HP Murmurs

It's so good to read. Although there are many books about Dumbledore being partial to Harry, they don't have the feeling of being aggrieved by reading it. A-Xu's sense of substitution is so strong, and it's sour to watch. Also, A-Xu always felt that her father liked Lily's children more, but when she traveled back in time to her own generation and met Lily, she was also protected by Lily. Jujuju felt sour, and she also felt that her father The feeling of being so kind to yourself and helping someone who bullies your father. The writing is super invincible and delicate. It is not the kind of writing where the protagonist is always calm. It is especially suitable for the little girl who has no sense of security. She will be very sensitive. Later, after feeling everyone's love, she will become more and more confident and sunny. Anyway, Juju looks good, and Rael's emotional line is Juju.

It's a fairy tale. I haven't seen such a good novel in a long time (although there is a cp on the homepage, but I still dream about whether everyone can give a side story or the cp of Asu is Harry/Xiaolong/Xiaoduo/Twins/Sed/In fact, Rael is not impossible) I am a bit greedy (I like all)

It's very beautiful, but my empathy is a little too strong. I cried from the first chapter. I cried every word A-Xu said. I cried at one o'clock in the morning and my nose and eyes hurt from crying. I especially liked the interaction between Professor Snape and A-Xu. The family relationship was so good.

The writing is very good. I have a close relationship with Sri Lankan teachers. I'm not bragging at the moment. I hope you can write more about the relationships between colleges. I love group portraits and I love the unity 😄. I hope baby A-Xu can have his own college friendship line and life. I hope A-Xu will be happy in the future~ I'm still curious, who is Asu's CP, Draco? Theodore also appears quite a lot.

It's quite good-looking, the pace is fast and not boring, and the emotional line between the father and daughter taught by He Si is particularly good (the love between family is indeed invincible and makes people's hearts warm when watching it). A-Xu has also been growing up. She is a very good little girl ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ ) I really want to know who A-Xu's cp is🥺Personally, I think the cb line with Draco and the Malfoy family is very good. There is no need to kiss each other. There is more than one kind of love₍ᵔ･•･ᵔ₎

The author's writing is very good. Who will be the heroine's CP? It couldn't be Gryffindor, after all, the poor old professor would probably be pissed to death. Said? But I feel like the heroine's character, his love, doesn't seem to be able to give her a sense of security. So could it be Draco the Snake? After all, Malfoy is family-centered.

Zundu looks great!!! The emotional line with Rael is so exciting!!! The heroine is not a perfect character. She has her own worries and sensitivities. She is easily hurt and is used to depression. However, she gradually becomes bright and cheerful when surrounded by love. Although she is good-looking, she is not the shocking beauty that is standard for the protagonist. Her whole personality is full of charm [Send my heart] [Send my heart]

Ah Xu should learn to love yourself. You are the best in the world. Don't worry about others not liking you, because there are many readers behind you to support you. I hope it is he. The author has created the image of Ah Xu very, very perfectly, which is very three-dimensional, and I think the writing style is also very good. I hope the author will keep making more improvements.

The character descriptions are particularly good, especially when writing about Ah Xu's feelings. My heart was tugged, and I could clearly feel the emotional changes of each character. Some of them are the author. I was kidnapped. Originally, you wanted to update one chapter. After I bargained with the robber, I succeeded in updating ten chapters.

First of all, I really, really like this book!!! What follows contains some spoilers, so proceed with caution. ˶>ᗜ<˶ Let me first analyze the author's portrayal of Ah Xu. In fact, it is very common to have a setting like an orphan, adopted by multiple people and then given up. I even suspected it was another cliche at the beginning, but the author's shaping of the entire character made me change my point of view: ①Character design: She is not a cool heroine. A-Xu is not perfect. She can be said to be sensitive and weak at the beginning, but we can see that A-Xu becomes more confident and stronger little by little, rather than the kind of change that happens all at once (which is not realistic at all), but it is more touching. ②Inner portrayal: Ah Xu's inner monologue can be said to be very worth watching. She seems to be a real person. I can even resonate with Ah Xu sometimes and understand Ah Xu deeply. ③Plot: First of all, the author's plot is still very compact, and sometimes it can shock people. For example, A-Xu's desire is for herself, and the reaction after traveling back to eighteen years ago and discovering the grudge between Sirius and the Sri Lankan religion, and traveling back to fourteen years ago to save... Regulus (feeling sorry for Asu) ④Emotion: The father-daughter love between A Xu and Si Jiao is a two-way affair!!! Then the friendship and sense of CP between A-Xu and others is really great (highly recommend Theodore!!!), It's very natural and there is no deliberate attempt to forcibly strengthen the emotional line. ⑤The author is very active and enthusiastic: I love you teacher (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ Finally, here is my little suggestion and selfishness: I hope that A-Xu will have his own partner in the future, not to fight alone all the time (｡í _ ì｡), but to understand that he is good and deserves to be unconditionally favored. Other people's plots can also be added in. The most important thing is that I hope the author can update twice a day (>ｽ<)