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Explore more →Are There Any Novels with Unpopular Characters? Most of the People Are Disgusted by the Novels.
The Gentle and Jade-Like Appearance Is Really Attractive.
I'm looking for a gentle and gentle male protagonist. I'm sorry for bothering you brothers and sisters.
I've Read Most of Tomato's Two Guys. There's a Shortage of Books Now. Is There Anyone Who Knows Them?
During the Period of Serious Book Shortage, I Can't Arouse Interest in Reading Anything. Please Save the Children!
Shuangnan Xiuxian Has No Good Reason to Argue (The Struggle of the Shuangren)
I'm asking if you have any good books, I hope you can recommend them to me ˶╹ꇴ╹˶
Every Time I See My Hidden Gem That Has Not Been Discovered, I Get Upset. . .
Every time I read forum discussions, I feel so sad when I can't see my heart! In this topic, let's share some state banquets that have not been discovered by others!
Shuangnan! Double Nanwen for a Noble or Gentle Young Man! !
No Novel with Two Male Protagonists Can Arouse My Interest in Reading... [Smoking. JPG]
I want to read a book similar to "On How Straight Men Survive in the Cracks in the Pornography (One-Way Bidding)". I've been coming to Red Persimmon for a long time. I've seen everything I should see and a lot of good stuff. I'm so bored now... When I look through Red Persimmon, I can't get into any of the books.
Are There Any Good-Looking Articles About Cultivating Immortals? the Emphasis Is on Shuangnan! ! ! ! ! It's Best to Finish
Asking for Books from Senior and Junior Brothers! !
Have some! ! ! ! !
I Want to See a Normal Double Male Lead, but I Don't Want the Male Lead to Be Soft and Waxy (Sad)
I want to read a book like "Inexplicably Transformed into a C-Level A-lister".
I'm tired of the master-disciple articles, do you have any recommendations from your fellow apprentices?
Please Smash Your Shuangnan Xiu Xianwen at the Bottom of the Box into My Face😁
I want to see content similar to "Through the Book: Readers Save Long Aotian and Be Forced to Love".
Seeking Death and Escape! ! ! I Haven't Found Any Death Escape Articles Since I Came Here!
In the early stage, he unconsciously attacked the opponent, and then the protagonist wanted to escape because of his identity or some reason! Then he was caught with a new identity. Romance can be used by both men and women, no abuse, no quick wear, no serialization.
Want All Long Aotian
Please Shuangnan, Cultivate Immortality, Don't Wear It Fast! Don't Make Bad Comments on the Internet!
I want to read a book like "When the Yandere Villain Takes the Black Lotus Green Tea Script".
Cultivation, Two Men, Group Portrait, Genius, Two Strong Men, Children of Aristocratic Families
Want to watch something like "I treat you as a brother, and you treat me as a Taoist companion?" (I don't know Zhou Ye)" book.
I Beg You to Write About the Two Male Protagonists! !
It's best to finish it🌚💪
Tomato Must Not Have Any Good Old-Fashioned Books About Two Men (Please Slap Me in the Face)
Isn't There Something Amazing About the Novel About Cultivating Immortals? I Want Two Male Protagonists! I Want Two Male Protagonists!
Book Shortage! Want to Read Master-Disciple Articles
I want to read a book similar to "Your Highness, Don't Try to Die". The apprentice is beaten and punished. Every time he makes a mistake, he is punished. It doesn't matter if he is a little abusive. I just want to feel a sense of abuse.
Cultivation, Double Men, Double Strength! Double Strength! Double Strength! !
Are There Any Stories About Two Male Cultivators, One of Whom Is Long Aotian🥹
My Child Has Recently Wanted to Read Articles by Senior Fellow Apprentices, but Unfortunately He Is Too Picky, so I Beg You!
I want to read a book similar to "After passing through the book, there is always something wrong with Junior Brother Green Tea".





























































































Ratings~~ It's so cool, men are menstruating and women are going crazy. This is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It is so beautiful that the five-guarantee households in the village miss and love the widow. It is so beautiful that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and become the Qiantang River tide. It is so beautiful. God is my rose. It illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful. I ran, jumped, and danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was so beautiful that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water😭😭😭
I think the writing style is good and I can't say much, and the setting can be read with one's eyes closed, but it's a bit sour. In the early stage, the two protagonists were indifferent, maybe this is how decent people fall in love, but Xiao Sheng, you have everything. Your only regret is that Bai Yueguang died for you, but God resurrected you, your life is so bright that I dare not look at it. It really feels like watching Long Aotian and Tough Little White Flower fall in love (double strong). One is a monster with pure talent, and the other is a strong-backed person with extraordinary perseverance. Really🍎Every step you take on your journey counts. This kind of swordsman with a light writing style is the most ruthless. . You must watch it if you have the same taste as me˶ˊᜊˋ˶
Finished it in one day, it was absolutely amazing. Shou is very smart, has sufficient work experience, and is strong. It is very rare for him to be on par with Gong in a confrontation. Double strength, suitable for appetite. Gong, I can only say that you are a bit timid. Your senior brother has been with you all the way, from the boy who destroyed the sect to the monk and then to the emperor. Why can't you be sure at such a close distance? Don't you know that the one who is near the water and the tower first gets the moon? Looking forward to the wallpaper love later. Power can drive relationships apart, but love can bring them closer. \(ˆOˆ)/\(ˆoˆ )/
So beautiful, goddess, you are so awesome😍🥰Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women get crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱too So handsome😘It is God, it is my rose that illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist, I was so cute that I shed tears Not only will the world no longer be short of water, it will be the nemesis of depression 😋 It will also be the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 It's so cute that tears will flow from the corners of my mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It's so beautiful 🥰 It's God, it's my rose, it's lighting up my dark life, it's letting me The world has meaning😙I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😎 It made me realize that God does exist. I was so good that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. Goddess, I will always follow you.
It's even, the plot and characters are very enjoyable! The pace of plot advancement is also okay! The shortcomings are: the words are complicated and repetitive, the paragraphs are not divided well, and the paragraphs are not divided when they should be divided, and the impression is not good. I think there are too many repeated adjectives and sentences. Sometimes there are too many adjectives🤔When there are too many adjectives, it feels like they are deliberately trying to fit in the character, which makes me a little embarrassed. But but! Overall it's okay! If you're not used to reading in sections, you can listen to the book, but it's just very troublesome and slow.
In fact, I was a little hesitant to read this book at first because there was no rating. Then I read Chapter 1 and found that it was my menu. After finishing the review on Jili Gulu, I found that they were all my favorites. I can only say that they are delicious. Insert a little bit, miscellaneous thoughts When I saw the part where Apple said his last words, I thought Apple hated Yanyan at first, but then as I read on, I felt that it didn't look like it was towards Yanyan. It's more like hating oneself for being ordinary and having poor qualifications, and wanting to go with the other person, but because of the gap between them, they can only be monarchs and ministers. Love is unclear and hate is unclear. (OS Apple, you kid later imagined that if you had such a single spiritual root before, you might be able to be an old enemy with Yanyan, and then you denied it to yourself. In fact, you didn't want to be an enemy at all! In fact, you just wanted to be able to move forward side by side, instead of being separated by various things, whether it was gaps or identities) And Ha Jiyan, do you just like love but can't get it? Previously, senior brother was so noble and cool in front of you. As soon as he left, he started dreaming every day, feeling all kinds of nostalgia, tut tut, tut tut. Emperor, I wish you a bright path to immortality❤️❤️❤️ (You, the emperor, must play hard with power!) Apple, I wish you a bright holiday❤️❤️❤️ (who remembers the holiday Apple wants) Shui Yunyun, I wish you a bright literary career✨✨✨ (Not necessarily. When the ratings of this book come out, it will become popular if there are more books. After all, when I was reading it, I was almost persuaded to quit because it was just this little. It would be nice if there were more.) What if this Shui Yunyun can accumulate a lot of experience! This is how I write a little book review
It's so cool. Men are menstruating and women are going crazy. This is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It's so beautiful that the five-guarantee households in the village miss and love the widow. It's so beautiful that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River. It's so beautiful. It's God and it's my rose. It illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful. I ran, jumped, and danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was so beautiful that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water😭😭😭
The fine chaff in the persimmon makes the characters gentle and transparent. This is a work that gets better and better the more you look at it, and the more you taste it, the more flavorful it becomes. The characters are vivid, three-dimensional, delicate and vivid, and each one has its own unique charm. The rhythm of the whole text is soothing and long. As you read it, your impetuous heart calmed down. I have read a lot of fast-paced online articles on weekdays, so I may feel a little uncomfortable when encountering long paragraphs of elaborate text for the first time, but it is precisely this eloquent writing style that can lead readers to slow down and slowly sink into the plain and gentle words.
1. The setting is very novel and eye-catching. The plot is compact and the content makes me unable to stop reading. The most important thing is that this kind of character design is really very interesting and has two strong characters. 2. The overall reading is more logical and the writing is better. I am looking forward to their reunion after they recognize each other. I am also curious about what attitude the protagonist will use towards his junior brother in the future. At the moment, I am a little speechless and helpless, coupled with a small breakdown and a little bit of despair and boredom. But in fact, the protagonist will often think of his junior brother (unconsciously), which can be regarded as a two-way rush [face covering] 3. If you like long stories, you can read it without thinking. But if you don't like career taking up a lot, you can consider it. Skipping will cause some characters to have no idea what they are doing, so I don't recommend skipping. Ahem, friendly reminder: this book is very tense →
After reading it for a while, the writing style is very novel and actually very interesting. However, sometimes there are some mistakes in word order and repetition in paragraphs. Another thing that makes me feel inadequate is Sheng Junxing's attitude. I don't know if it is a deliberate arrangement or something. He is a little too conceited. His attitude towards 🍎 is that he likes it but doesn't pay enough attention to it. He loves 🍎 but can't pay attention to his fatigue in the Nine Realms Palace. Even in the dream, he is obviously tired 🍎 but still pesters him. This is also a bit too miserable. . . What's more, he cares🍎 but can't tell🍎 that he really cares about Beihuang and wants to let🍎 return to him after conquering him. It seems that hatred is inevitable, but this still makes people feel that it's better to say goodbye and never see each other again🥺
The article is good. I have been looking forward to losing my vest. Hahaha. There are some things that are easily fatigued by describing and retelling them repeatedly. It can be simple and direct or reduce the repetition.
321 Everyone started chanting, Senior brother, I only have you, are you even going to leave me? You and I have parted ways, and there will be no more possibility from now on. The world of mortals has passed away before, the Xiang girl is in love with the king of Chu, but you and I are the only ones living together in the nine worlds and eight wastelands. Do you want me to be a lonely minister? Is it good to play with my feelings? Have you ever treated me sincerely? Do I have a unique position in your heart? Cherish life and death, Shenglang, I can no longer wait for you for another three hundred years. Let me come this time. Well, this dream is neither true nor false, this feeling is neither love nor hate, this body is neither real nor false, just waiting to be remembered. Is it possible for us to go back to the past? I have nothing to say to you. Kill or cut into pieces. It's up to you. The bond between you and me is still too little. Senior brother, you clearly opened your eyes. You've been lying to me since the beginning, why do our spiritual weapons resonate? I'm clearly hiding from you, so you have to catch up and find me to die. Of course, the promise you made when you were young doesn't count. You are really ruthless and unjust. God's will is based on my heart to prove that you and I have taken different paths and cannot turn back until we die!
Yeah, yes, the protagonist has an extraordinary mind, and at least he is quite familiar with the tactics. The setting is also very interesting and I love it. The writing, if not sophisticated, is definitely interesting [Love][Love][Love]
So far: This is the first manager (Shou) I have seen who is well-organized, strong in execution and responsible. There is no empty talk, no narration and comments, just constant emphasis. Only the strength shown is the real manager. It is also the most enjoyable book I have read about dual strength (dual strength in the true sense, not only strength, but also wisdom.) It has a strong core and charisma, author, come on!
The plot of this book is novel. I really like Ye Pinggu's light character. The plot is very interesting and unconventional. The author has laid a lot of foreshadowings. I am very much looking forward to the development of the subsequent plot. My brothers Xiang and Junchen Xiang made this book super delicious. I especially like Sheng Junxing's secret love for Ye Pinggu. But the chapters are a bit short now. I hope the author will work hard and make a surprise that will surprise me [heartfelt][heartfelt][heartfelt]
I don't know why, but now I just want to see Ye's career line.
The author's writing style is very good, and the description will naturally look a bit prosperous, but he is not ambiguous about the feelings, especially when describing the widower Sheng, the sense of male ghost is highlighted. Our poor little apple has to work in the past and present life, give me a hug
I really like the plot of this handwritten book by the Son of God. I really like the background of the story in large letters. The teacher really writes well. I prefer resourcefulness to cool writing, so some of the sentences in the plot really poked me. I look forward to the follow-up plot.
This book totally hit my mark. I like the characters, the plot, the bold writing style and it's very comfortable! But I can't quite figure out the timeline. I would like to ask the author how long Daxue has been in seclusion. Why did he read three hundred years, four hundred years, and six hundred years in the article?
I feel like 😭 wasting another minute on you 😭 is a waste of my own time ✋🏻😭 I am too big (broken sound) to have a good life😭 (panting sharply) I am the most (broken sound) The thing I regret 😭 The thing I regret the most in my life is marrying you 😭 (panting) it's so painful- (sound) 😭 it's so painful-😭 There's nothing wrong with you✋🏻You just like the wrong person (angry voice)😭I beg you (angry)💢Don't like me anymore, okay?😩You like someone else (gasps)😭You like someone else Okay😭I beg you😩😭You like (broken) someone else😭I don't want you to take out your heart-take-out-lung-😩Oh😩take out your (pant) body-body(pant)-open😩
Very nice. I like this style of writing. So far, the plot seems smooth, the writing is good, and the characters are very vivid and three-dimensional. But what makes me confused is that the author likes to use similar sentences like "not, but". I don't know whether it is expanded by AI or it is the author's writing habit. But what is certain is that the author must have put a lot of thought into such a smooth narrative, and it cannot be created by AI. In short, I recommend everyone to read it, and I hope your writing will get better and better!
I have no resistance to this kind of Long Aotian attack and death escape. I want to kiss and kiss, and the plot has plot, just like this step by step [Like] The part where the apple fell from the horse gave me a lot of fun (the os author seemed to have written an article on my cool point, expressing the author's [love] [love] [love])
It's okay, but there are some logic issues
More, please, goddess, just feed the chickens. You win, brother, you completely won this time. You broke my psychological defense. I completely broke my defense. In front of you, I am just a wild dog that has been soaked in heavy rain. At this moment, I understand that the real defense is broken and I can't even utter a rebuttal. It turns out that a moth that has never seen light in its life burns not its wings when it throws itself into the fire, but the only hope left in its heart. Please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please give me one more chapter. Just one more chapter. I'll do it again in the future. Please, really, just one chapter. I swear I'll do it again. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. I beg you.
So sweet Up to the blue sky and down to the yellow spring, neither you nor I can be seen The ruthless women of Hunan deserve tears, and the king of Chu deserves pity for his unkindness. Sheng Junxing cleverly devised a chain plan, and Ye Pinggu accidentally climbed up the Wushan Staircase. His senior brother, his Zhixu, his half body, his best friend, his... A Taoist companion who has never and never dared to announce it to his mouth.
First of all, this book is definitely not a routine book. At least when reading the plot, it is difficult to guess what the plot will be like at once. This is due to the author's writing style and plot concept. It is definitely not something that a half-hearted AI author can write. The writing style and plot are guaranteed. I think the first twenty or so pictures really have the flavor of a stock scheme, but they are not very typical. I prefer them because I have been eating Shi for more than a year and have already developed anti-drug resistance. I was a little nervous to suddenly eat such a delicious meal. I don't have much time to read, I'll read it later
I like it so much, it's great! The early stage has the flavor of infrastructure, I like it! (๑و•̀Δ•́)و Apple works so hard! Jun Xing can also fantasize (the widower with no status) The current plot has not reached the conference yet. Jun Xing, please don't stretch your hand too far and pick the "apple" of the apple! (Heartbreaking yet funny) Looking forward to the follow-up "Hate the Sea and Love Heaven" between the two, I like it! (ฅฅ*)♡
Very interesting, I really like this setting
So far, I think it's pretty good, but there are two points that I hope the author can change. 1. The problem of paragraphing. Sometimes a paragraph of words can fill a page, which is a bit uncomfortable. 2. There is a problem with the repeated use of some sentences. Sometimes a sentence can appear several times. Use it in this chapter and use it in that chapter. It would be better if these two questions could be changed [Sending Hearts]
It's beautiful. Can you secretly tell me who is behind the scenes? [Crying] I really can't tell.