Beng Tie: the Fugitive Novelist Is Not Finished Today

By the way, is there a female protagonist? But it's well written. This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight for Mink Cicada and Sun Wukong fought for hundreds of times, but Xue Baochai was too Stronger, if it weren't for Noshou's outer ring + Noxian decapitation Taiwan, this wave of M4 six times strafing will kill you, but I prefer Zhu Ge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man You are proud, don't show off in front of your Brother Liang." Ge Liang was indignant at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this The plot of this book is interesting, the system is clear, and there are many foreshadowings. Fighting arena It's like being there, and the character descriptions are spot on.

This is a novel that cannot be missed. Although the protagonist has never transformed into a Kamen Rider, the spirit of the protagonist and the kind of character that he pays for others have surpassed many so-called serious knight stories, and the author really likes to pay tribute😋😋😋 Overall, it is a good work😋😋

So far it's okay, it has real feelings, the rhythm is good, and the writing is just adequate. It's the kind of article that seems to be relaxing. Finally, make a wish 0+1 Feiying, don't be crooked Hi~ o(*￣▽￣*)ブ

The Sorrow of Ending the War (2 points) King Red will arrive on Earth in three hours. The world's major media platforms have spread the news a lot, talking about and praising his arrival. I have no way of knowing whether it is me who breaks the defense or is powerful. There are different opinions. I just want to eat a burger first. The universe is infinite and life is insignificant. I came from nothing, and naturally I have returned to nothingness. The only thing that makes it difficult for me to let go of my obsession is the hamburger at school. The burger is not big, and the bread is very dry. We met three years ago when I was young. It was black and green, and I didn't taste it. "Wow" it was delicious. Unfortunately, the meal time got later and later. I wanted to return to the enjoyment I once had but had to swallow the crowds. I waited again and again. It's a pity that I didn't return home in a drunken dream, I just regretted that it was too hasty. I don't know when, the patty in the burger turned into homemade veal. Chen Ran had more human touch and less pre-made feeling, but the combination of my touch and the same dry bread made me lose my love for it in the past, or it can't be called it anymore. The answer book at the school entrance recently served hamburgers. They used the same condiments as the school, but they were just as dry as the pancakes. I was hungry and thirsty during the exam in the morning, so I bought a burger, which made me even thirstier. But who can dominate the school's burgers if I follow my example?

To objectively evaluate this book, how can I put it this way? If you say it is very poisonous, it would not be wrong, but if you say it is okay, it is not that good. As for the character of the protagonist, I know that the author wants to make an ordinary person become a hero, but maybe because of those poisonous points, I feel that Eclipse is right. Eclipse's original words: "You are the hypocrite who deceives yourself! You obviously have power, but you still wear that ridiculous moral cloak and pretend to be a savior... Don't you feel disgusted?" There is also the part where Shadow Eclipse asks the protagonist to hand over his power. What I want to complain about is not that the protagonist pretends to hand over his power, but that Eclipse thinks that the protagonist is a hypocrite and still believes that the protagonist will hand over his power instead of quickly escaping with the hostages. The character is OOC. In addition, what I want to complain about is still this plot. Original text: From those noisy and malicious "barrage" intrusions, to her despicable use of civilians as bargaining chips, to the painful trick of "surrendering power" that she had to perform - every step stepped on his bottom line, but he accurately calculated the rhythm of the counterattack. This last sentence is quite disturbing. I want to ask, what is the bottom line for the protagonist? To be more specific, what is the bottom line for the protagonist? A tool for shaping a persona? Or is it a complete set designed for the enemy to wait until the prey steps in? I know the author wants to portray that the protagonist is very angry, but can calm down, analyze the situation, and deal with the current situation. And what does "have to act" mean? The protagonist wants to establish a character without concealing his hypocrisy. It's still the last sentence: every step steps on his bottom line, but he accurately calculates the rhythm of the counterattack. This passage is the inner monologue of the protagonist. The words "Every step was accurately calculated by him" are more like the protagonist savoring his own perfect calculation and enjoying the sense of superiority that I have predicted your prediction. —————————— Also, what I want to complain about is that our fight scenes are really awkward.

This book is very good, but it's hard to find. I have a few questions about whether the protagonist's direction is to open up a new life. Will the protagonist still embark on a fateful journey? Author, have you seen Kamen Rider Holy Blade? The last sentence of the introduction read by the protagonist is a bit like the sentence of Holy Blade. The ending of the story is decided by me. Just ask for the answer to the last question. I hope the author can see it! ! !

This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good.

(If, therefore it is a star") ""The ending of the story is up to me"... How cool is that? This is a line I have thought of for a long time." Bai Chen half-leaned on Xing's body, his weak and feeble look was exactly the same as his excited look just now. "..." He half-circled the increasingly hollow and frivolous body, supporting Bai Chen from falling to the ground. Why... We obviously won - it should be a happy ending, why is it... Constantly squeezing the remaining strength, trying to stop the spread of nothingness, but it is useless. . . Just like the fine sand flowing from the cracks in your hands, you can't stop it. A feeling of powerlessness wells up from my heart "…star" I don't know when my hand lost its color, and I took hold of the hand trying to grasp the quicksand. "Thank you" Bai Chen could feel the warmth in his abdomen. But the body gradually cooled down and the numbness began to spread. It seems that my "existence" is slowly disappearing. Powerful power cannot come without a price. Everything has its gains and losses. "Balance" has already anchored cause and effect. Bai Chen's thank you and the sudden touch on the shoulder made Xing startled. Walter Yang, who staggered slightly to the side of Xing, stopped Xing from squeezing him. Reflective glasses covered Walter Young's eyes, and he shook his head at the stunned star. His many dying experiences and profound experience had told him the outcome in advance. What's more, Xing has already reached his limit. "No..." The last straw that broke the camel's back was that Xing couldn't muster any more energy no matter how hard he tried. "…Thank you and…March.…Let me feel…huh…feel the real…from this false noise." His senses have long since begun to disappear, and his sense of touch and hearing have become sluggish. All this reminds Bai Chen of the limited time he has. He had to try his best to control his exhalation to make his last words a little clearer, but the tears that appeared in the corners of his eyes still tore through his disguise of indifference. "... I really still... Don't want to die." "Ugh... How could that happen?" March ignored her hands that were stained with dust. She kept wiping away the tears that she could no longer control. "I... Haven't eaten the welcome meal prepared by the conductor..." Dan Heng lowered his eyes and clenched his hands into fists to hold himself back from looking away. He wants to witness the end of this person who is traveling with us "..." "Huh, I haven't written... I haven't written the novel that everyone likes..." Xing lowered her head. She turned around and clasped Bai Chen's hand instead of responding. "... I... Really want to... Write our story with my own hands x..." "... I know" Star-gold amber eyes were coated with a layer of water, and no matter how hard she tried, she couldn't stop the sobs mixed in with her response. "I z... Really d... Really want to go pioneering with... You guys." Bai Chen felt his eyes blurry. Star watched as he gradually lost his high-gloss pupils "I know... I know" "... I... Willing to join the Star Dome Train" On March 7th, I could no longer control my bursting tears and threw myself into Jizi's arms. "Star Dome Train, welcome you to join" Ji Zi took Sanyue into her arms, adjusted her condition and responded solemnly to Bai Chen. How could she not be touched by her intellectual nature? "You... Have to keep pioneering! Take my share with you." "... I will..." The gray hair hung forward but could not cover his eyes. Although he pretended to be normal; although he was still mixed with sadness, his tone was not as heartless as before. But it still couldn't cover up the determination of the girl's response. "After all, I... I am the Galaxy Baseball Man" The transmission of obsession was responded to, Bai Chen's lightless eyes turned to the sky and gradually relaxed his struggle with "existence", and finally dissipated in the arms of Xing, leaving only the last lightness. "Wish..." The starry sky train sets sail again, and the stars stand in the observation car and look at the distant stars. "I hope this trip will eventually reach the stars." —————————————————————— There is an observation deck in the corner of the world. Apart from the damaged planet, you can also vaguely see the wreckage of a train in the starry sky across the window. "The crisis in Erxiang Paradise has been resolved, and the train of development has set sail again. And the price is, well, the death of an [unnamed guest]; a novel that no longer has the next page." On the sofa facing the glass, Star Core Hunter Kafka put down the coffee in his hand and took a sip and turned his head. "Then, the observer who knows everything." The black cat sitting on the coffee table on the left had its pupils change from gold to blue in the blink of an eye. And the marks like Möbius strips in the pupils are emitting a glow. "Are you satisfied with this ending?"

It's good to watch. Bai Chen's compassion for the enemy is just right. He doesn't talk nonsense after defeating the enemy. At least it's good on tomatoes. However, he has to stand up when it's time to stand up. The combat power is average at the moment. It's not toxic at this stage. Of course, it would be better if there are less disgusting descriptions of citizens [Like]

After reading this book, I feel 99% The protagonist has a character worthy of emotion rather than writing. More towards a real and living person

Teacher Chu Tongren, in fact, I have always been a fan of yours. From the first page of the first chapter of the first volume of the novel, I have been deeply attracted to you. That afternoon, when I passed by the teaching building of Eyo Academy and caught a glimpse of you by the window, I knew that my heart had been taken away by you, and there would be no more joy or sorrow in this life. If I can see you writing two more chapters, this is my biggest wish in this life.

Actually 4.4 In terms of plot, sacrifice and salvation, kindness and love are the core of the classic. The ending of the story of Erxiang Paradise is worth looking forward to. As for the "Endgame" about risking death and surviving, that is, the content after the first climax, I haven't seen it yet, and I am not looking forward to it at the moment. This is probably due to fan-created themes. After all, everyone's eyes may not be able to see far enough. On characters. The characterization is delicate, the character image is outstanding, and the love line with Feiying is written very sweetly. However, I personally think that the protagonist's behavior is a little bit bitter. I can understand his kindness and his unwillingness to harm innocent people (even though these thugs are really violent and unruly), but you don't have to stand there and bear the dirt thrown at you. It seems that I have committed a mysophobia. Dumb and silly, gentle, kind, emotional, lacking in foresight, and limited in ability. Well. The writing is relatively smooth, and the writing in the comment area is good. (However, yesterday I read almost the latest part in one go, and now I don't continue reading. I have forgotten what the writing style is like). Probably like this

The power of the earth😠 The power of living😠 At the end of life😠when using😠 He is by your side😠miracle👊 (music)～ Wait until the magma deep in your heart erupts😡 I will stand up with the earth👊 Evil, the brilliance you have lost The will is in me😡 Want to protect the one you love❤️ I will fight for this with all my heart👊It has never changed since then Whenever I feel sad 💔 Whenever I feel pain ☹️ At the end of life, when moving forward😐 It's right in front of you, the light🤛😡🖐️ (Gaia)

The teacher's writing is very beautiful, and the protagonist is very energetic. I will continue to follow it! (I am moved by myself [laughing evilly])

Needless to say, it is of high quality, the protagonist is quite smart, and the emotional line is quite interesting. I just hope that I can use some knives to make that little fox sad.

I think the relationship between the reader and the author is extremely close, just like there is a fork in the bucket of instant noodles, and the relationship between the two is like the reinforced concrete No. 42 Cannot be without spaghetti. Regarding this novel, I want to say that Qiong is a man, Bai Chen is a man, and Feiying is a woman. When I read the latest chapter and find that there is nothing left to read, I will practice the art of urging updates. Please, one more chapter, I will do anything [almost crying]

I have fallen deeply in love with this book since I saw the first page, the first line, and the first word. Oh, this damn heartbeat is like first love. I have no regrets in this life. I just hope that in the last period of my life, the author can update it ten times a day [sending my heart] [smile]

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I am a military commander, not good at speaking, but good-looking.

I am a single woman again, and this book is also very well written [Blowing Kisses]

I don't know why. Although the logic is clear and the plot direction is good, it seems that this book always has a strong AI flavor. It looks like the author collaborated with a certain language model to write it. This is just a personal feeling. No offense is intended. The author's writing is still worthy of encouragement.

After re-reading the plot of Erxiang Paradise from the e-book, I discovered that Paradise is a confrontation between ideal and unideal. In one chapter, the villain said that the mother felt lucky because everyone else died and she was still alive. This allowed me to understand the villain, but it was too unideal. These five stars are given because of the details of this novel.

Ah😲? Yunduo☁️😄, da↘da↗da↘da↗da↘, I really want to play Genshin Impact😨, clouds☁️Genshin Impact😙, dang dang dang dang 😊, watch the wonderful things 👍🎊😆, Yun☁️Genshin Impact😄, woo woo woo hoo, I really want to play Genshin Impact😭😭😭Yun☁️Genshin Impact, my friends are here😊😃😆, let's play Genshin Impact together, Yun☁️Genshin Impact! Ahhhhhhhhh😙, I really want to play Genshin Impact😙Cloud☁️Genshin Impact, hahahahaha🤣🤣🤣, play Genshin Impact together, Cloud☁️Genshin Impact, think about it, 🤩I want to play Genshin Impact😋Web cloud, low power consumption and no distortion😌, WiFi network cable 🥰, all can be 60 frames 😍, come, come, come 👏, enter the cloud ☁️Original God This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong, If it weren't for the Noxian's outer ring hanging + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! When Zihan fought with Ye Fan in order to win the spot for the West Meridian, Li Kui went to persuade him to make peace. However, he was tempted by foreign persimmons on the way and strayed into the depths of the lotus root. He started a relationship with Xiao Longnu in Huanshi Water Pavilion, but was seen by Sato Kazuma. So Sato Kazuma got angry and went to another world to conquer the Delta Map with Doraemon, and finally became the plot of the Generation of Flame Emperor. The road to Shu is difficult and dangerous 😨 How to transport grain and grass 🤔 The Northern Expedition is a waste of national power 😔 It is better to imitate Soochow 🤓 There is only one person left among the Five Tigers 😭 Who dares to be the pioneer of the Northern Expedition 🤔 Why not 😡 Since we have inherited the legacy of the late emperor 😏 How can we be stuck in the situation 😡 Uh-huh~ Ha! ! 😡😡Me! ! 😡Wei Yan😡Only advance, never retreat! ! ! 😡😡If Wei Kou takes one hundred thousand Yan to annihilate his lord 😡👊 and lets Cao Cao's thieves invade the world 👊👊👊😡 Yan can also refuse to retreat with all his strength to defeat the enemy 👊 😡😡: Your Majesty! 🤓 👋😡 😡: Why did you break the Ultra Key? 🤓: It doesn't matter if the key is broken, do you think it's still an Astra? 🤓👉⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️😱 😱→😈 😡: Your Majesty, why did you turn Astra into a Babar star? The old top duel field is difficult and dangerous, how can ANBU get to the top? It is better to imitate youth than to waste gold coins with clever tricks. There is only one person left in Da Yin, who dares to be a mad dog and bite him? Why not! Since I have inherited the legacy of Quan Nai, how can I be trapped and unable to move forward? I, Ma Ban, can only advance but not retreat! ! ! If 3000 defeat the three Yin people in a round, Madara will be the one to wipe them all out for the Lord. Even if the underworld brings the Black Zetsu to attack, Madara can also fight with all his strength to refuse to retreat for the Lord to defeat the enemy. Like a fish drinking from water, Komama Madara is here! How dare you!

I'm hungry. It's the best meal I've had in recent months.

Very well. Many updates from the author. It feels like the protagonist is a little unsure of himself. Well, indeed. A notebook, a pen, cause and effect! Let's see who is awesome. Very good, holy shit. I'm I'm I'm not much more than a day old. See Chapter 30. Okay okay.

If nothing else, just, ah [shocked]? Clouds ☁️, da da da da da da [laughing], I really want to [think] play Genshin Impact [admiration] Genshin Impact, dang dang dang dang [laughing], watch the wonderful things, Yun Shen [love]

At present, I think the best single-player Feiying fan novel is too slow. If it is updated 13 times a day, there will be no shortcomings [laughing]

Well, it's very interesting, but when will the author write the book "About My Reincarnation as a Trash Can in Two-Phase Paradise", I really want to read it (if the author replies to this book review, then I will definitely reward the author with three love power generators every day)

Gua, I just wanted to watch this. It was so good and I loved watching it, but I came too early and finished it after a while. By the way, will there be a Erxiang Paradise version of Super Hero Chronicles?

It's nice to read, and the writing style is very comfortable for me. It's the best-looking Fei English I've ever seen, so cheers for the author! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]