The Yandere Lady Upgraded and Became a Saint

The writing is very delicate, and the character of the heroine is also very lovable, cute, but also very smart and decisive. The characters of the supporting characters are also well portrayed. Xiaoyun is my favorite maid in so many novels I have read. My father, eldest brother, Dr. Xu, Wang Ying, etc. Are also all very fond of me. After reading Novice Village, I feel that the combat power is also very reasonable. There is no invincible crushing, and there is no frustration of being overwhelmed all the time. I can follow the heroine to practice immersively. The author's replies are also very fast, but in fact, I feel that it is not necessary to reply to every comment with a thank you. It may be better to choose interesting comments and reply with more valuable content. After all, updating twice a day is quite hard, and too many repeated replies will also reduce the impression.

The book is very good, the rhythm is good, the wording is not particularly gorgeous, but it has its own classical beauty, but the emotion needs to be polished and optimized, it is not naturally sensational. The system is similar to the golden finger with dark blue dots. It is fun to watch the heroine kill everyone, but the title of the heroine needs to be optimized. It feels weird to call the heroine brother. After all, the heroine is a woman, so she still calls her sister or eldest sister. A title like "Meizai" is more appropriate. Come on, author, and look forward to updates [Note]

I will tell you in the most straightforward, direct, least roundabout, most objective, most correct, most systematic, most truthful, simplest, easiest to understand, and least pretentious way: This book is a blast and must be favored!

It's not bad. The heroine is relatively three-dimensional. She is submissive before she is developed in the early stage. She will take revenge when she takes the blame. She can be regarded as the image of a heroine who combines pleasure and revenge in my mind. Occasionally there are some minor flaws (such as the fire has to be burned on her body to be considered painful, and The one who didn't tell the benefactor's daughter truthfully about the benefactor's death date is a minor irritation.) But the tomatoes are perfect enough, because it is impossible for a person to be perfect in everything. For example, I stayed up all night, and there is an exam today, and I am even more thinking about how I can pass statistics,,,

It's good-looking. The main character doesn't write about romance, but the story about family and friendship is pretty good. The love of the people around me is also written very well and realistically. The writing style is quite good, and the characters are very three-dimensional. People are not black and white. Good people have something to stick to in their hearts, and bad people are not always bad or bad. The most important thing is that it is rare to see a female protagonist's "killing monsters and upgrading flow" written in such a way that people can't help but follow it and can't get enough of it. It's tied, update soon! ! ! ! !

Heroine story + system story + fantasy story + time travel story (soul travel) + great fighting! The protagonist has no intimate contact with any men, and the protagonist is neither a virgin nor a heartless person. There are no degrading words in this novel. The background world view of the novel is an imaginary ancient world, with special abilities or means. The background world of the novel is probably Zhongwu. The plot is good, the division of combat power is reasonable, the combat power system is clear, and there are plots of cross-level battles and the use of special means to assassinate high-level characters. Judging from the plot, these plots are reasonable. This novel has a lot of fighting plots. The protagonist is either becoming stronger or on the way to becoming stronger. The protagonist still attaches great importance to the relationship between her and her friends and relatives. The protagonist is not ruthless. To sum up: this novel is still very good, the writing is excellent, there is a lot of room for development, and there are not too many poisonous points. I still support this novel very much. [Laugh][like] There are currently only more than a hundred chapters in the novel. Judging from the current plot, no one has the power to destroy the world. There are nine levels of combat power in the novel. The current battle scenes in the plot are only battles of the fourth level. The combat lethality of the fourth level is only equivalent to an anti-material rifle at its highest.

Very martial arts... The point is, I have read so many novels with female protagonists written by male authors. Only this one made me suspect that the author is not a male but a female, because the writing style is too delicate... But after reading the author's bookshelf, it is indeed a male author, and the writing style is so delicate. I especially like the martial arts style of the Chinese martial arts studio. I quit it for a long time after reading the longevity article of Qidian Women's Channel. Finally, someone can write such novels of the martial arts Chinese style of the Chinese martial arts studio. I love it... Of course, my writing style may not have reached the level of a big shot like the Immortality Chapter, but I can already see the demeanor of a big shot... I believe that I will write better and better soon.

Big cheers to the author. One force can reduce ten levels, regardless of your internal and external strength, strong force can work wonders, if one punch doesn't work, just add another punch. Violence, violence, violence, the underlying code of rights [Like] [Like] [Like] The world depends on fighting~ I hope it doesn't collapse later, it's hard to come up with something good and normal [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

It's like the Jianghu atmosphere of traditional martial arts novels, but it's not as difficult to understand as the writing style of the older generation of martial arts authors. The female characters' thoughts and behaviors are very reasonable, and the plot, rhythm, and writing style are very comfortable. It's well worth reading.

It's very interesting, and the delicate style is different from Tomato's regular cool novels. The protagonist gradually grows up and becomes stronger in various power struggles and conspiracies. The author has a very sophisticated knowledge and understanding of martial arts and rivers and lakes. He must have read a lot of martial arts works as a basis for writing. He describes the cruel desolation of the rivers and lakes, the grandeur of the waves, the overt and covert struggles between the forces, and the intertwined entanglements.

I have read more than 80 chapters so far, and they are very wonderfully written. It's not the kind of novel that looks like a running account, but the plot is written in a way that has foreshadowing and twists, making it attractive to read. I also like the character design of the heroine very much. Girls with high martial arts are really attractive.

This book is really beautiful, well written and logically logical. The details are well controlled. The characters are well described. The plot is coherent. I can see that there is nothing unreasonable at present. So delicate. Why is the score so low? Maybe Tomato is just like this. Those high-scoring books I've read are not as good as this one. The most important thing is that the logic is reasonable, which is much better than those books with a score of 9 or above. Some of those high-scoring books lack common sense. I really don't understand. This book ranks above 9.6 In my heart. I hope the author can update it more, it's not enough.

Very good. This book is really interesting, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. Apart from that, I rather appreciate Zhuge Liang's attitude towards him. A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Huaguoshan: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

Very beautiful! Let me tell you, you will know what kind of person the heroine is in just one clip. When the heroine goes to the restaurant to do errands, she will dress up as a man, but everyone can see it. Pretending to be a man is a way to avoid touching the hidden rules of feudal society and causing trouble at will. Everyone can see that it is an attitude. The heroine is a woman. If you despise me and harass me because of your gender, feel free to do so if you are not afraid of death. The heroine gives the rules some face, and I hope you can give the heroine some face, otherwise the heroine will also have some skills. I feel that the heroine is indifferent throughout the whole process. Firstly, the golden finger upgrade is too torturous and makes people feel numb. Secondly, the heroine is full of martial virtue and has strong strength to back her up. All in all, it's pretty good-looking, highly recommended!

I think this book is still okay. It is truly a book about equality between men and women. It is related to the main heroine, and the story he tells is relatively good. It is not sloppy, does not overwhelm the combat power, and is also slow and step-by-step. Definitely, uh, as for those poisonous points that someone mentioned in the comment area and why a general inspection office would send two deputies, uh, I just want to emphasize one point, including things like brothel girls and so on. I think this is a normal writing technique, and he didn't do it deliberately. It's just an insult, it's just written down casually, and I think to be honest, the second son of the Zuo family did a pretty good job when he was offline. Although I know that he was very good to the heroine before, but he turned bad later, so it would be better to offline earlier. It's just that Li's downline is a little frustrated, including Xu Rou's father, which is really a pity. If he were here, he would be very happy that the heroine can reach this point. They are in the same realm, and they are two people, and If most of the people in his hands belong to the inner power, relatively speaking, there is definitely no problem in being a little wary. After all, Lu Yun is indeed stronger than the two of them, but relatively speaking, he feels more troublesome and a little wary. One point, and the rest of it, I think there is no problem with the heroine's acting behavior. Well, how should I put it, it is to travel to a strange environment, of course I am a little bit. She may be a little alienated, and she may seem a bit cold-blooded. In fact, I really want to be someone like the heroine, because people like this usually go a long way. I think this book is quite interesting. Also, since that Xu Rou broke off the relationship with our heroine, we should write less about him. I think he was a little uncomfortable, but he didn't kill her on purpose, really.

It's very good. The storyline is well developed and I like the characters very much. I haven't seen such refreshing writing in a long time. Come on, author, I want to say that the lack of readers is really not because of your bad writing, but because you are your target readers. Among so many books on this platform, it is difficult to find a book that you like like this. It all depends on fate. Don't belittle yourself. Your writing intentions will definitely be seen. Also, the current environment on the Internet is not particularly friendly. There are many gods and people. I hope that the author can write what he wants to write and not be influenced by others. All free articles on Tomato are purely for love. The author can write whatever he wants. 1,000 People have 1,000 points. The author should not pay too much attention to the comments. The most important thing is to be happy when writing.

Giving five stars is in line with my personal taste... It looks good. I was about to leave Tomato at 11 o'clock, but I accidentally took a second look, and then I saw 4:20. I can only say that it is not suitable for Tomato. There are no interesting articles like Tomato's other articles. How can I put it? It's a pity that there are so few words. Otherwise, I would have continued reading... I have added it to my bookshelf. I will read it again when I have time... I don't want to read the serialized version, it's really uncomfortable. Heart-scratching, Sometimes people are always contradictory. They can read long stories in a short time, and finally give up the book in anger. Short stories cannot be read in one go, so they start to read books out of anger, and then stop reading at some point... Come on, author [laughing and crying]

It's really good to read, and after reading the novel for so long, the male protagonist is always upgrading his martial arts. The heroine is rare, and she feels very natural without being coy or greasy.

It's a very nice novel, with a sense of narration. The author has a strong narrative ability. I don't like novels that are full of cheats as soon as they start. The pace is just right, but it's a bit slow. I hope the author will update more.

It's super beautiful. I like the heroine's character very much. It's the first time I read this type of book. It's quite interesting to combine many things. It's encouraging [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] After reading it, the writing is really good, but I think there are too few female characters. I hope there will be more female characters in the future.

Super beautiful female channel Gao Wu! So rare! The author will update soon! The heroine will not become Yang Jian in the end, open her eyes [laughing]

It's nice to read, and the author's ideas are quite interesting. There doesn't seem to be a big problem at the moment, but the protagonist can only practice close combat with fists and punches, but he can also practice swords and guns. After all, these exercises can also be done. There is no big problem for beginners. The author should keep up the good work and work hard to update, so that more readers can be retained. After reading the book, I feel that the author's grasp of the power system is still a little lacking. Just like when the protagonist upgrades, he only has four to five hundred kilograms of strength. . But the damage he dealt was like an explosion of tens of tons of force. After all, who can smash a hole as big as a bomb with 500 kilograms of force? The author is still too conservative about the power system.

It's pretty good. More updates. I hope the heroine will be stronger.

It's a very interesting story about a heroine who ventures into the world. It's rare. Anyway, I haven't found a meal replacement. It's soft yet strong. You can feel the heroine's step-by-step path to becoming strong, and you can also feel the love-hate entanglement of people in the world. It's also accompanied by national hatred. I just don't know whether the map is big. From the current point of view, it should not be small. It's just that Zhang Zhenren is the number one master in the country. This is not enough. The map will definitely be changed later. I look forward to the huge world. To be honest, I don't really like male videos that are all about oneself, being alone in the world, and all the people I meet are evil people, or beautiful women. Instead, the author describes many aspects of this kind of people, some good and some bad, very real, which makes people want to read on. But don't covertly or directly give the heroine a man, no matter whether the man is strong or weak. I will leave it for now, and I will comment after I read it.

It is very rare to see a martial arts novel in which the heroine seriously upgrades her body. The main reason is that the heroine cultivates her body and becomes a saint. The main reason is that the rhythm is well controlled. Upgrading and fighting monsters is very satisfying. It is very satisfying to read it in one sitting without feeling tired. The author has a high emotional intelligence, the plot is reasonable and the whole text is non-toxic. Currently, there is no male protagonist tendency, and I hope to maintain it. The relationship with Yang Rou's daughter is handled very realistically. If you encounter a major blow, if you don't tell others, others will think you are deliberately concealing it. If you tell others, you will become a mourning crow again and they will be angry. They are destined to never be friends.

The score is low, at least 9 points or more. The content setting and ghost design are really thoughtful. The punches are strong and the characters stand up. This is the heroine, not the mindless novels written by some people that pretend to be the heroine.

It's very interesting. I read the latest chapter in one go. The heroine's character is a bit contradictory in the first part, but it gets better and better in the later part. Come on, author, update. I feel it is no worse than the books on the top list that I read. Don't let it crash in the future.

It's good-looking, with no redundant emotional descriptions, and it's refreshing and not boring. The plot changes from a small county town to a county town, and the transition is very natural, and the branches and main lines are also clear. The upgrade of force is not as big as Golden Finger's. Being so strong is all achieved through hard work. The heroine's reaction to the weirdness is quite funny. I just feel that the introduction and title of the book are not very suitable, and it is easy to miss readers who like this genre.

This is one of the novels I have read that has the best flow and rhythm. There are many ways to add points. Either the pressure in the early stage is too harsh, and the protagonist is so aggrieved after getting cheats, or the later upgrades are too fast and the combat effectiveness is reduced.

The author writes very delicately, for example, when he traveled to a strange world, Zuo Tang slowly changed his mind to accept his new family members during the separation of life and death; The action descriptions of each martial arts move are very vivid and detailed, and the fighting scenes are so exciting and interesting to watch; The plot is also very interesting, the routines are a bit new, and the foreshadowing is generally recycled.