Endfield: I Picked Up an Administrator

The writing is very good, but I have a little doubt about the timeline 🤔. I originally thought it was the timeline after the administrator elbowed the North Line and crashed, but Perica didn't know the administrator in the post. I remember, didn't Perica join the End after being rescued by the administrator?

The writing is quite good, but the story timeline is slightly different from that of the game, and based on the introduction and plot development, the current love line seems to be 1v3 for the male protagonist (the female supervisor, Zhuang, and Pei ). OOC is unavoidable in fan fiction, but the character description is very logical for the plot development, and it also has the characteristics of the original work, which is pretty good. The current plot is too short. The main plot is probably all in Wuling City. If the follow-up development does not collapse, it will be considered a masterpiece.

Even if you haven't played the game, it won't affect your reading. It's very interesting, very warm, and the story is extremely smooth. From the current point of view, it's a rare masterpiece. But it's a pity that the author's interruptions and too few chapters made me very angry, but I can't do anything about it. Damn it. Author, you must, must, must, must, must, must, must, must, must, must, must, must, must, must, must, must, must, must, must, must, must, must, remember to come back!!!

The author's writing is good and detailed. Although the timeline and details are not consistent with the original work, I just watched it as a private setting 🤦, and Zhuang Fangyi's character is actually relatively gentle, but I feel that the author's writing is a bit in a cold direction. I hope it can be optimized in the future [laughing]

Not bad. "Everyone laughs at me, but I am the funniest. No one helps me reach the top, and I can't get up anyway. Strong people never complain about the environment, but I am a weak person, and I will complain fiercely. Gold will always shine, but I am an old iron. No one can take advantage of me, The word "Shao" begins with the word "Yu", and ends with the word "Yu". He has supported my whole youth. He is my lifelong belief. The two words "Shao Yu" seem so unique. If you break one of his wings, I will destroy your entire paradise. It is hard to change my original intention just to remember the name of the Yu family. The Yu family will last forever! I will accompany Shao Yu on the farthest road with my original heart. "The two words Shaoyu look so unique. If you break one of his wings, I will destroy your entire paradise. No matter how hard it is, my original intention will never change. I just want to remember the name of the Yu family. The Yu family will last forever! Use your original heart to accompany Shaoyu on the farthest road. OK. In 2018, Shaoyu killed the entire Autism City. In 2019, he was the founder of Shenfa. In 2020, he reached the top of 9000 elimination points in double row. In 2021, uzi Jumping out of the gun, one person killed through the professional competition, hunting for K in 2022, resting the team every six seconds in 2023, joining forces to stab the head in 2024 and having a logo He is also responsible for the Hunting Ceiling, Super Body Ceiling, Duel Ceiling, and Chopsticks Spokesperson Yujia. Any one of his achievements is enough for an anchor to become a god. If he doesn't cheat, Shao Yu is still awesome. 666 Shao Yu is awesome. 666 Shao Yu is awesome. 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 The word "Shao" begins with the word "Yu", and ends with the word "Yu". He has supported my whole youth. He is my lifelong belief. The two words "Shao Yu" seem so unique. If you break one of his wings, I will destroy your entire paradise. It is hard to change my original intention just to remember the name of the Yu family. The Yu family will last forever! I will accompany Shao Yu on the farthest road with my original heart. "The two words Shaoyu look so unique. If you break one of his wings, I will destroy your entire paradise. No matter how hard it is, my original intention will never change. I just want to remember the name of the Yu family. The Yu family will last forever! Use your original heart to accompany Shaoyu on the farthest road. OK. In 2018, Shaoyu killed the entire Autism City. In 2019, he was the founder of Shenfa. In 2020, he reached the top of 9000 elimination points in double row. In 2021, uzi Jumping out of the gun, one person killed through the professional competition, hunting for K in 2022, resting the team every six seconds in 2023, joining forces to stab the head in 2024 and having a logo He is also responsible for the Hunting Ceiling, Super Body Ceiling, Duel Ceiling, and Chopsticks Spokesperson Yujia. Any one of his achievements is enough for an anchor to become a god. If he doesn't cheat, Shao Yu is still awesome. 666 Shao Yu is awesome. 666 Shao Yu is awesome. 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666 Shao Feathers are awesome 666

It's so beautiful. I can only say that "the writing is exquisite and moving, the plot is progressive, the concept is profound, and you will have endless aftertaste after reading it." The writing is gentle and powerful, the story is vivid and full, and every word is heart-warming. It is worth reading again and again. The structure is complete, the writing is smooth, the characters are three-dimensional and vivid, and it has a strong sense of substitution. Telling stories from a delicate perspective, both emotional and reasonable, healing and profound."

The emotional line is well written, the writing is also very good, and the plot is okay so far. It follows the characters. The occasional small humor makes people smile, and the writing style reminds me of the dome of the human arsenal. The same goes for the character descriptions, the characters come alive just by looking at the dialogue. So well written

The author's writing is very good. If you like The End, you can take a look. But I have a small question. Since the timeline is after the administrator went into hibernation, where did this female supervisor come from? 😏

The writing is quite good, I hope the author can stick to it 👍👍 This should be the most popular novel about The End so far 👍

The writing is very good, but will it follow the main line later?