The Top of the Long Night: the Captain of the Special Forces Leads the National Team

The writing is very good. This is the first time I have encountered this kind of world view. It is quite interesting to me, but one thing is that the protagonist should not keep repeating what he was like in the previous life. There are too many written. I know that I want to highlight the power of the protagonist, but don't keep repeating it. At the beginning, I thought, wow, the protagonist is awesome, so powerful, and so handsome. When I read it later, I skipped it. Of course, the capitalization is still very good. This is a small flaw in my opinion, big, come on.

So pretty! ! ! It's the first time I've seen this type of film, and I think it's pretty good ~ I just chase it every day [Cool] Author, when will Team He come to rescue Yi Shuo or after Yi Shuo was beaten out of the game early by a group of people, Team He exploded [Shy][Shy][Hazardous Shameful] So far, Yi Shuo has been either rescuing the scene or directly entering his personal highlight moment [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] Although I can understand why, I really want to see Team He save Yi Shuo [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's pretty and very novel. It's almost halfway through the repetitive sentences of Hurricane City and Wicked City. There are also times when I suddenly slow down my teammates, which is a bit uncomfortable. But overall the emotional line is very fast and pretty good, worth reading.

This is the first time I write a book of this type. If there is any bad writing, please criticize and correct me! You all may like it! There is a missing chapter between Chapters 5 and 6, and the missing content has been updated in Chapter 5. [Crying][Crying] So how can people make such a big mistake?

It's a good-looking e-sports story with two male protagonists. The male protagonist is a captain of the special forces who traveled through time. He is very familiar with the harsh environment on the battlefield and has a strong psychological quality. When he faces the e-sports captain of the national team, it is a strong alliance and a very positive energy.

The writing of this book may not have been very good at first, with many repeated sentences, but it was improved later. The writing behind it is very good! Xiao Yi brought glory to the country, and Team He worked hard with him. The two grew up and made progress together. Each national team is its own protagonist. Each has its own highlights. Not all the limelight goes to the protagonist, everyone is good, the characters are very vivid, and the supporting characters are not the kind of cannon fodder that highlights the protagonist. Everyone is working hard for themselves. The e-sports article about two powerful people winning glory for the country is really worth recommending. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The writing is very good. I am a little surprised that the free article is written like this. It is completely comparable to the paid article! There are some small bugs. For example, what if a special soldier faces these e-sports players? Their identities are a bit mismatched? Logically speaking, they are all directly crushed, but some games are still unbeatable. Would it make more sense if we looked at the protagonist's identity as a special soldier? In my opinion, special forces can beat ten e-sports players against five. Maybe in my concept, special forces are very strong, so it's a little inconsistent when I look at them. Except for a few minor bugs, everything else is well written!

First. The world view is very novel. For the first time, I saw the combination of special forces and e-sports in the previous life. And the emotional line progresses very quickly. Then. There are a lot of repetitive words in the article, and words that have appeared in the previous article are rewritten in a different way. Also, did Wang Hu start the game against AF? Why is he still asking for a role in the drama? Or I remembered it wrong. Anyway, once I finished writing this, I immediately started devouring it, and I'm looking forward to following up on it. Um. . . Something is a little strange. Play this spring game. Why is it that I am typing in front of the computer and that I am typing in the cabin? And let's talk about the map tie-breaker system. The core is the random map. Later, I talked to YG and told them that it was a system that hadn't been released for a long time. Then when fighting AF, isn't it also a random map? It feels like a deliberate highlight for the protagonist. Of course, it's normal for the protagonist to have highlights, but if the show is all done by one person, what will the team do?

The subject matter is novel and the writing is good enough, and some of the descriptions of the protagonist's soldiers are very attractive, and the layout is large enough.

It's really beautiful. It's so refreshing. It's the first time I've read a story with this kind of setting. It's so beautiful! ! Support our invincible Shuo in all aspects! Hey, don't spoil me too much. It's so sweet. To be honest, I was so excited to read it. It was really fun for the author to write, and it was also fun for us readers, hahahahaha

The competition is written very well. It's fun, but it's not mindless or mindless, and the emotional part is also sweet. I highly recommend it! ! ! ! ! But it seems to be a bit delayed in the middle, so please try your best! ! ! ! ! !

The content is very novel, and there are many interesting points. The protagonists are also very easy to fight with each other. There are also setbacks in the promotion process of the protagonist group, which is not unreasonable. However, from the first few I read, I feel that the soft-hearted mess appears more often, and it will feel like a drama. I hope that the subsequent author can change some expressions. The battle process is also very comfortable to watch. The description is relatively detailed. The step-by-step description of the battle makes people think of the picture in their mind. In short, it is very beautiful.

This book is truly amazing! ! ! ! That's a rare e-sports article! In fact, the character creation is also very three-dimensional, and the scenes are very ups and downs! Not inferior to other famous e-sports articles! I also hope that there will be more updates, but it's simply not enough! ! ! !

I think this setting is very good-looking and it really touched my heart. It is different from ordinary e-sports articles. It is shocking and delicious🥵🔥🥵

It feels very interesting. The story of the special forces winning glory for the country is very passionate🩸The love story is great👍🏻The only drawback is that the teacher's writing is too repetitive, which makes the impression a bit bad👌🏻

It's super good-looking. I recommend reading it. It's a good-looking e-sports article with the passion of a soldier.

Although there is a little bug. But! ! ! Very nice looking, well set up. I feel very attentive [laughing][laughing]

It's a good book worth staying up late to read.

The work is very creative, five stars support.

I really like the characters in this [Adoration] Looking forward to the deputy cp [eating melon]

The author's writing is very good and the story is well written.

Wow, it looks great. I'm looking forward to the follow-up!

A very interesting article, thumbs up! !

The shaping of opponents also creates a sense of oppression, and each duel presents new challenges.

The writing is delicate and nuanced, describing rich emotions.

The story has twists and turns, and it's fun to watch.

The protagonist's motivation to treat his grandmother is reasonable, and his personal struggle echoes the honor of his family and country.

The description of tactical details is professional and rigorous, and it can be seen that the author has done his homework on the relevant content.

The contrast in identity before and after time travel creates reasonable dramatic conflicts and highlights.

The content is novel and unconventional. I really like reading it.