I Was Thrown Violently by Esdeath When I Traveled Through Time to Behead My Sister.

What is worthy of recognition is that I like the protagonist very much. He has a great and upright image from beginning to end, and his three views are quite strong. But firstly, its sense of existence as a fan work is very low. There are too many things that I want to cram in. The content of different works dilutes the concentration of this work. In fact, it is more like a comprehensive comic. There is almost no description of Chitong's original combat system. Second, although the protagonist has a high level of ideological consciousness, what he does has always been like hunting lobsters to liberate slaves at level 1, or fighting mutant lobsters to liberate slaves at level 10. He does not look like a thought leader at all. As a thought leader with absolute ability, he should start to participate in events that match him. Why does this problem occur? I thought about it, because the age starting point of the character is too low and requires a very long growth process. In addition, there are few Mesozoic people available to describe. As a result, a bunch of flowers of the motherland have no ideas and abilities, so the male protagonist can only take care of the grassroots affairs. There are not enough NPCs to fill these relatively simple things, so the male protagonist has to keep cleaning up the soldiers. It is precisely because these children need to grow up and participate in the plot that the male protagonist can only wander around the edge of the map for a long time, which gives him a sense of detachment from the world view. In my humble opinion, let others comment on whether what I said is correct or not.

The author's writing style is still very good, not to mention how beautifully the sentences are described. It is about being able to state one thing very clearly without making people feel that the statements are redundant. The story is not bad, it has a touching plot, and the characters are relatively three-dimensional. That is because the book "Zhan Crimson Eyes" itself is relatively low-popularity. Otherwise, if I write other stories, the rating will definitely be more than this. But this is the case with Tomato. After being qualified to be promoted, if there are no results within 7 days, it will be difficult for the book to be listed again. I still hope the author can cheer up and continue to persevere. I wanted to ask if you have a heroine?

It's quite good. As a fanfic, it doesn't follow the original plot without thinking, and it doesn't get overshadowed by the original characters. The protagonist really walks his own path. It looks good so far. It's just that the title should be changed. After all, Esdeath hasn't appeared in dozens of chapters. In fact, it's best not to use revolution or the color red to promote it, which will easily attract some brainless followers. So far, it seems to be very unique to the author. I hope to continue to stick to it [Like] [Like] [Like]

It has a sense of story, which is okay. My evaluation is, work quickly, serve delicious food, and... When will the main character appear! Life, she is as bitter as a song. The taste is sour, spicy, bitter and salty, but the sweetness has an endless aftertaste.

Zhan Chi's fanfic is really good. Except for the red part in the article, which is a bit abrupt, the male protagonist's various emotions are top-notch. However, he himself said that his path is not suitable for finding a wife, but the follow-up actions are not the same. The younger sister and the eldest sister directly pull each other. At first, it was said that they borrowed Zhan Su's world view, but his world view is too desperate. I don't know if this setting will be changed. The pace is too slow. It would be better if it is updated faster. I look forward to the appearance of the eldest brother.

Is it really reasonable to strive for red ideas in a world where individual combat power exceeds the standard? Who knows who will be next with super-standard combat power? It is difficult to satisfy people's hearts. Suddenly, a few people with excessive combat power appear and use force to oppress and recruit ordinary people. Ordinary people can also mobilize troops.

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Not bad, you can watch ヾ(≧O≦)

Good looking It's just too short The early writing was pretty good. The subject matter is also quite good. Pulling the crotch later

It's a good book, but it's a pity that I haven't seen the plot where the protagonist meets Edelsman.

The biggest taboo in writing fan fiction is being away from the main characters for too long. After all, you are using fan fiction as an introduction, so come on

A potential stock, whether it is writing, plot design, or characters, it deserves a high score of 9.0 Or above. I stayed up late to read it and found that I couldn't fall asleep. After thinking about it carefully, I felt that the title and introduction did not correspond to the content, making people feel like they were being dragged down. If it were changed, it might attract more people. Finally, the author, please, please update it three times a day. This is not enough.

The protagonist has three views Enjoy watching😋

When I first came to the world, I didn't know the pain. I spent half my life scrawling without turning around. Looking back at the road I came from, I realized why I cried when I was alive. --Tiao Lian Lian

It's pretty good so far, but there are some things that I haven't considered well (referring to the protagonist).

It looks good. I hope the heroine will have Esdeath. I feel like they are brother and sister. They may not be able to develop. I hope the heroine will have Esdeath.

Don't wear too much clothes, because wearing more clothes has always been a poisonous point in novels.

It is a rare product in tomatoes

The protagonist is well portrayed, but Esdeath appears too few times, probably because the plot has not caught up yet.

After reading more than 40 chapters, I feel that the author has his own ideas and is very active. It is rare for an author to communicate with readers. Come on, author!

The writing is ok, urge more, urge more, urge more [adoration]

It's well written. I haven't seen any bad points so far. I look forward to the follow-up performance.

Although the narrative is very short, I really like the character of the protagonist, and I identify with him as the successor of communism. [Salute]

The protagonist is probably the missing prince

So I want to know how long it will be before I can see the protagonist being violently thrown again? [Sinister smile]

It's pretty good. The main character's views are also upright, but he accidentally joins the army. Come on, author [cool]

This book is super good. I have been reading the novel for more than 10 years and have very high ratings. You can give it a read.

Come on, author, don't stop updating! ! ! I will keep watching.

The more I read this book, the more popular it becomes.

The protagonist is so red [salute]