Stats
20.3kReads
6.6Score
2.3kShelves
303Chapters
5.6kListens
151.8kReads · all time
Tags
Synopsis
Reader comments
In booklists 2
I Beg You for a Truly Refreshing Article, Don't Be Depressed and You Can't Stand It Even If You Are Depressed at All.
I want to read a book similar to "Freshman Internship, You Go to 749 to Contain Monsters (Don't Be Too Sui)".
57.3MViews365Books1dUpdated
With All Due Respect, Dragon Ball and Human Novels Are No Longer Masterpieces. If You Don't Agree, Come and Argue!
With all due respect, Dragon Ball and human novels are no longer masterpieces. If you don't agree, come and argue!
7.5MViews135Books3dUpdated
Not bad, but the disadvantage is that it's very difficult for someone with more than 4,000 combat power to fight against someone with more than 200 combat power.
The Duo She style, but inherited the idea of Duo She, this is just a single heroine, not a buddy
The author's understanding of Dragon Ball is very good. It's not the superficial, "ah da da da da" kind of weird fight. It can be seen that the author has thought about it and hopes to become the strongest Yamu tea in tomatoes.
Not bad, not bad, very calm. Nowadays, there are many Dragon Ball novels with fake and inflated numbers. This book is solid and steady.
Is the 5.5 Score a malicious brush-up? Are there any jealous people in the author circle? A good fan novel. This book features Yamcha as the protagonist. Generally speaking, it is a good work in Dragon Ball fan fiction. Because many Dragon Ball fans are crazy people who want to improve their combat power, and some even significantly tamper with the original work. This is okay. They also focus on interacting with the characters in Dragon Ball without destroying the big plot. Basically, the development of the novel's story line can follow the original work, which is good. In the later period, a lot of side plots were mixed in. I feel that the main line is a bit messy, the characters are not three-dimensional enough, and the quality has dropped a bit.
After reading the book reviews, many readers have also said what I want to say. I think the best thing about this book is that the things given by the system are not like other Dragon Ball fans who have unknown origins and are stuffed in a few sentences. There is a process. Moreover, the protagonist also tried the original Kaioken and was unable to master it before using the system's Kaioken. He is not blindly arrogant. I hope the author will continue to work hard [laughs]
I feel that the development is relatively reasonable, and it is also a rare Yamucha fan, please keep updating [Admiration]
It feels like most of the battles were written by AI
Can you write a fanfic about Yamcha? This is the best one
Dragon Ball Begins, I, Yamcha, will no longer be a human on Earth.
Thank you bosses, please support me. I will read all your comments. The author is very grateful.
Not bad, not bad, one of the rare Dragon Ball fans who helps people on earth become stronger together
Yamcha is more handsome than Klin. It would be better to choose him to be the strongest on Earth than Klin. Otherwise, the strongest on Earth would be a monk...
As for Piccolo, he can keep up with Saiyan Yamcha and others in the later stage. In the theatrical version, he is in the Super Namekian Dragon God form (orange Piccolo) and his combat power is also very high.
To make a long story short, Tomato is the best Dragon Ball novel I have ever read.
Very good, the plot is also very smooth Wouldn't it be enough to give the protagonist some cheats? It wouldn't feel good to merge with other creatures, so it would be better to merge permanently.
Please don't kill my big brother [crying]
At the beginning of the conference, it was indeed a bit watery and a bit toxic, but the rest of the conference has been pretty good so far [thoughts] The plot is good, but still too watery [smile]
Not bad, please update soon
The rating is really low right now, but it looks like the writing is really good, better than most of the Dragon Ball fics I've read.
The best Yamucha fan I've seen so far in Tomato, it's up to the Earth's people to save it [salute].
I give you five stars, I hope the author will update soon, don't be lazy [cool] [cool] If you like the plot of the weak defeating the strong, the main thing is that invisible pretense is the most deadly. No novel without pretense is perfect
The rhythm is very good, the writing is up to standard, and the plot is smooth and reasonable.
The content is novel, the Internet terminology is used skillfully, and it is very friendly. Kudos to the author.
It's okay, except for a lot of Japanese, the story is pretty smooth.
This should be the best version of Dragon Ball fanfic in Tomato. What the hell is this rating? At least give it a 9 points.
Finally, there is a Dragon Ball fanfic with Earthlings as the protagonists
It's pretty good so far, no crashes.
Have a deep understanding of Dragon Ball
It's so good👍, I can't stop