A Survival Game, but the Teammate Is a Cute Girl from a Variety Show

Five stars for creativity. As a system survival novel, it's good, but as a comprehensive comic, the pace is a bit slow. If I really complete 100 days, I'm afraid I won't be able to see the second character until the end of the update.

It can be seen that the author has tried his best to create an environment where he can stick with two-dimensional beautiful girls. First, he fully opened the golden finger, and also stipulated that the gameplay is pve. Finally, he also gave the male protagonist a succubus form and a good old guy character. But it is really comfortable to read. I have read too many apocalyptic stories about killing, betrayal, grabbing supplies and surrendering. Unfortunately, the author updates too little. It would be great if he could update 10,000 words a day.

I really like the manga between Ai Hayasaka and Chika Fujiwara. One more thing is that it is currently in pve mode. Don't change it to pvp mode later [face covering]. I don't want to see Shinomiya Kaguya and Hayasaka Ai fighting each other [awkward laugh]

Writing for survival is read as love. Survival adventure is basically for falling in love... I still have too high expectations.

Although it is wilderness survival, the theme is two-dimensional beautiful girls. But it's okay, I just came here for the second dimension. As of now, there is only one beautiful girl in Chapter 56. I don't know when the second one will appear. I'm also a little worried that if new teammates are added in the future world, Hayasaka Ai will become OOC.

It's good, but the first novice copy is too long and it's hard to keep reading. The Long Night is not that difficult. It's too long with more than 70 chapters and no results. Although the author's writing about Hayasaka Ai's relationship is pretty good, and the flow is steady.

So far it's pretty good, there's nothing to discourage people from quitting. There is a hang-up, but it is not the kind of hang-up that lasts for seconds (for now). The protagonist has his own characteristics, and Hayasaka Ai does not write like a vase, supporting each other, and then the relationship gradually warms up during this period. I just don't know how long the first copy will be.

The writing is indeed good, but as mentioned in the comment area, the pace is too slow. The main reason is that I have read almost 70 chapters now, but the 100 days have only been about half a month and I have not calculated the time. The pace can be slightly faster. If you write at this speed, you will be less able to read it, and it will be easy to keep reading.

It's really good-looking, and I can write about this subject for a long time. I can write a lot about The Long Night alone. There are so many worlds to come, as long as I don't supervise them.

It's not bad, but the super powers in the world of Long Night are a bit difficult to jump to, but it won't be difficult after a while [smile]

Although the pace is a little slower, the characters are better developed. It is much better than the kind of novels that do not have much character development for the sake of fun. For fast-paced books, if the author's writing is good enough and the plot is good enough, it is okay, but most of them are not good at character creation and plot. It feels like every character is a puppet with a different name. On the contrary, the author slowly builds it up and does not need to be too much. The writing is exquisite, but each character has a soul. The slow pace is not a shortcoming. There are few updates, but slow updates have an impact. I hope the author will update more. Secondly, the difficulty of the game world should not increase too fast. Occasionally, there should be one or two plots in which the protagonists in the world have a good time, such as a fun game in Minecraft. Occasionally, some sea worlds such as raft survival are also very interesting.

It's okay. I remember reading an infinite stream on QD that also started with The Long Night. Then the protagonist, a man who had no superpowers and lived alone in the wild for more than half a year, felt very guilty for killing a wolf. He cried and buried the wolf. Some people in the comment area said - this is normal people and reality... Don't be literary and realistic when writing novels. Although the beginning of this book is a little bit Asasi, it actually feels like a normal social life (I have a bit of social anxiety, is normal social life like this?). I hope the author will not make it too difficult to survive, and will not write it too easy and only astringent. I have read survival novels with similar themes in 🦔Mao, one is Eunuch, and the other is... It is not survival at all. It is better to read the eunuch's book called "My Wilderness Survival was Invaded by Weirdness".

The slow pace feels okay. The emotional line in the first world is very good, but I don't like the protagonist's combat power very much. The protagonist's skill set is currently positioned as a gain aid. The boss in the second world almost wiped out the entire team by himself. In the end, Chika Fujiwara relied on her luck to solve the battle. When choosing talents and point shops later, the protagonist always chooses auxiliary props and talents. The values ​​are not touched at all. He always relies on the five gods to choose the lottery, and most of them are wonderful props. Although they are much stronger than normal people, many characters in the survival game are supermen. Some things require numerical values ​​to do. Why does the protagonist just not have this awareness? What if you are sent to a world with higher values? So I was more anxious to see it. Give the protagonist some numerical values. (The author also said that the protagonist's combat power is T1, but I won't comment on this. After all, this is not an invincible novel, but a survival novel about people cooperating and building relationships) Then let's do it [Thinking] 8.25 10:34

The first dungeon is a bit too slow, and if the old characters don't leave the show, unless you write more than two million words and each dungeon mainly describes the corresponding character, the drama will be a bit different. In fact, I feel that about 100,000 to 250,000 words is better for the first copy, mainly because this type is not suitable for a female character. Multi-heroine means that the heroine who has completed the exclusive plot is semi-hidden and the plot is given to the new heroine. Multiple heroines can have uneven plots, but you can't just focus on one of the heroines. There shouldn't be any obvious differences in the plots of the main heroines. Saying so much, I am mainly worried about whether the author can grasp the plot between the heroines well. After all, Hayasaka Ai has so many storylines and doesn't plan to leave the show. What does the author think? I'm a little curious? I've seen other novels where this happens. There are two situations: ① There are no more than five or six female protagonists, each with a large plot. ②The author particularly likes a character and specially gives a plot and a large section of exclusive plot. But it is generally not placed in the first copy. Her exclusive plot has at least 300,000 words, which is not a small number of urban stories and is written in separate pieces.

The word count is a little short but the future is promising. Looking forward to Seven Days to Kill, Ark Survival Evolved, and Deep Sea Trek World.

Very creative, another two-dimensional masterpiece. Two-dimensional + wilderness survival + main god space, there may be a comprehensive daily life drama in the future. At present, the writing style of non-toxic points is smooth, and the current words alone are good grass [like]

Personally, I feel that it is really good as a survival story, and I don't really care about things like female protagonists. However, according to what they said, the pace is a bit slow when it comes to multiple female protagonists, and I personally don't know much about comics and games. This book turns survival into a game. There are many people in the comment area who don't understand the game, and some of them handle it inappropriately. Personally I think I can watch it

Overall, it's very good. The survival content is quite interesting (for someone like me who has never played a survival game). Hayasaka Ai's emotions are well portrayed. Chika is a bit rushed. Now I have a one-year copy. I look forward to the next plot of Ishou.

The writing in this track is very good, but the male protagonist is a bit like a high school student in a light novel, and he is not mature enough to deal with girls.

The subject matter is very new and interesting to me. The characters are all drawn in a three-dimensional way, and Hayasaka is one of the few female protagonists. However, the writing is more detailed and slower, so it is not suitable for those who like fast pace.

There are so many comprehensive comics on Tomato, and the author has already calculated them well. The main reason is that the popularity of female characters appearing now is relatively low, so the ratings will be lower. I beg the author not to use eunuchs, Tomato fan fiction is too easy to make eunuchs [please update]

It is recommended that there be more heroines like Ai who can actively provide emotional value. I am really tired of seeing Yukinoshita Yukino and Shinomiya Kaguya who need other people to take the initiative. They will get into trouble and mess with the Riddler if they are not careful. Xiao Ai is very good. The difference between loving and being loved

It's okay, but the update needs to be faster, and then the rhythm of the dungeon needs to be polished. In fact, a slower rhythm is good, but if the rhythm is full, it must have the characteristics of slowness. The details should be perfected, and then the strange objects should be streamlined a little. Don't write a lot. In fact, they are basically unused.

The rhythmic dialogue looks very comfortable. Is there only one character in each world? Can there be more characters in the later worlds? This author didn't say a word in the comment section, he just kept being irritated, and his good feelings turned into dislikes. What has become of him?

The writing is very good, even those who don't know these games and characters can still watch it comfortably, and it avoids the lightning point of the heroine in survival games. The heroine still plays a great role. In addition to the protagonist feeling a bit useless in the early stage, the protagonist becomes stronger later on.

Up to now, I have a pretty good idea, but I don't know if there will be a gap in age between the protagonist and the heroine as the dungeon progresses. Although the author will definitely not write a lifespan theory, I feel that the heroines age with their own world, so the dungeon will not get older...

The first 10 chapters are a little awkward, but then it gets better. The author has a good sense of lightning protection, and his writing style is not bad. It's quite comfortable to read. According to the average rating of bad persimmons, this could have been rated 8 or close to 9. All in all, it is highly recommended.

It looks good and I love watching it. It's such pure love. Although it has multiple female protagonists, it is well written.

There are no bad points, the overall feeling is good, but the first copy is too slow.

It's very comfortable to watch, and the emotional scenes are also great. Let's see how the second heroine is going to be arranged. The heroine's handling from 1 to 2 is the most difficult to grasp.