Pirates: the Dream Is to Change the World

After reading it, the most touching thing is not how powerful it is or how big the golden finger is, but the gentleness that runs through the whole story - "I am here, and those tragedies will never happen again." Lu Feng's background is lazy, but reliable. He usually makes complaints about his bad behavior, but never loses control when it's time to take action. In the scene where he wakes up Ace, it is not the protagonist taking in his younger brother, but a person who knows all the regretful endings, using the most clumsy way to grab the boy who is about to rush towards the cliff. The addition of Rimuru gives the story another texture. The tacit understanding between the two time travellers—a string of secret codes to confirm their identities, a rant and a knowing smile—added some levity to the heavy rewriting task. Someone can understand your jokes, someone knows what you care about. This kind of setting of fellow travelers is more heartwarming than pure comrades. Uta has not been forgotten, Sabo has not "died", and Ace has not been swallowed up by emotions. This is the meaning of fandom, not "I am better than the original", but "I can't bear to watch it again". The moment we set out to sea, the chapter of the story has just begun.

The appearance of the time traveler Lu Feng made up for many regrets and tragedies in the play, giving the protagonists a happy life. Lu Feng is a middle school student with an adventurous spirit, full of youthful vitality, and occasionally makes everyone happy by being crazy. He is a reliable partner at critical moments. His background is gentle, tough and kind, and he has saved many friends with his innate advantage of being a time traveler. His life of playing around with Luffy and his friends is warm and interesting. The language description is personal, but it is paired with a lot of emojis to make the overall story very vivid, making Luffy and Luffy even more vivid, and they look like a lovely little girl~ In terms of writing, the other previous characters are a bit flat. Most of them are from Lu Feng's point of view. There is no specific description. Their appearance and the events that focus on them can be appropriately described. In addition, the language is more general, especially in the early stage. I think we can choose a few more important things to focus on, reduce some unnecessary content, slow down the narrative speed of the story, and speed up the narrative rhythm. All in all, I highly recommend it to everyone! The young author's writing ability is improving day by day. I hope that more people will come to support this young author with me and follow his footsteps to witness the new world of Lu Feng and Luffy. Keep up the good work [please update] [laughing]

The most poignant thing is the gentle redemption of each character. Robin does not have to bear the reputation of "the son of the devil", and Ace can also have the perfection he should have. It is heartwarming and easy to cry with everyone to rewrite regrets. Recommend! ! Worth it

It's very warm and gentle 🥰. From the front, there is a touch of warmth and a sense of happiness, which makes people hope that it can last forever. The relationship between the two little ones is really interesting and cute, and there is a kind of upward vitality, which makes my heart warm. But he always has to go on an adventure. Because he came from time travel, Lu Feng knows where the plot is going, so he has great ambitions and hopes to try his best to change the world and make it a better place. The relationship between him and Luffy Ace is also very cute. Although the transition in the early stage is ordinary, it gets better and better the further you look at it. I really look forward to them conquering the ocean and changing the world together! Come on, teacher! Super pretty! [Adoration] I like it very much!

Many netizens traveled across time and space to the world of One Piece, and their own power was transformed into various phantom beast fruits by the will of the world. Everyone joined the Straw Hats with the same belief to make up for all the regrets of the original work, and together overthrew the decadent rule of the Celestial Dragons. The group portraits were vividly created, and the passionate atmosphere was full.

There is such a treasure of fan fiction! ! ! I have seen a lot of Pirates fandoms, but few are as healing as this. It's really Haimi's regret band-aid, wow, wow, wow, wow, it's true that he is here, and the regret will not happen again [almost crying], although, I still want to see the top war develop like this.

Nice! The story has a tight rhythm, the writing is smooth, the logic is clear, the protagonist acts decisively, and there is no watery plot at all. It is enjoyable from the beginning to the update. I haven't read such a beautiful and smooth novel on Tomato for a long time.

Lu Feng transformed into the Luffy twin brothers and traveled from Windmill Village to Gorbo Mountain, making up for Uta's regrets and protecting the agreement of the four ASLL brothers. The redemptive dialogue with the members of the Straw Hats is particularly poignant. It smoothes over the original work's difficult feelings one by one. It is passionate and gentle, and I can't stop watching it!

It looks so good, I suggest it be made into a short play.

There is a strong sense of immersion, and I feel like I am the protagonist.

The words are warm and the story is powerful. You will remember it for a long time after reading it.

The plot flows smoothly and the writing is naturally really great.

It's very interesting. The setting is similar to that of Pirates, but it also has its own unique features. It's very interesting. If you like Pirates, you can jump right in. I recommend it!

The writing style is exquisite and fascinating, and it still leaves people thinking a lot after closing the book.

The plot progresses layer by layer. It is a good book worth reading carefully.

Young people should strive for self-improvement, be passionate and responsible.

This is the best novel I've read in a while!

The story of One Piece is good-looking, and the world of One Piece is magnificent.

The story is thought-provoking, interesting and thoughtful. It is recommended to read.

The writing is smooth and Luffy's crew grows with him

One Piece fan fiction, with a strong sense of immersion

It's very interesting. I watched a lot of it in one go. One Piece is so exciting.

The narrative is smooth and natural, and the reading experience is very comfortable

Reading this book is as exciting as watching a Hollywood blockbuster

I have read a lot of One Piece fanfics, and this one is undoubtedly the best.

I've read a lot of fanfics, but this one is particularly interesting. It's well written and interesting.

Luffy is still the pure and passionate fool. He is well written and interesting.

The main character, Luffy, has a good outlook on life, which is my type.

One Piece was my favorite before, and this fanfic reminds me of that time

The protagonist Luffy in the play has a distinctive personality, funny conversation, and fascinating stories.