Danger Warning: His Prison

I have read about 20 chapters so far. The characters are very well drawn and very attractive. Some of the author's emotions are written very delicately and accurately. I can sympathize with the many thoughts and hesitations that I have suffered from. But what stopped me from reading is the author's writing style. It's not that the writing style is bad, it just feels inconsistent. Obviously I am reading a novel that should be considered a narrative, but this one looks like I am reading prose. Many metaphors and rhetorical comparisons are a bit tiring to read. The author likes to use the sentence pattern of not x, not x, but x. Sometimes it can appear three, four or five times in a chapter, especially in the early stage when they are not together and there is less interaction, so most of them are various psychological or side descriptions. Good descriptions are a bonus, but too many of them make it feel like reading prose poetry and even a bit embarrassing. In addition, I feel that Gong's feelings are very strong and he has a sunny and cheerful personality, but getting along with each other after being together is very dull. Neither of them feels that they have any big emotions, such as being coquettish and angry, etc., And they even feel a little bit "respectful and respectful" because there is no hugging or kissing in the daily descriptions, which clearly shows that Gong's inner drama is so turbulent. It's not that the writing is too vulgar, it's just that there are so many emotions in the mind and body, and there will definitely be emotional reactions. The two of them are too calm, which makes them feel a bit human-machine. (The above is just the part that I personally care about, and I only evaluate the first 20 chapters I have read. If you don't mind these problems, you will definitely like it. Of course, what I say is not necessarily correct. It is just my subjective feeling)

Well, although the progress is a bit fast (self-feeling), I can't stand the writing style. I like it.

Really nice to look at. The other books are as if they have not opened their mouths. All kinds of incomprehension. Escape. Harm. But the forced imprisonment of this book has risen to another level 😢 😢 😢 😢 😢 😢 I burst into tears.

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The article is slow and clear, well organized, and the emotions are delicate and slow. It is very beautiful.

The plot is very attractive

It's really beautiful. I love watching it.

This novel is always good to read, and the characters are rich in characteristics. He is a sunny and cheerful boy that I like.