Quick Travel Heartthrob: Carry Out the Evil to the End

The writing is quite good, but the content of heartthrob is a bit too low. I hope that the quality of heartthrob can be amplified. The further you go, the more frustrated you become, and you start to abuse women. The label of heartthrob is no longer there.

I have finished reading the first world. I feel that it matches the character of the heroine mentioned in the introduction. Overall, it is good for a novice writer. The whole pace is relatively fast. Although the first world only has 35 chapters, there are quite a lot of things and the pace is quite fast. The background of the heroine in the first world of cultivation is not bad. She is not frustrated. There is no female competition, but there is some male competition. The only regret is that the heroine is not with the harem in the end. The jealousy of men is strong (pointing). The system of this book is not a traditional abduction system. It's like going to work. There's no penalty for not completing it, but it affects the bonus. All in all, there's no OOC that I've read so far. Keep up the good work [Working on it] [Working on it]

The more Baobao writes, the better he gets, and the heroine has a particularly strong subjectivity! So cool. But the plot needs to be strengthened, it's a bit bland (the writing needs to be more refined). The novel's wording is particularly girl-friendly, and the female characters in it are also quite three-dimensional. There are no mindless and vicious female cannon fodders. Also, the heroine will take revenge when she is wronged, and will not bear it mindlessly. It is not considered an abuse of women, and the degree of abuse of men will be higher later. The charm factor is not very high, but the baby girl is also very charming. After getting along for a long time, everyone will like her. (Baby, reality is already very painful. You don't need to downplay the identity of the heroine in the novel. It will make you feel distressed. Especially the content that favors boys over girls. You can reduce it a little and write more in-depth plots. If it is too heavy, it will be more difficult to read. I know that reality is like this, but we write small stories. Well, it's better to write more about the good aspects and convey some feminist ideas. For example, the author Baobao's wording is particularly appropriate. The heroine in both worlds has suffered a lot because of the preference for boys over girls. We will also feel distressed, and it will not attract readers if it is too heavy.)

The writing is okay. Although the writing style is a bit immature, the story is okay. The heroine does have low morals and no psychological burden. She has the potential of being a sea king. There are no scenes of abuse of the heroine, but a bit of abuse of the male partner. The first story is the best, the second is too short, and the third is unfinished (she just became the empress).

I have seen the first world so far, and there are no words that insult women. The author also calls the heroine as a boy, and calls the hero as a boy. Regarding the hero's family background and appearance, the heroine's first thing is not admiration, but jealousy and praise. There are also many powerful women in the article. The heroine's pregnancies are well received. The Ning Zhen of every world is herself. The first world was very enjoyable, but the subsequent worlds started to abuse women. I felt so aggrieved and suspected that my body was taken away from me.

I almost missed it because it didn't mark the female character. Fortunately, I scrolled back and saw that the heroine was called "young boy" at the beginning, so I knew it was safe. The career line is well written, and the first and third worlds also help a lot of female supporting characters, but the emotional description is a bit abrupt (after all, in the heartthrob genre, readers still pay more attention to the emotional line). If you want to be female-oriented, you can give the heroine more highlights and portray some personality charm, so that falling in love with the heroine will be easy. Generally speaking, the author's female-centered awareness is quite good. I wish I could try female-oriented movies.

Very, very beautiful! Super pretty^ω^

It's good-looking. It describes the process of love. The heroine is well portrayed. She is not a brainless heartthrob.

I think it's pretty cool, but why doesn't anyone see it? This novel is more exciting than many novels, especially The Second Small World. I really like the heroine in it.

Like the first and second world

A very bland heartthrob, the heroine's character is well developed.

Nice! ! Female-centered, please update the author soon! ! Not enough [shy][shy]

Very delicious article. A must-eat for female protagonists.

I like Ning Zhen very much. I like it very much.

The bad girl gets everything, it's awesome [licking screen]