can also have family and friendship in addition to love.
As an aside, Grandma Wang in the orphanage found out that Yun Duo had beaten Yun Duo, and she was a little unhappy when the male protagonist persuaded Yun Duo that it was true. Yun Duo concealed the sequelae and wanted to upgrade the male protagonist, which was not good. Yun Yi, who secretly liked Yun Duo and hid his strength, was slightly jealous of the male protagonist.
There is always a feeling that the male protagonist is very kind to the people around him, but either betrays him or does not understand him, and he is so in need of love.
Not bad, very beautiful, but a pity it's a little lacking
Keeping Yun Zheng alive is a minor disadvantage, but it is understandable. After all, the law is there. I hope there will be a chance to make him "die in the hands of monsters" in the future.
It feels like the protagonist is like an honest man in period novels
It's not bad. It's quite tasty. This talent system just says that if you work a hundred times harder, you'll be done [face covering]
Excellent talent or [what][what][what][what]
Okay, okay, well written
It's okay, I recommend checking it out
I like this pattern
Very interesting! Worth collecting!
ZThis book is more comfortable to read than the Tianlong one
At least it looks interesting so far.
I don't know what happened next time, let's listen to the explanation next time
So far, it seems that the writing is pretty good. Please work hard to update it. Currently, the AI traces are not heavy, which is good.
I have written more than 60 pieces, overall it is very good [Chigua] Come on
Nice! Very good, I like it
Namo (Namo) Amitabha, it is not easy for the author to write a book, please give me a five-star review to support it.
The protagonist is very calm, and his sister's IQ is a bit... But it has little impact on the overall reading. After all, the protagonist in the setting is time travel, and the younger brothers and sisters are all children under 20. Overall, it is very enjoyable, especially after getting through the early stages.
Chapter 264 has been updated, I think it's okay. Many of the places that were scolded are actually pitfalls, and each one has been filled in. The latest update has revealed the true identity of the villain.
It's a good type of novel that you can read. I recommend it.
At least it's not a nonsensical slap in the face. Although it incorporates some routines, it's already very good in Tomato.
It's okay, it's okay, it's not bad, come on, keep coding, don't stop.
Just this day 3 chapters give 5 stars
Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking
Logically rigorous, a good book.
Yes, this book is written.
The pace is too slow, but the content is okay
Seeing that you replied, even though I deleted it, I will give you four stars.
When I see the slow-heat label on Tomato, it is basically attributed to poor writing skills in the early stage. I find that many authors like to use "slow heat" to hide their shame. What is slow heating? Without promoting the main plot, expanding the world view, and rapidly taking off in terms of strength, three-dimensional characters, interesting interactions, and novel ideas are used to fill the context. Although the progress of the main plot is slow, the reading must be smooth, just like some books on cultivating immortals after reading hundreds of chapters in one go, only to react when seeing the update reminder button: "Damn it, I haven't built the foundation yet!" Instead of relying on an invisible hand to suppress the subjective initiative of the protagonist and supporting characters, and forcibly compressing them into a plot full of boring ambiguity. Occasionally, there are some specious "human feelings and sophistication"
The male protagonist's character is a little soft, but it's not a big problem and overall he's pretty good. I hope that the male protagonist can also have family and friendship in addition to love. As an aside, Grandma Wang in the orphanage found out that Yun Duo had beaten Yun Duo, and she was a little unhappy when the male protagonist persuaded Yun Duo that it was true. Yun Duo concealed the sequelae and wanted to upgrade the male protagonist, which was not good. Yun Yi, who secretly liked Yun Duo and hid his strength, was slightly jealous of the male protagonist. There is always a feeling that the male protagonist is very kind to the people around him, but either betrays him or does not understand him, and he is so in need of love.
Not bad, very beautiful, but a pity it's a little lacking
Keeping Yun Zheng alive is a minor disadvantage, but it is understandable. After all, the law is there. I hope there will be a chance to make him "die in the hands of monsters" in the future.
It feels like the protagonist is like an honest man in period novels
It's not bad. It's quite tasty. This talent system just says that if you work a hundred times harder, you'll be done [face covering]
Excellent talent or [what][what][what][what]
Okay, okay, well written
It's okay, I recommend checking it out
I like this pattern
Very interesting! Worth collecting!
ZThis book is more comfortable to read than the Tianlong one
At least it looks interesting so far. I don't know what happened next time, let's listen to the explanation next time
So far, it seems that the writing is pretty good. Please work hard to update it. Currently, the AI traces are not heavy, which is good.
I have written more than 60 pieces, overall it is very good [Chigua] Come on
Nice! Very good, I like it
Namo (Namo) Amitabha, it is not easy for the author to write a book, please give me a five-star review to support it.
The protagonist is very calm, and his sister's IQ is a bit... But it has little impact on the overall reading. After all, the protagonist in the setting is time travel, and the younger brothers and sisters are all children under 20. Overall, it is very enjoyable, especially after getting through the early stages.
Chapter 264 has been updated, I think it's okay. Many of the places that were scolded are actually pitfalls, and each one has been filled in. The latest update has revealed the true identity of the villain.
It's a good type of novel that you can read. I recommend it.
At least it's not a nonsensical slap in the face. Although it incorporates some routines, it's already very good in Tomato.
It's okay, it's okay, it's not bad, come on, keep coding, don't stop.
Just this day 3 chapters give 5 stars
Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking
Logically rigorous, a good book.
Yes, this book is written.
The pace is too slow, but the content is okay
Seeing that you replied, even though I deleted it, I will give you four stars.