I, Changsheng Longniang, Am Watching the Game Against Zhuolu at the Beginning

I put it down after reading the book "The Young Girl" halfway through. This kind of subject matter is very attractive to me. The rough and heavy feeling of history is written, which is very good.

At the moment, I feel it's okay, but there are some things that don't match up. For example, Wen Jumang had already proposed and implemented the field rotation system, and later it became Qingyu who first proposed and promoted it many years later. The plot proposed by Jumang earlier is gone, and it doesn't match up; at the beginning, it was said that Hanba was the daughter of the Emperor of Heaven who fell to earth, and Hanba was also He said that he had lived for a long time, and later he also said that he had seen a living Qinglong a long time ago, but in a few chapters it turned out that he only lived for four hundred years, that it was a vision of heaven and earth, and that he was also called Aunt Qingyu Long. The front and back did not match up. Qingyu said how the word Qing on the wooden sign came from, but later it became Fangxun's, and the front and back did not match up. I'm not sure if there are more, I hope the author can check the plot more carefully, and I hope there won't be bigger loopholes in the future. Come on [like]

The author still needs to respect objective history when writing a book. The three demon concubines of King Zhou of Shang are all relatively controversial historical figures. Let's not talk about the Xia Dynasty and Shang Dynasty. Historically, these two cannot be blamed for the demise of the country, but Bao Si cannot be said. It's hard to say whether it's good or bad, whether it's arrogant to all living beings or infatuated with love. King Zhou of the Shang Dynasty was not unforgiving, Qin Shihuang had his merits and demerits, Taizong of the Tang Dynasty was also mediocre in his later years, and Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty also became corrupt in his old age. Witnesses of history should still respect history [laughing]

This kind of historical novel with the theme of immortality is not uncommon on Tomato, but the setting of the protagonist is also attractive enough. "Dragon", this commonly used emperor symbol in ancient times, was embodied in a woman and a lolita. In the Xia and Shang Dynasties, no one would say anything about it. But once in the Zhou Dynasty, when China's system and even humanistic concepts became more and more clear, the plot at that time would definitely become more and more exciting. Immortality is what many emperors pursue, and it appears in the protagonist. It is a kind of welfare, but also a kind of loneliness. One after another people die in front of the protagonist, but he remains young forever - this is a knife that can harvest emotions, but the protagonist also has human feelings and will feel sad about it, which is also very good. At the same time, I am also looking forward to the next wave of plots. The current progress I am watching here is the late summer and early Shang Dynasty, and the plots of the Shang Dynasty and even the subsequent Zhou Dynasty, such as the rise of princes, the unification of Qin, and the conflict between Chu and Han, will definitely be more exciting. Finally, I wish the author better and better as he writes more. I also prefer reading historical novels, and this one happens to be the 100th one [Love] [Love] [Love]

Fine, fine, no conspiracy theories. That's it, that's it. It looks very natural. The content after the protagonist falls asleep for the first time is a mess. The author writes the interaction between the protagonist and historical figures very well from the beginning. But it is also very bad to magnify one's shortcomings and avoid one's own writing strengths since the first time I cleared my contacts. Change the way you sleep.

It looks good and has a correct world view, but there are some typos.

Add some abilities to the protagonist, such as the ability to transform into prototypes and the ability to master spells, and they will be able to fly like clouds!

Another masterpiece of the historical dragon girl after Shaodian Qingnu, good-looking

The author can change the cover of the letter. I guess most people won't read it because of the cover.

It's great. It's the first time I've seen this type of book on Tomato.

Yes, although it's a bit stiff...

Beautiful and thoughtful

It looks good, but updates are discontinued [crying]

Just don't stop updating. I hope this book can be completed with a few hundred chapters.

History is a cycle, and she is just a bystander. . .

Loli dragon girl, come on, white dragon who writes his autobiography

The author's literary talent is very good, I read it a bit hazy, but I just find it interesting [like]

The protagonist has a good sense of immersion in history, there are rich emotional plots, and the plot does not drag on, making it worth watching. (Come on, author!!!! [Crying])

The writing is very good and has a rich sense of history. As long as the plot does not collapse in the later stages and the timeline advances steadily without jumping around, this book will not be too bad. Come on, author!

Not bad, the subject matter is rare

Personally I think it's good.

It looks good. I recommend updating it ten times a day.

Surprisingly pretty good

Simple, powerful and beautiful

Very good, really good

Looks good, I like it

Wasn't it just the Zhou Dynasty that called the emperor?

Personally I think it's very beautiful

I like this kind of subject matter.

Personally I think it looks good (yes, it's that simple)