The Game Has Arrived, and the Law of Death Has Begun to Dictate Eternity.

After reading it for a while, there are no bad points. It has surpassed 80% of Tomato books. I feel that it is a very classic fantasy novel style. The writing style will be better if it is improved, but overall it is good. Five stars encourage it. I feel that the writing style is indeed too immature, and some of the plot descriptions are rather exaggerated, which is a bit different from my initial expectations. I am a bit disappointed. Of course, if you can ignore these, you can still watch it.

Not bad, not bad. Not a saint at all. The damage is quite big. As far as the performance is concerned, it is invincible at the same level [laughter] Let's just write the protagonist to death. Aliens are arrogant in the secret realm of the school competition. There are life-saving equipment, which is the third level. The protagonist fights life and death with the students, always betting on luck, and there are no life-saving measures. The most is the second level.

For works that score 8~9 points (I rarely get above 9 points), the first is the necromancer. Finally, he is not a mage who can only summon skeletons. What kind of necromancer is that kind of mage? Then there is a sense of satisfaction, the logic is very smooth, and there are no inexplicable emotional scenes. The psychic hopes not to become the heroine. The protagonist's crushing force is enough, not the kind where he fights for his life after being cheated and there are a group of people who can fight him 50-50. Anyway, it's on my recommended book list (I have a recommended book list on my homepage, although no one reads it, but all the gold I've mined in my history is in it) It is said that there will be a heroine. I didn't pay attention when I watched it. I thought there was no heroine. It will depend on the situation when the time comes. If it is a mess, I will withdraw.

I feel that the writing is okay. As a novice writer, this one is really well written. What stands out is the knowledge-oriented feeling of the mage flow, and then adds some infinity and the like. The writing of dungeons and the like is relatively average. It is not considered to be very good, nor is it too bad. The writing of Vientiane Paradise is a bit thin, the struggle is not reflected, and the excitement is not outstanding. The plot inside feels quite average, but I feel that overall it is better. And the author, for your extraordinary system, you can take a look at Qi Peijia's Super Mechanic. How similar are your two systems? Well, refer to that system and then improve your own settings. I feel it will be more complete and better. His one also follows the five systems of mind, machine, mage, superpower, and martial arts. He also has a system game. My feeling is that it is similar to leveling up and adding points, but there is no copy. You can refer to his system. The second one is about the growth and setting of the protagonist, as well as his necromancer system. I suggest you take a look at Samsara Paradise. In the early and middle stages of Samsara Paradise, there is a supporting character named Solomon. He is in the undead, technique, and mage system. If you refer to his character to improve your own settings, I feel that the undead system is more difficult to write now, and Solomon's character-like necromancer is a relatively novel point. You can look at his way of diverging ideas and improving inspiration. If you still have that copy, you can read more novels such as Horror Paradise, Reincarnation Paradise, My Healing Game, Infinite Horror, and learn more. The copy of Thriller Paradise mainly comes from the author. He reads those literary works and the like, which is not easy to write. The copy of Samsara Paradise in the early stage basically comes from that fan, so I won't refer to that one. The copy in the middle and later stages still comes from Hunyou. So I feel that you can read more about the plots of various games. You can refer to the games that are much older now. Combining fighting and exploration, or DNF, Dungeons and Dragons, they are all very good.

It's pretty good, but it's a bit deliberate. Every dungeon is an extreme comeback (one dungeon doesn't seem to be). It's quite refreshing, and it's also exciting to fight. If the heroine is that fourth-level psychic, she can fight against Lu and his wife. But all dungeons cannot be that difficult, and the final bosses of each dungeon are outrageous. There is no obvious poisonous point. It took three days to catch up, update on August 2nd. But I feel that if the dungeon is a little more difficult, normal characters can pass the level. Rule-based monster novels are just that kind of monster. No matter how difficult it is, it is rare for everyone except the protagonist to die (I mean it is a small part compared to all the rule-based monster stories. I have read two rule-based monster stories before that were very difficult. The pass rate was very low. Only the protagonists passed the level two or three times, and then new people from other countries were replaced)

Currently there is no cp (no ambiguity), Shuangwen Upgrade stream, Academy stream, Ten Thousand Races stream (not updated yet, but when it comes to alien races and battlefields, that should be the direction of all races), the protagonist is an old 6 attribute, and has the kind of persecution paranoia, especially when a foreign remnant emerges from the big sword, threatening to die together immediately, and when making a contract to squeeze, the content is sent to the tutor. Anti-secret, with an online IQ (I thought he was being mean when he ravaged the alien alien, but it turned out he was trying to see if the opponent had any trump cards [laughing and crying]). This alien is a female, but the protagonist puts his life first and interests later. A Sigma man can only see how much knowledge he can squeeze out of thousands of races. Those who like to watch no cp + old 6 + super cautious will find it very comfortable.

I've only read 5 chapters, and the progress is relatively slow, which is normal. If you mind, I suggest you just quit. Let me talk about my thoughts about the heroine. I think we can write emotional scenes in the way of "company is the longest confession of love". When forming a team, add a little foreshadowing or details, and then slowly reveal them later. People say that love grows with time. Of course, it's just a suggestion. After all, I'm just a reader, not a professional writer [face covering]

Yes, it updates quickly and has more exciting features. It belongs to the Army of the Undead style that adds quality and quantity. It is also a long-range turret. It is a genius style. Although it has cheats, it is also a genius.

It has the flavor of classic online writing and believes in the power of orthodoxy. [Laugh]

There is a story and growth. I like this kind of novel the most. In the next copy, I change some equipment to get a skill and a few attributes. The author surfs the Internet intensively, and there will be some moderate jokes from time to time, which is perfect.

I've read Chapter 45, and there's nothing wrong with it. It's not a short story, it's not verbose, the setting is relatively new, and there are fighting scenes. I can keep reading, but it's just too small to be read. Please update more. If you stick with it, I'll get a 9.2 Rating.

It looks good, some parts are classic, but it doesn't affect the plot. Overall, it's good-looking and enjoyable. It's not just about summoning the undead to push the picture. The undead are just garbage fish. The protagonist's physical body is really strong. It's a bit like Foego. I can only give four stars to this heroine.

It's a pity, originally it was for the single female protagonist + the undead, but the undead saw it, what about the emotional line of the single female protagonist? Basically, no one with persecution paranoia completely treats the heroine as a tool. If there is a data for the relationship line, the favorability level has increased from -50 to 10. Basically, there is no breakthrough. There is also a symbiosis contract signed, and there are hidden clauses. I just don't trust the heroine (I always think that the heroine wants to harm him), but I ask every time I have questions. The heroine, the heroine also helped me, she didn't hide her secrets, she explained patiently, she was just a stone, so she should have a little trust in her, but as soon as something went wrong, the heroine was ready to fight to the death, which is really a pity, someone else would have given up the job a long time ago, and she felt worthless for the heroine (if you said that the writing was against the character, then just treat me as if I didn't say anything) I hope the author will write more about emotions in the future. The book is very good and the heroine is well written, but she is really unhappy. Come on, don't be a mess or a eunuch, look forward to a good ending.

Similar to the necromancer from previous years. Mr. Huo's book. If you have seen it, I won't say anything more about it later. To be precise, it is an inheritance of Master Huo's style. If you like reading that one, you should be in luck with this one.

It looks great after integrating knowledge to establish the prototype of your own skill system, especially the combination of physical rules and mage knowledge! This skill has depth when used, and it is powerful even if you don't know how powerful it is! The style is a bit like that of a truth wizard or a classical cultivator. They are interlocking like the gears of a gearbox and an engine, precise, logical, and explosive! Of course, there are flaws if you look into it more deeply, but at least it is better than a plain-water novel and has content!

Not bad, very standard campus powers, cheats for the protagonist, deus ex machina, good and bad luck, and unique professions. It seems that there is also an old lady with a broken soul.

It looks good, you can see the update after just swiping. It's the kind of necromancer who needs to make powerful undead by himself. The setting structure is quite complete, and the plot doesn't drag on.

The framework content at each stage is relatively complete The origin of world setting skills is not brainless, it is supported by knowledge base sources. But it is too similar to the content of reincarnation. It feels like I want to write about a four-person group of reincarnations cheating each other, and in the book only the protagonist is crushing and making them suffer (if the protagonist is originally made invincible, it falls into the invincible flow. For example, in reincarnation, the priest and Byakuya can trip each other up, and the cooperation also greatly weakens the benefits that the other party can obtain under the premise). The settings of clothes and shops are also similar. The description of the fighting process failed to give me a sense of urgency, and the undead advance did not give me the impression that it was a natural disaster.

It's good-looking, and currently non-toxic, surpassing most tomatoes.

It's good-looking, I love watching it, there's nothing bad about it, I just hope I can keep it up in my senior year of high school [face-covering] [face-covering]

It's not bad, but when the introduction said that the mage system was disliked because of the conditions for changing jobs, I thought it was another kind of mindless mocking novel. This is not the case. Even if the protagonist chooses the mage system that everyone dislikes, there is no ridicule or anything. At most, he is prepared to secretly give the special reward for the protagonist to the second place. However, because the protagonist got three savings, he also paid for the reward out of his own pocket. This is good and fits the character.

It was a bit uncomfortable to watch at the beginning, but the more I watched it, the more I enjoyed it. It's so thundering and beautiful\(//∇//)\ It's pulled in the back, it's not as nice as the front, but it's still okay.

I haven't read many books, and The Super Mechanic ranks among the top five books I've read. Although many people say that The Super Mechanic is a novice, but it's not easy to write a basic novel well. Otherwise, there wouldn't be only one Super Mechanic that has been published in so many years. This book can be regarded as learning the essence of The Super Mechanic. I would like to call it The Super Necromancer [laughing]

I can't wait. It's a very classic necromancer novel that has a shadow of the world view of the Yumin novels. I'm really looking forward to the later development. I'll comment again later. I hope the author won't stop updating QWQ

The overall story is excellent, the characters are intelligent, the protagonist is strong, and there are no ambiguous plots. But my actual rating is four stars, and the one star deducted is because of the use of AI, which has about 10% AI content, but it is also fatal to sensitive readers. The biggest problem is that there are too many attributive adverbials, half of them are included in a sentence, and it is okay to read and pick up quickly, but it is really unbearable to listen to the book. "The next moment, a terrifying silence, as if it could forcibly cut off the sound of the wind and the boiling sound of the sea of blood, suddenly appeared." This kind of sentence is really exhausting to listen to.

It's pretty good and makes me want to read more.

I don't mean to brag, I rarely write reviews. I would like to support the author this time. The author is temporarily lacking in writing skills, but the plot has a good rhythm and feels a bit like reincarnation.

Not bad, I hope it's better than the last book

It's okay so far, it just depends on whether the author is rigorous enough. I boasted later, so I added one star.

It's very interesting to watch so far. The protagonist also has a good brain.