Traveling through the world of Naruto, even though he has practiced hard and never slackened off, his talent is impressive and his parents are both alive. Shuichi has no protagonist life, so he can see the threshold of Jonin.
I originally planned to lie down and hide in the hospital and live my life as a medical ninja, but I didn't want to awaken the entry system when I became a genin.
Effort? So hard?
Entry, upgrade it for me! !
Reader comments
He blends in very well, you can't tell he's a time traveler at all [making a face]
The plot writing is okay, right?
The protagonist does not take advantage of the prophecy of time travel or worry about the future of Otsutsuki.
Kakashi killed Lin, and the protagonist just said lightly: "The Hokage doesn't have a psychological counseling class, and there's nothing I can do about it, let him do more tasks."
Then the protagonist already had Kage-level strength and wanted to exchange Orochimaru's research results (software transformation and the like), but he couldn't come up with any success or suggestions, and nothing came of it.
It's okay, it's pretty good-looking, the details are average, it's a bit streamlined, and it's not very smooth to read. Goldfinger didn't explain it very clearly at the beginning, but it's still a very good and enjoyable article. Although the sentences are not smooth to read, the overall story is told well. Worth a 5 points
To be honest, it fits the title of your book very well. There is no point in trying hard.
The only change is that Little Sun and his wife did not die immediately, but they also went offline.
Super nice Naruto fanfic
Very good Naruto fanfic in Tomato [Like]
Very well written, I love reading it
I think it looks good
Very nice and well-founded
The overall feeling is pretty good, I personally don't think there's anything wrong with it
Very good
It's above average, the pace is a bit slow, and the awakening entries Water Escape and Gold Escape are not too pleasing. And most of what Naruto likes is fighting style. Encourage
No, it was only 5.2 Two days ago. Why did it drop so fast?
It's very beautiful [laughing and crying], after all, it conforms to the original setting
Actually, I wanted to rate it 4.5 Stars.
It's okay. Hong's character is indeed the most suitable for the protagonist. Come on, author,
Well, it's okay, but there are some minor flaws, and there are no good books to read.
He blends in very well, you can't tell he's a time traveler at all [making a face] The plot writing is okay, right? The protagonist does not take advantage of the prophecy of time travel or worry about the future of Otsutsuki. Kakashi killed Lin, and the protagonist just said lightly: "The Hokage doesn't have a psychological counseling class, and there's nothing I can do about it, let him do more tasks." Then the protagonist already had Kage-level strength and wanted to exchange Orochimaru's research results (software transformation and the like), but he couldn't come up with any success or suggestions, and nothing came of it.
It's okay, it's pretty good-looking, the details are average, it's a bit streamlined, and it's not very smooth to read. Goldfinger didn't explain it very clearly at the beginning, but it's still a very good and enjoyable article. Although the sentences are not smooth to read, the overall story is told well. Worth a 5 points
To be honest, it fits the title of your book very well. There is no point in trying hard. The only change is that Little Sun and his wife did not die immediately, but they also went offline.
Super nice Naruto fanfic
Very good Naruto fanfic in Tomato [Like]
Very well written, I love reading it
I think it looks good
Very nice and well-founded
The overall feeling is pretty good, I personally don't think there's anything wrong with it Very good
It's above average, the pace is a bit slow, and the awakening entries Water Escape and Gold Escape are not too pleasing. And most of what Naruto likes is fighting style. Encourage
No, it was only 5.2 Two days ago. Why did it drop so fast?
It's very beautiful [laughing and crying], after all, it conforms to the original setting
Actually, I wanted to rate it 4.5 Stars.
It's okay. Hong's character is indeed the most suitable for the protagonist. Come on, author,
Well, it's okay, but there are some minor flaws, and there are no good books to read.
Single girl or multiple girls?