Star Dome Railway: Can You Become Stronger by Writing Novels?

It's okay, but I am a chef and I have to say something. Only when Aren faces Dan Heng and Jingliu will he be unable to suppress his demonic yin. Normal tasks and battles can be carried out with his own consciousness. So it's not necessary to have a word spirit to stop the blade.

It's very interesting, the plot is pretty good, but it's a little lacking. The Star Core Hunter did have a conflict with the protagonist. I read the comment section. According to my own subjective feeling, the protagonist mainly changed Elio's script, but his own conditions were too poor and he could easily go down a bad path. So Elio will ask the star core hunter to give the protagonist a warning before he has absolute strength. It's better not to touch the script. I hope the protagonist can become stronger soon. I will rewrite the ending of the story.

I really want to see the Heroes of Omphalos become a driving book, and then take on a completely new form. It's really exciting. When can the author write it? I beg you.

So far, there are no big problems, but maybe it's because I'm reading this book from a God's perspective. When the protagonist was defeated by the star core hunter for the first time but not directly killed, I should be able to realize that this time it was just Elio's deliberate action. The purpose is to let him understand how weak he is. After realizing it, the protagonist can even make a promise: Elio, I will definitely make your cat head bald in the future!

There are still some shortcomings. For example, the fusion of different worldviews seems a bit strange at first, and the plot is occasionally awkward. Some operations are too idealistic (in a sense, they cannot even be considered shortcomings) and are relatively naive. However, the flaws do not hide the virtues. Whether it is the entrustment of Teacher Thomas or the birth of a new fantasy book, they all have their own ideas. Rather than relying solely on plug-ins to refresh combat power, there is an intersection between improving abilities and gaining power and the story. Personally, I enjoyed the creation of the Mole Party and Guardian Heart fantasy books. The story of the birth of beauty and hope not only carries wishes but also brings strength. Yes, this is what I want to see! ! ! ! This kind of persistence in justice and protection of hope is the Kamen Rider I want to see! Of course, maybe because there are no emotional disputes or anything like that, the story doesn't have many exciting points and seems a bit bland. But I think this is an advantage. Many beautiful and simple feelings shine more brightly in the ordinary. All in all, I hope I can continue writing. A rating of 6 points is definitely low. Come on, author!

It looked like there was nothing wrong with it, except for the weird elbow from the star core hunter. I hope I can add opportunities for action later. The plot was too long, and there was nothing to watch for several days. It was so boring.

Come on, I believe you are a great writer like Mr. Toma

Well enough. The author's writing is very good. The battle description is very detailed and the relationship with the train crew is very good, but it is a bit too ambiguous with the female character. If you want to write a female protagonist, please mark it for me. If you don't want to write a female protagonist, don't make it too ambiguous. That's the point. There are also only a few knight-errant novels written by Beng Tie, and the other one you and I are reading appeared at opposite speeds in its actual text form. Your big form appears too quickly. The other book comes on very slowly. I hope the author can create more derived forms. Now they have reached a transitional state. Your enhanced form dragon knight has not yet appeared, and you have entered the transitional form. Well, that's a little bit. It's also possible that I didn't see it clearly. I hope the author can correct it. @ Is the philosophy is not folded in the origami plane @ the lightest oxide Okay, I deleted one of my previous comments. Because when I look back, I still feel it was too arrogant. This is my new understanding. It's just that I saw some shadows of books from the author's book. My first two comments may be a bit one-sided. This time I want to explain it. I probably overestimated the author's strength. Because the author is still a novice. I'm too arrogant. I reflected. The author still has to break away from the shadow of several books. The author still has to find his own style, otherwise. This book is very unknown.

There is no doubt that this is a real Kamen Rider story. He is a true hero who protects the smiles, kindness and innocence of children and the beauty of the world, and uses his strength to stay on track.

The story is a good one, but the protagonist is too weak and relies entirely on the power of the holy blade. Without the power of the holy blade, the protagonist has no power to resist.

Slowly growing up, the writing is okay, but I feel that the male protagonist will not confess his feelings to Ah Xing or March. I am waiting for Ah Xing or March to fall in love with him and then fall in love with this wooden man. Let me say "Brother, you smell so good"

Personally, I think this book is generally good. Although some parts may have flaws, I understand that after all, not everyone can do what Teacher Toma did. Although I am curious whether the enhancement book for the original Holy Blade is not planned to be created by myself, or there are other plans. After all, I still like Storm Eagle and Journey to the West very much.

It's not that Wudi Wen will grow up. I like to watch Wudi go out and turn right.

To be honest, this book can be said to be one of the few masterpieces in the Tokusatsu ➕ Star Iron group. The protagonist truly possesses the spirit of chivalry. It is not like other novels where he transforms and fights monsters. All the plots are to prepare the protagonist for his appearance as a saint. The plot is reasonable and not brainless. Although it drags a bit in the middle of the Beloberg chapter, it is really enjoyable by the end of the chapter.

It's a very good book. The protagonist is not Long Aotian, who has a system, nor is he a person who inherits all the power and refuses to eat beef. He is just an ordinary person who is entrusted by Teacher Toma to write the ending of the story. He will grow up, encounter strong enemies, and be confused.

There is no inexplicable gain of power, not relying on the system or other miscellaneous opportunities, but relying on one's own story to obtain fantasy books. This is the real holy blade knight who opens the manual and speaks [eating melon]

Good luck! It's just that I discovered it early. Most people usually read cool articles. The latest chapter of this book is a bit frustrating. I'm ready to read it. After reading this plot, I will read [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

Come on! It's much more interesting than those boring, brainless invincible novels. At least every new power the protagonist acquires is obtained by himself, rather than being drawn out by some so-called system drawing cards.

Come on So far, it's great and nothing bad.

The protagonist has the spirit of chivalry. What I like the most is that the protagonist takes three little animals to the fairy tale world and writes their own story [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts]

Very interesting, from the beginning to now You can take a look [blowing kiss]

This is what I want to see! Mouth! Protect children's innocent smiles!

It's a pretty good book. The characteristics of the Holy Blade are well reflected.

The content is substantial and the structure is clear. I like it very much [love]

This is exactly the Kamen Rider I want to see [Sending my heart]

It's okay. This book is quite good. The protagonist is also considered to have chivalry. This is a fun book. I hope the author can work hard and update it so that it doesn't end unfinished.

I give myself a good review. If you have any ideas or want to criticize, you can tell me. As long as it makes sense, I will try my best to correct it! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's been a long time since I've seen a protagonist gain such power [crying]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's a good book, but too little