Aihong: Zhi Yan Pianpian

The book is as high-level as ever, with superb writing style, the characters' inner thoughts are described in detail, the story is good and makes you want to read on, but does the same memory scene reappear too many times? Then I feel that the story is moving a bit slowly. I don't know when it will reach the youth, and I don't know how long it will take until the youth meets the three Liang Hesui. I believe the author has his own rhythm, but I still hope it can move forward a little faster. So far, this book is still very good [Thoughts] From these chapters, I can feel that the progress of the next story will start to accelerate. The biggest feeling after reading it now is that compared to Sui He Liang Yuan, Zhi Yan Lian Pian's writing style is still very good, the overall rhythm is maintained quite well, and there will not be the slow plot advancement of Sui He Liang Yuan. Indeed, there must be that kind of tangled and awkward conflicts between Liang Sui and Sui He. There are emotions in it, but I feel that the author did not find the most suitable rhythm at the time. Many people may find it a bit slow to read, but I believe this book will not have such a feeling. It is grasped just right, the image of the characters is well maintained, and the emotional delicacy is very high. It is really comfortable to read, and I can really feel the author's progress clearly. I look forward to what kind of stories the author can bring every day. This book Zhi Yan Lian Pian is indeed very attractive to me, and I can feel the hard work put into it. As far as second creations are concerned, it is definitely one of the best in my heart. Now I have to check every once in a while to see if there are updates. I don't dare to think how uncomfortable I will be on the day it is finished. . .

The writing style is the best among the two novels I have read so far, and the setting is also better. It is not the kind of cybernetic god turning things around. The psychology of the characters is also consistent with the original work. On this basis, Fang's mobility has been improved. I sincerely hope to finish it. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's hard to break the two flowers of love, but the most difficult thing is to erase the kindness of a beautiful person. To balance the love between two people, you will inevitably favor one over the other sometimes. It is very sour to watch the person you love talking and laughing with the other person you love. But compared to the unexpected ending, the ending of the original work is already very good. At least the two of them are by their side intact, and it will be good to make up for the emotional issues slowly. Flowers are ready to be cut off when they are in full bloom, but don't wait for empty branches to be cut off.

It's still such a superb writing style, and the style remains the same. This book is based on the reincarnation ending of "Red Mansions". It was written from Fang Zhiyou's childhood, giving him vague memories of his past life, and rewriting the tragic fate of the three protagonists Fang Sulin in the original work. In addition, it also inherits the world view of the "missing" line from the previous work "Hungry Death: Sui He Liang Yuan", which is a good continuation. The poisonous points of the original work have also been rewritten one by one, such as the unreasonable family separation, Su Lianyan's ALS, and turning a blind eye to Lin Pianpian's suffering, etc. The poisonous points I had thought about were changed, and the things I had never thought about were also changed. The changes were wonderful. I think it is enough that everyone is safe and healthy. The best Aihong fanfic I have ever read, it is exactly what I want to find, the perfect answer that can soothe my sorrow.

If you have read the author's previous book "Sui He Liang Yuan", you will know that the author is very skilled in writing multiple perspectives, side descriptions, psychological descriptions, etc., And his writing skills are superb, and it is also reflected in this book. In the final analysis, due to some unforeseen reason, the three of them, Fang Sulin, are all miserable. Because of their complicated emotions, they have been entangled for a lifetime, and there is no happy ending in the end. A certain great writer proudly said that this must be the case. Therefore, I am very grateful to the author for changing the original ending and giving Fang Sulin and the three a happy ending. I am looking forward to the extra chapter and the author's next book.

It makes up for the regret, but it's quite different that I didn't follow the main plot of massacre. Also, why did the author show that the update was discontinued after the completion? I thought it was a eunuch, and I almost missed this Aihong fanfic.

The book is very good and the writing style remains the same. I just hope that the author will not make Pianpian Zai sad and they will get married together!

It's good-looking, as good-looking as Hungshi's. I've seen the latest one. I opened the author's homepage and found out that I had collected the author's books a few years ago after reading Hungry's Second Edition. I was so surprised. His strength is still the same.

Teacher, your marriage with Sui He has been turned into a game. Let's consider this too [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] From Suihe Liangyuan, I can't beat it from beginning to end at 8 o'clock every day. Excellent works deserve to be discovered by more people.

Why can't Ji Ling learn more from these second-generation bloggers?

Ten-star praise for Yuyu [blowing kiss]

Overall it looks really good, but unfortunately not many people are watching it.

Without the erosion of God's will, given Fang Zhiyou's ability, apart from anything else, there is absolutely no problem in keeping his sweetheart. It's a pity that God's hand in the original work is still too authoritative.

I feel much more comfortable after watching this one. This is the if line in my heart, rather than just making a mess of two creations and treating it as compensation for the players🐔 Zero

This book has the highest artistic content I have ever read The author please make sure to give Sister Yan'er a good ending

The only one that fits my understanding of the fandom, which makes up for the regrets

As long as it ends well

Very warm feeling

Thank you very much, author

Woohoo! Good luck [crying]

The author must finish it [crying]

Not bad Very pretty.

The writing is very good, how many chapters do you plan to update?

Be sure not to make Pianpian sad [crying]

I saw the original plot, but I played a pirated version before and lost more than 40 yuan.

Is it just continuing part of the memory? Difficult

The writing is good, the logic is coherent, the plot is not obtrusive, and the sense of substitution is strong

I can only say that the writing style is still strong, beautiful, and still powerful.

Good reading [top post], good books written in the first person are rare in Tomato

It continues the delicate description of the previous work, and the rhythm is also more in place. It's hard work!