Baby, I Was Really Wrong. Give Me One More Chance to Love You

It feels like the author just wanted to write a sadistic script about his past life, and be satisfied as soon as he finished writing it, so he just didn't care about the current life and ended it hastily. If you want to watch torture, I suggest you go in. But I want to see something sweet. . . . Not really.

Could the author write less about the past life? I feel like the sarcoma on the left side of my body has stopped pulsing, my breathing has stopped, and people are confused. Could you please show less scenes of such torture?

It's pretty cool, but why was he so curious in his previous life? Are there any normal people?

In fact, I think the writing is quite good, and it will be my favorite type, but I think things like the past life can be briefly mentioned in one stroke, and focus on what I did in the past life. I don't need to write such a large length. I feel better if I change it.

"Guide to Eating Sweet Articles" (if you have finished reading the lightning protection post and still want to continue reading this book) 1. Skip the "past life" part 2. Skim quickly and don't think too much 3. No need to read paragraph comments ps: The author should be in stand-alone mode now

After reading it for a while, it's quite interesting, but there are too many places describing the past life, and in the first world, part of the plot of the past life looks more familiar the more I read it. Did I borrow it from the wife and children's hot bed 🤦

More sweet plots, and less plots in the past life. If possible, two chapters (not more than five chapters) would be good. I still like the sweet plots in this life. There are no specific statistics in the first world. I feel that there are more abuse plots in the previous life than in this life. [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

Very, very nice. The text is sufficient and not limited to chapters; the content is interlocking, and the plot is very detailed and attractive, making people patient enough to read it; you can feel that the author has built a huge and complete world while writing about the two protagonists, and even the passerby characters have a storyline that is revealed in just a few strokes. The memories of the original plot line make me scratch my head and want to watch it again from God's perspective. After seeing the latest update, I was pleasantly surprised to find that it was not that the protagonist changed the plot by traveling back in time to avoid the original misfortune, but that the people involved in the original plot also disappeared from the story. Sometimes the villain's bizarre appearance and the ending of being punished were humorous and relieving. Looking forward to the follow-up series!

It's not bad. There were a lot of plots in the previous life and they were sad. We got together very late. There was too little love interaction. It was very ordinary.

It looks good, I like the plot and characters, and the writing is good. The only drawback is that there are too many previous lives, but the author said it will be changed. Five stars are worth it.