Adventurer's Diary: My Live Broadcast Room Comes from the Earth

It's pretty cool, but when buying a horse, the protagonists say 5 gold coins, but the boss just says the minimum is 3 gold coins. It's not the boss's reverse bargaining, right? The more he cuts, the lower the price becomes. I laughed to death. After waiting for so many days, I have saved more than 20 chapters. It's a broken cave. If you don't go in, you will instantly lose the desire to read. It's too boring. You can have feelings, but can you have less of them? I thought these last 20 chapters were romance novels.

How to put it, friends who like traditional Western fantasy should understand this evaluation. Although this book is run by AI, you can tell, but the author is very good, at least his outline and details are very good. This book writes what a Western fantasy should be like, what a brave person should be like, what an adventurer should be like, just like a fairy tale, you guys Do you understand? This book gives me the feeling, or the feeling of a book, like a fairy tale, with thousands of faces. At least in my eyes, he wrote a fairy tale feeling, or a sense of story. I have not encountered this feeling in Tomato for a long, long time. Brothers, it may be the joy of finding gold. This book deserves this evaluation from me, a rare evaluation. There are some poisonous points, but they are acceptable to me. One is because the AI is running, which is a medium-level descriptor. The other is that several small problems in the money system have not been handled well, such as bargaining and currency replacement. There are also poisonous points because I have too many history, I don't care at all, and I haven't found them. So far, these are the ——Written in this book and updated to Chapter 97

Still pretty good. But I think the setting of strength is not very good. Things like calmness are difficult to evaluate. It is better to change it to willpower and spirit. Also, the use of sentence patterns is very abstract. It is not that it is used too much. I saw this use almost ten times in just a few chapters. But all in all, it's a pretty good piece of work

Brother, give me five more chapters. I'm dying. Please, brother, just one more chapter. I won't touch it again. Please, brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this again. I really can't stand it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now. I beg you, brother. Please give me one more chapter. Brother, please give me one more chapter. , I'm dying, please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me, I feel like I'm shaking all over, I can't breathe, please, brother, just give it, just one more chapter, I won't touch it again, please, brother, really, just one chapter, I swear I will never touch this thing again [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's so well written, it feels like an immersive read. Inaccuracies and omissions in language and text destroyed the sense of continuous reading. The self-talk during the live broadcast once again broke the reading experience. Live broadcasting to self-talk in front of adventure partners felt completely inconsistent and ruined the immersive reading experience. Summary: Weird chocolate, stale cake, soggy bread.

The writing is delicate, and it is considered a clear favorite among Tomatoes. The plot is also good. The main problem at the moment is that the pace of the plot is a bit slow. It is recommended to reduce unnecessary explanations in the main plot, and these can be put into daily life. The AI ​​auxiliary has been overused, and the main plot is still the same old problem. Too many rhetorics will make people watch boringly. Author, read the article yourself. Do you really think it's a good thing to over-stuff adjectives? Daily use can still make people feel that the writing is good, but the main line is still like this, and the more you read it, the more you read it.

The writing is very good. It is not the old-fashioned Western fantasy style of fighting monsters and upgrading in a hurry as soon as it starts. Instead, it unfolds slowly like an ink painting, and the rhythm is really well controlled. I have a small suggestion, that is, I feel that the interaction mode with the barrage can be appropriately improved. For example, in the future, according to the fan adhesion in the live broadcast room, the top fans will be sent specialties from another world, gourmet food, etc. In the later stage, I feel that it can also open a short-term trip to another world for a few days. Only in this way can the setting of the live broadcast room play its role. Personal suggestion.

I have read more than forty chapters, which is rare. I have read a good book without any mistakes or awkwardness, or the plot can make people immersed in it so that I don't have the heart to find faults. There are no flaws or stupid plots, and there are no flattering jokes that can make people fall into displeasure in seconds, such as being as handsome as the reader Yanzu. I have nothing to say, I am extremely speechless,

The writing is very good, and it has a sword and magic flavor. I really felt a new different world from the words. You can generate some pictures. Recently, there are many pictures of Xihuanhuan on Douyin. They are so in line with your imagination. I am looking forward to the next development.

The writing is very touching and beautiful, and I can't help but want to go to such a different world. . . Because of the environment, architecture, scenery, appearance, clothing, food, etc., A lot of space is used to describe it, and it is modified with gorgeous adjectives. It really gave me a feeling of yearning. . . It's a pity that the brain cannot respond to these detailed descriptions. Many words are written in one glance and ten lines, and there is relatively little effective information entering the brain.

Definitely not AI. Such a delicate writing style cannot be simulated by a mere AI. It has a gentle and gentle feeling that takes all the viewers to reveal the face of a different world bit by bit. There is no violence. To be honest, the writing is very good.

It's okay, the description of the different world is quite good, but the flavor of AI is too strong. "It's not xx's smile, but xx's smile", "It's not xx's action, but xx's action", "It's not xx's posture, but xx's posture" frequently appear. Netizens' comments are also always shocking. They are shocked by the strength of the male protagonist, the beauty of the female protagonist, and all kinds of things.

It's okay, but why does your novel look so much like it was written by AI?

The content of this book: Why did you confess your love to me directly?!😱 This is not the case in Gala game!🎮 You should chat with me more💬, and then improve my favorability ❤️. Occasionally send me gifts🎁, and then have special interactions with me on special holidays🎉. Finally, in a mysterious event in my heart🔮, I confessed to me😍 and I agreed to be with you💞, and then I showed you my special CG🔞. Why did you come up directly and confess your love to me!?😤 Just kidding, it looks great [like] After going to the cave, the plot stretched out a bit too long. I felt like I was just filling in the details and background, and it dragged on for too long.

The slow-paced narrative may make you feel awkward at first if you are used to reading cool stories. The plot progression and character descriptions are long-winded, but this is the characteristic of this book. When you calm down and read it, the descriptions of many characters are more tender, and many details are included in these. It is very good and has a different style.

The setting is pretty good, and the characters are pretty good, but there are too many adjectives. Maybe the author wants to show you a more realistic alternate world, but it's not like adjectives account for one-third of one chapter. So I can only give you 4 points for encouragement.

I don't really like to give low scores, unless it's a particularly vicious one. The author uses "not" but "too much" [face covering]

After reading Chapter 30, the plot of the protagonist is okay, but the people in the live broadcast room are too kind, and I feel like they are not very intelligent. No, but, no, but, except that these live broadcast barrages are just like dementia, they are repeatedly shocked. Have you ever written or modified them using AI? Ah!

I saw Chapter 69 and it was better than I thought. It feels very gentle. I really like this kind of writing. There is no slap-in-the-face plot. Everyone is a good person. There is only Levi's adventure. The connection with the live broadcast is also good. There are no stupid viewers. It is well written [Like]

Please, please update quickly.

I have read more than 60 chapters. It is very good, very gentle, and the interaction with the female character makes me smile. I am looking forward to learning magic in the future! It's best to have alchemy! The disadvantage is that there is a problem with the currency system and prices. 1 Gold = 10 silver. A night's stay costs 5 silver, and a meal of mutton ribs costs a few silver. In this way, it costs 1 gold a day. And I bought several potions, including almost 10 bottles of cure and curse cure, for only 2 gold? It would be better to change it

I don't talk too much. I rarely give five-star reviews. Two words are awesome. If you write them down well, you will most likely become a god. Before I knew it, I finished reading it in one night.

Is this the only way to interact with live listeners?

Good looking, I like many heroines @ If you post an illustration in the future, can you tell me the specific location? Otherwise it will be hard to find in the future, okay?

It's nice to look at, but I personally feel the cover is a bit lacking [eating melon] The pace is too weird. The boss has already come to attack me. Today I have to play and write daily routines all day long and deal with them tomorrow. It makes me anxious and uncomfortable to read. In addition, the author's slow pace makes it seem like he can only write a few chapters about a small thing. It makes reading long, boring and torturous. Who is a good person who adds a few daily routines in the middle when writing a tense plot? !

It's written so delicately that it makes you feel like you want to travel through time.

It was very enjoyable to read, and it gave me the feeling that I could never finish writing it in ten years. What a great book!

There are some flaws, but they don't hide the beauty. It's very gentle and highly recommended.

Like it, come on, more updates Author, if you describe too much, it won't look good. Focus on the plot and stop describing it. Now it looks like you are having an awkward conversation with the reader.

Update quickly, otherwise Das