Aihong: Yangzhou Is Slow

This book gently rewrites the dark and depressing plot and characters in the original work. It not only redeems Pianpian before she falls into prostitution and gives her a happy ending, but also creates many original plots and narratives. The writing is gentle and delicate, making it a masterpiece. In particular, the author's reconstruction of the image of General Wang really won my heart.

It's very beautiful. There are so many Pianpian books these days. I have a lot of them on my bookshelf. I actually put this one in a long time ago, but I just finished reading it today. The plot is well designed and there are a lot of sweets. The characters are much better than the original.

The author is one of the few people I have seen who can make thousands of dollars. He writes very well and has delicate emotions. But according to my understanding, a chapter of 5,000 words is not good and a chapter of 2,000 words can be written in 5 chapters. It is not like a new author, but I still have to say that the reading rate has plummeted and the income is low. There are advertisements in each chapter. The few chapters are like advertisements. There are only a few, each chapter is left hanging for us to continue reading. It is too long and can easily lead to fatigue. Personally, I know that I want to write but have never done so. I understand a little bit and I can't say it is right. I can only say that I hope this book will get better and that more people will read it and have higher profits. Although writing fan fiction is destined to be low-income, it is just to generate electricity for love.

Basically all the poisonous points of the original work have been changed, and the male protagonist is finally no longer a hypocritical and insensitive coward. It is a masterpiece worth watching.

The author's writing style is very good and the writing is very smooth. There is a touch of sadness in the writing, but there is a sense of finding a glimmer of hope in the sadness. This is what I want to see [crying]

Not bad, but I wish the emotion could be a little more direct [laughing]

Delicious, needless to say

The format of the author's name is like Lanling Xiaoxiaosheng [love] [love] [love]

I haven't finished the original game (I ran away because I was disgusted), but this novel made me cry. It's really good.

Let me go, I know that this You is the character that my favorite protagonist should have. He is bold in doing things and only focuses on the key points. It should be really good. You have done a good job, author [Adoration] After reading this volume of Aihongguo, if the previous volume adapted Pianpian's daily life after meeting Fang Zhiyou just right, then this volume adapted the Ten Days in Yangzhou deeply into the hearts of the people. I saw Fang Zhiyou rising up to resist, seeing Liang sitting on the beam, seeing the moment when Fang Zhiyou and Lin Pianpian reunited, seeing the old Lintou atone for his sins and sacrificing his life to save Fang Zhiyou, and seeing Qionghua and her husband washing the clothes of refugees together. I couldn't help it. I saw the cheers of the service, the "Qionghua" held up by the refugees when they saw off Qionghua, and the "Qionghua" given to Qionghua. I couldn't help it. Everything felt like I had experienced it before, but it was not like what I remembered. The game CGs flashed through my mind, but they were no longer similar to the words in front of me. I couldn't stop the tears from flowing down. The adaptation was so good, and the writing was so deeply rooted in people's hearts.

Aihong's perfect if line, one of the top products on Tomato, it's absolutely amazing

Better than game writing

Children like this kind of happy ending

A book with great staying power

The writing is very good. It has been a month since I read the original work, and I can no longer contain the tragedy in my heart. I will read it again when I feel better.

Except for the somewhat abrupt ending, I feel like everything I wrote was okay👍🏻

It's very interesting. This success made me escape from the game. I am finally not sad anymore. But Lin Pianpian in this novel seems to be a bit too crying, right? [Laughing]

It looks good, the author's writing is good, and the setting fits the original work

It's so good and I love watching it. It's the most enjoyable to finish it all in one sitting.

The character creation has overcome the shortcomings of the original work, the key plot has been cleverly rewritten, the plot is full of layers, and the writing is concise and brilliant. It can be called a superior work in fan fiction.

The writing skills are very good and beautiful. It's just that Brother Fang is a little too reserved, just like Liang.

Engaging content

Great, no need to say anything [admiration]

It's so beautiful, it has an antique feel

There is a little less sugar, which is good

The writing style is very good. It was hard to believe that the poem in the article was actually written by the author.

Yes, it's just that Su Lianyan's role is relatively small.

It's very beautiful, especially during the days when the city was destroyed. I was really in tears and felt so stuck in my heart.

Not bad, not bad (´∀｀*), I hope to continue writing, just to express my regret

Very good, the body looked a little cold to me😇😇😇