This Master Is so Stable!

Open low and go high, the early stage is indeed dull, but later on it becomes more and more exciting, the plot is novel, and it shows a somewhat different world of spiritual practice. Moreover, the world view shown by the protagonist's modern soul transmission is completely incompatible with the world of immortality, which is also very good. The warm relationship between master and apprentice is the type I like to watch. There is no ambiguity. It seems that there is no heroine at the moment. There is an emotional line, but it is fragmentary memories about the past life. I hope the author will not force another female protagonist into the story later on. After all, the protagonist is so infatuated with Aya and can't let go of Aya, so he probably won't fall in love with another woman again. As for the shortcomings, the modifiers in the writing are too cumbersome, and there are too many metaphors, which are too deliberate. The early description of the protagonist's heart is a bit awkward and too detailed. The rhetoric words in the description are too cumbersome, and the metaphors can be reduced a bit. Sometimes the details need to be appropriate, otherwise the readers will think that you are cheating on the word count. It can be seen that the author wants to make the book longer, so the plot in the front is a bit draggy and cannot attract readers. After all, after reading dozens of chapters, it may be a little impatient to stay here, but it really becomes more exciting as you go to the back. Compared with the early chapters, the later chapters obviously have fewer shortcomings. Come on author, I love reading this book. I finally found one I like. I hope there will be more updates. Please don't stop updating. Please.

I don't know what to say, I'm not very illiterate, I just want to sincerely thank the author for writing this novel, because listening to this novel has made me a little bit more diligent. I don't know why I am diligent, and I don't know why there are changes. Maybe the main protagonist has traveled to a different world and is willing to take over the mess, if it were me. I have a shabby cultivation base, a vase, and no spiritual stone for cultivation. I have a dilapidated mountain and not even a good place to live. Moreover, everyone in the sect mocks me and insults me. So many people were against me, and then an unknown system came and asked me to accept disciples. I felt that I would collapse and be very painful. But in this case, the protagonist did not collapse, but took it step by step in a humorous way. Take your time and deal with it slowly, even in real life, the protagonist is very difficult. It's still about selling fake medicines. I get choked up every time I hear it. I don't know why the protagonist has such an optimistic attitude and such a sunny personality. Anyway, this article really made me procrastinate. My lazy and lazy personality has really changed a lot. In the future, whenever I feel lazy, I will Bad, bad times, life is not going as I want, I will read this article [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry], I just don't understand why I cry after reading the novel [laughter cry][laughter cry][laughter cry], I can't stand it anymore

I think it's quite good. I don't know why it's good. Anyway, I think it's good. This is the only one. Really, I've been reading it for so long, and I've read it all patiently. Before, I either jumped from page to page, or I read half of it and didn't want to read it anymore.

Not bad, worth watching.

I like it, don't stop updating [Chigua] It's really rare to write an article that starts low and moves high. Are your introduction, the article you wrote in front of it, and the article you wrote in the back really the same book? [Hold face][Hold face][Hold face] I strongly recommend that you change the introduction. It smells too cliche. Now let me read the introduction again. I don't even have the idea of ​​joining in. I don't know what I was thinking at the time. After reading it, it's not bad. I can give you some later suggestions, if you can still finish writing. As for the setting of the protagonist, my suggestion is that his taboos should be enough, too many would be vulgar. It doesn't matter how high the level is. It's best to give him a low level. But the setting of Jiu Sheng, such as the system rewards drawn and redeemed, etc., Anyway, in terms of level, the apprentice will definitely be higher in the end. There can be more one-time confidential props. In this case, it can be a little pretentious, which properly reflects the true mentality of the protagonist as an ordinary person. As for the apprentice, my suggestion is to arrange a few villains with comparable talents to put pressure on them and sweep across the world. There are too many cool stories like this. I feel like you don't want to just write cool stories. [Cool] But it seems that this book should have two protagonists. Long Yuan is one. You can also advance on both sides. To be truly invincible within the realm, Long Yuan must at least complete the unfinished revenge of his previous life, or with the help of the protagonist, other apprentices will provide assistance, but it is best not to be invincible. Arrange a few other talented villains to compete, and finally reconcile with the help of the protagonist. And in this book, only Long Yuan realized that the protagonist is an ordinary person, so it can be written about Dihualiu. Except for Long Yuan, everyone thought the protagonist was a powerful person. It was quite a contrast and interesting [shy]

At present, the book still has great potential, and I hope the author will not stop updating it.

A very, very good book. I especially like the quarrel between the apprentice and the master [laughing evilly]

A very good book, with a different kind of reality.

Good book, good writing and plot.

Easily cultivate the system, it is good news for the farming party, and there are no poisonous points so far. It is easy to make multiple substitutions in daily life. Of course, there are no ups and downs in the plot. Feeling peaceful is really healing

It feels pretty good, I hope the author works hard

It's okay, it's the content I like

A rare good book

Not bad, easy to watch.

Very good, very good, very good

It's okay, but the protagonist's growth is a bit slow.

Very, very funny

I felt quite comfortable after watching it for a long time. I would like to give you five stars for encouragement.

It's very beautiful, the more you look at it, the more you look at it [awkward laugh]

A very good choice book with a very new setting. It's a pity that not many people read it. Keep up the good work, author.

Very good and nice to listen to

I like this book very much

Come on, it may not be close to five stars, but I still support it. It can be seen that the author has been working hard to develop the characters, but the plot can be accelerated a bit.