After Moving to the Countryside, the Entire Gu Family Treated Me Like Their Darling

It looks great and the setting is interesting, but some of the content is too repetitive. For example, when the protagonist completes something, he has clearly explained it before, but then mentions it again and again; what is in the storage compartment must be listed again every time he takes it out; the environment and layout of the protagonist's home are always described repeatedly. Especially in the few chapters before going to the countryside, similar content appears back and forth. The more you read, the more protracted and uncomfortable it becomes, and it is difficult to have the desire to continue reading. I hope the author can streamline it appropriately in the future, delete repeated descriptions, and make the rhythm smoother. I believe it will be better.

I haven't read much, and the writing is very good, but the protagonist's hands are too loose. I saw this person sharing steamed buns, eggs, tea leaves and apples on the train [laughing awkwardly]. Maybe I've read too many top-notch novels. If the protagonist does this, won't someone shamelessly post it? In those days, the food should be precious. The steamed buns were divided into points. The eggs could be laid by one's own chickens, but apples and tea should be expensive [thinking]. There were also points. Sometimes I couldn't figure out how much money the protagonist had in his hand. Sometimes I felt like I had spent too much.

I think this novel should not be about two male protagonists, but about a male and female protagonist. The protagonist's character and name all look like girls. The more I look at it, the more it looks like a male and female protagonist.

The story is well written, and although it is routine, it is also very interesting. Some shortcomings are that the writing section is too wordy. The content is too detailed and not everyone will like it. It feels like I am making up words. I think it's not good to be wordy. The author greatly cheers, cheers, cheers [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

The rhythm is pretty good, and it has a bland feeling as if it should be done this way. However, there are a lot of repetitive plots. I wrote about becoming an accountant in a brigade before, and then again later. The plots are a bit repetitive.

It's quite nice. The writing is very delicate and the characters are vividly and interestingly drawn. However, there are too many places that I'd like to change. Everything else is pretty good.

It's very interesting and comfortable, and the story is novel and thought-provoking.

Overall, it's okay. It's a relatively warm article.

It's a very heart-warming article. I shed tears several times without realizing it. It makes me feel the magic to keep reading. I urge you to update it. It's really beautiful. Please update it.