The Martial Spirit Is a Butterfly? After the Skill Extraction, I Became Invincible

Upgrade flow, but there are a lot of fake people, some are kind to the heroine, and there are more people who ridicule and insult the heroine. The heroine is a hidden clumsy type, so she is a bit frustrated. The system has little sense of presence and rarely appears.

The protagonist Lin Wei, like her martial soul, breaks out of her cocoon and becomes a butterfly. She is a very good girl. The author's writing is very real. Let me see a person who is not willing to accept her fate and fight hard. Even if others ridicule her and even if others don't recognize her, she still chooses to take this path. So tenacious! Super nice. It's really tear-jerking! It's really fun to see her making little progress. It feels like she is telling me that even if I am ordinary, even if I am inferior to others in every aspect, I still choose. Don't believe in fate. To fight hard. She walked the road full of thorns and pain, even if no one believed it, but she succeeded. It's really tear-jerking! Dear author, come on, your writing is really beautiful. [Please update][Love][Love][Love]! !

You can still watch it, it tastes like a male video, but if you mind Lin Xue, don't watch it <. )#)))≦

This is how men feel when they watch male videos

This article is generally well written. The author feels more like a screenwriter to me. The pace of the article is too fast, and many places are not well described. It would be more reasonable to replace this with a frame-by-frame scene like a TV series. I feel that the author may just describe the scene in his imagination without going into too much detail. The overall pace is very hasty and the ending is also very hasty. The author has something to say, and it is said that this is her first book. If it is her first time to write a book, it is already written like this. Many parts of the plot were not enough to be watched, and it was over in a flash. The main plot is still very tense, and you can feel what the author wants to describe. The story is also very contagious. I like Lin Wei's story very much. Many places are also full of small details, such as (Lin Wei) not afraid of danger... Come on, I look forward to your new book.

It can be very beautiful, and the friendship between the heroine and her best friend is really good.

It's nice to watch, but some of the high-energy scenes are quite embarrassing.

I've finished chasing the author. Cheers. The writing is very good, but I'm a bit like the common waste counterattack flow. I hope the author can be a little more innovative in the future. Come on! !

Nice, but too little

The content is really good, and the fighting scenes are also wonderfully written. However, the protagonist did not return to his friends in the end, which is a bit regretful, but overall it is quite good. I am looking forward to the author's new book!

I rely on Juju to read, the logic is clear, and the names of the supporting characters are also nice and intelligent. It is not one of those brainless Long Aotian novels. It feels like the author really cares about every child. I hope the author can write as good a novel in the future.

Not bad and a bit interesting [laughing]

The plot is full of ups and downs and interesting (♥∀♥)

Very nice, very good

The writing style needs to be improved, the setting is good

The flaws are not hidden, the subject matter is novel, you can watch it, four stars encourage it