Double Wear: Living in the City, Crazy About Cultivating Immortality

The writing is okay, the plot is okay, but the plot is too detailed. The author pays more attention to dialogue and uses dialogue to portray the protagonist's character and intellectual logic. When writing about scenery and food, you need to spend less time thinking and typing less. There is no need to write about scenery and food in detail. If you write too much, it will be like watering down. Four stars presented. To encourage.

The author obviously has some experience. Although it is a refreshing novel, it is very restrained in the pretense and slap-in-the-face plot. There is no young indulgence, which is very suitable for old bookworms. As a middle-aged laid-off worker, the protagonist has experienced both high-rise buildings and the bottom of the sea, and his state of mind has become much calmer than that of ordinary people. He travels between the two worlds and behaves more securely without being irritable. In a different world, after the ceiling of the strength of the surrounding enemies has been set, the author does not endlessly improve the strength of new enemies and sticks to the bottom line, which is good. The protagonist's strength improves very quickly. There is not much description of the training process, and the focus is on the plot. All in all, I highly recommend it. I hope the author will keep writing and not stop!

This double-crossing novel is one of the most beautiful I have ever seen, and the details are well handled! I hope that I will write carefully in the future and not leave it unfinished. I will continue to pay attention in the future!

It's okay, the plot is well written, and it's interesting for me, an old bookworm. The writing was okay at first, but then it became more and more outrageous, and the protagonist became more and more eccentric.

It's basically a parallel line from the fantasy book about enduring hardship and enjoying happiness in the city. The settings are basically the same, the plot is basically the same, the women's professional backgrounds and family conditions are almost the same, but the writing is not bad, so give it four stars for encouragement!

The writing is smooth and the details are in place. Please read it patiently. It will definitely be enjoyable. I hope the author will keep up the standard in the future and don't be lazy!

It only took 4 seconds for the golden elixir to explode 400 meters with full strength. He knocked a bear away and covered himself in dirt. He punched the bear and killed it. The golden elixir was so good during the period [covering face] that Goldfinger was undefended. Anyone who has known him for a few days knows that he can cross boundaries [eat melon]

I have read Jin Liu's Double Penetration and Two Worlds, and the setting you wrote at the beginning is very similar to his setting, even almost the same. At first, I thought it would be boring. After all, it would be boring to read a similar novel. Just like I hesitated several times before I started reading "Two Worlds", and I couldn't stand it, but the author has written something new. I don't know what's new. I just feel like I can keep reading, and I have this expectation. I don't know much about writing, after all, I am semi-literate, but I feel that novels with too few words are good novels.

The writing is good, there is no cliché pretentiousness, the plot is also very detailed, and there are no obscene expressions, it's not licking a dog or anything like that.

The opening is one of the best in a double-crossing novel. The author has a pretty good life. It's not bad. I like it.

A very interesting novel. Although many novels about the two worlds have been written, not many can make people feel comfortable while reading them. This one is okay. Although there are many female protagonists, hey, it's understandable for men. Moreover, the protagonist is very particular about what he does, and it can be seen that the author has a lot of experience.

I have read a lot of time travel novels, and this one is better! The logic is clear, the narrative is unhurried and unhurried, the protagonist is calm in situations, neither humble nor arrogant, does things in an orderly manner, and has a resolute and decisive character. Very pretty.

Pretty good, logic and IQ are both online

It's a very layered book with delicate characters. It's a very good book. I hope the author will update it and speed up the writing.

The beginning of the story is good. The male protagonist is a man with rich work and life experience, stories and a high level of thought. He is full of expectations for the subsequent plot and has the desire to read on.

In fact, overall it's okay, nothing major. Chapter 464, boring.

Let me start by saying that the level of the first few chapters is really good, I hope it will be the same in the later chapters, otherwise I will have to come back and change the points if it doesn't work well in the later chapters. The backend is really not that good, it smells a bit like AI, so I'll give it two and a half stars at most.

Looks comfortable, hope to maintain the standard and become popular

This book is very good, and it is the best book for double-crossing games.

The novel is so smooth. I just don't know much about the Fox Clan. Nine-tailed fox, 2 tails are the foundation, 3 are the golden elixir, 4 are the Nascent Soul, 5 are the gods, 6 are the virtual holes, 7 are the combined ones, 8 are the tribulations, and 9 are the great vehicles (earth immortals). The true essence of the Mahayana period has been converted into immortal power. You can also ascend during the tribulation period, but if you don't have enough foundation, you can easily fail to survive the tribulation. The success rate of overcoming tribulations in the Mahayana period is very high. After failing to overcome the tribulation, he cultivated as a Loose Immortal. Loose immortals are also mortal immortals. It only happens once every thousand years. It has to go through nine thunder tribulations. If you survive it, you will ascend. If you cannot resist it, you will turn into ashes under the thunder tribulation.

A good start! No water! It's worth watching, keep up the good work! ! ! ! !

The charm of a classical story style, with a touch of fantasy~

It's very nice and the best thing is that it doesn't change the city.

A very good book with real and objective reviews. I recommend everyone to read it.

The writing is good, not verbose, not nonsense, the character is mature, not holy, keep up the good work!

Looks good, kills decisively, and does what he needs to do. [Adoration]

It's very interesting, and the mentality is very immersive. I hope I don't want to be a eunuch.

I prefer this type of book, but the updates are too slow.

Not bad, but updates are too slow

It's so beautiful, but it only has a score of 6.9. You guys are going too far.