[Siblings] [Multiverse survival game] [Multiple heroines] [Slow burn]
A: My name is Fang Yuan. My family has a car and a house, and both my parents are gone (?). I also have a genius but mischievous younger sister.
I thought we'd go on living peacefully like this, until one day I got a mysterious phone call and a strange app appeared on my phone: [Secret Realm Game Early Access]. The whole world started going crazy.
The white-haired underclassman turned into a vampire, the Taoist priests of Longhu Mountain could actually wield lightning, and demons really existed…
The secret realms in the [Game] were even more bizarre, and it claimed that collecting a thousand points would grant you a wish!
At least I have my sweet, understanding little sister by my side. Otherwise, I'd be scared to death.
B: My name is Fang Yuan. My family has a car and a house, and both my parents are gone (?). I also have a stupid but loyal older brother.
With a System at my side, becoming the chosen one and reaching the pinnacle of the world is inevitable!
What! You want to know why I'm still dutifully going to school and secretly playing games?
Then let me ask you: doesn't the System only give rewards for completing missions? But where on earth is this damn [Secret Realm Game]?
At least I have my thoughtful big brother to feed me. Otherwise, I'd starve to death. My big brother is the best!
It's not bad, the subject matter is good, and it has its own style. It's a pretty cool novel. The development of the male protagonist's character (yes or no) is interesting, and it avoids some poisonous points. If you don't want to see the wings knotted, you can give up. Although I don't dislike it, the conditioning has almost become the main course. It contains a lot of stickers, and it is just a matter of getting started. This is really difficult. The male protagonist kills and kills, and the female protagonist posts stickers. She is the guest and takes the lead. According to the plot proportion, she should marry her sister. The emotional development is reasonable, but the emotional transition is a bit short and a bit sudden without foil. If you want to watch the city, you can give it up. Seeing that 95% of it is in the first secret realm now, the super long plot is indeed slow. I often forget that this is an infinite stream (?) It's no longer considered unlimited. The length and writing style can be understood as a series of novels with the same protagonist. According to this progress, it will be a very long novel. Will you insist on finishing it? I really want to see how the emotions and plot will be handled reasonably later.
It's a pretty good book. The brother and sister start out in real life, give a vampire as a gift, and then enter a copy of the game Laoshizi. It's equivalent to a brother and sister entering a martial arts game and being accepted as a disciple by a big boss who creates his own martial arts to cultivate immortality. Among them, the younger sister retains her memory and the elder brother has no memory and is deceived by the younger sister into raising him as a younger brother. There may be siblings in the future. (Fang Yuan: This is just in the game, and my brother has no memory and no blood relationship, no problem!)😄😄😄 Why is no one watching? Maybe the title of the book is not very good, and the author is thinking of a better title. This title... I feel that it is not deeply connected with the content. The vampire at the beginning can be used as an opening factor to lead the book title. To be honest, my sister, the pace of the relationship here is too slow.
It's quite interesting. My brother relies on talent, and my sister also relies on talent (?). It just kept playing steadily in the middle, and there was no particularly passionate battle. Maybe the protagonist was too cautious. Five-star reviews support this.
The writing is already very good, much better than many 7.8-Rated films. Although there are some things that I personally don't accept (such as the long memory loss), overall there is no big problem. I won't talk about combat power, (I don't really want to use my brain when reading novels🤦), as long as it's not too outrageous. As for the progress of the plot, it feels a little slow. After all, it is a dungeon. If a dungeon is too long, it is easy to forget the previous parts. I think that some scenes after the protagonist left in the previous dungeon can be added to a dungeon. I feel that the look and feel will be better and there will be more anticipation. As far as I am concerned, there are no other problems at the moment. Thank you to the author! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]
See Chapter 100 Comments The author is probably a newbie, and his pacing control may not be particularly good. The biggest highlight of this book in terms of title and framework is Infinite Flow, but the first copy written by the author is too long, just like the scholar's survival novel, and does not match the fast-paced style of Infinite Flow. As far as I can see, most of the chapters are about the male protagonist's experience of amnesia in his first secret realm. When I read this, I don't even know the main plot of this secret realm. I don't find fault with this in fairy tales, but it's a big problem with unlimited streaming. As a reader who only started reading the third volume after the author wrote it, it may feel better. If it is to catch up with the update, the reader will be very disgusted when the infinite flow connects the plot without entering the main line. The reader's stickiness decreases and the author eats nothing. In other respects, "I" think it's okay, at least it's not the kind of AI that just pretends to be good. Uh-huh, it proves that you can't write a comment after reading half of it~
Give yourself a perfect score, I can still read the book I wrote by myself 😳[Sending my heart]
It took me only 124 chapters to regain my memory. It was so slow. Did the first world have to be so long? The hero has almost finished the game after recovering his memory. Isn't it too long to recover his memory?
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It looks good, it looks good, it has multiple heroines, little lolita [admiration], please bring the vampire princess into the harem, the pace is so slow, please give it more 😢
I can only say that there are merits, and I would like to give you a good review to encourage you. My sister is getting more and more down. The comments I posted in the comment section seem to have been hidden by the system. Author, why don't you think about it for yourself. Why is my sister down?