You've Got to Be Kidding Me, I'm a Male Succubus!

The writing is okay. The main character could be shaped a bit. The main thing is that the plot is not too slow, but the selling point is the succubus. The introduction could be made more eye-catching. Being framed in the early stages is too cliche. Overall, it's good. It's a good quick read.

The plot development is very confusing. Although it is very compact, I don't feel that all aspects are connected. The protagonist has an IQ, logic, and is not brainless. This is highly recommended, but the plot development is very confusing, which is another problem. In the early stage, due to lack of money, he encountered a magic stick, so he faced the first mini-boss tiger. Here, the brain-eater is involved. It feels like the author wants to create suspense and involve this step by step. The plot and world view, but there are several branches in the middle (the sealed beauty, the black cat, the battle angel, the male-to-female transformation in the middle really doesn't understand the meaning, is it funny?) There are too many plot branches, and there is no main body (training to become stronger, pursuing a comfortable life, or escaping from the demon hunter, etc.), The first one encountered The succubi who arrived said to be careful of the demon hunters (I'm afraid they are not the type of Fa Hai who kills demons when they meet them, mentally ill), and there are so-called peacekeeping forces behind them, so much so that even the demon world's ID card came out. You are not trying to please both ends. Do you want the medieval witch hunting atmosphere or something similar to three? The story of the world (demons, saints, and humans) working together to promote world peace can no longer be written about the former. How the latter intends to develop has reached the level of modern society, and it can only be a confrontation between different factions such as diehards and reformers (similar to the coexistence concept and racial relations between fairies and humans in Luo Xiaohei). If this book has an outline, it can be said to be a rare good book. As long as you get through the classic plot at the beginning, the follow-up is still okay, but it is not suitable for follow-up reading. It is more suitable for reading a big plot in one go.

The content is good, and the plot is so compact that after watching the first few pictures, you can't help but continue reading. The setting of Six-Winged Succubus (￣￣) is very new, but only the first few pictures may be a bit cliched and slightly poisonous. After reading the first few chapters, it will become interesting. [(Also, wouldn't the author consider changing the introduction? Although it's not inconsistent with the content, this introduction gives people the impression of Long Aotian's brainless harem cool novel [face covering]) ps. If anyone is watching, please don't die suddenly in the middle, the author [I'm about to cry]]

The Six-Winged Succubus, the subject matter is interesting (I want to understand the love life of the protagonist's parents, but I feel that the identity is not simple [thinking])

After reading it, I feel pretty good. Not just because the protagonist is a succubus, he will be pursued by various women. More often, the protagonist is like a normal protagonist, living his own life (without too many emotional entanglements with others). The identity of the protagonist is also a good point to watch. Although it is a succubus, what is more powerful than the charm is its strength. When I read the introduction, I thought it was an ordinary article that would attract all kinds of women. In fact, it is what the author said. He wanted to write a high-level martial artist. I want to give us the feeling of a fantasy world rather than a simple sexual entanglement. It's pretty good, I gave it five stars, and now that I've finished watching it, I'm waiting to catch up. The protagonist is very good, he is neither a loser nor a psychopath, he is just an ordinary, upright, good young man who doesn't want to cause trouble. Anyway, I'm quite curious about the protagonist's parents.

The subject matter is novel, the protagonist is male, but he is a succubus. It's really fun that my father is an angel and my mother doesn't touch her. And the author's writing in big letters is also very nice. A little bit funny. Come on, great author.

No kidding, no one said this book would trigger panic while reading it. In the middle of the night... I couldn't fall asleep again. But it's really good-looking. The characters are rich and humane. It's such a good book.

The writing is okay. Although the introduction may not match the content, I feel it is still okay. I hope the author will not finish it hastily and can finish it normally. [Love][love][love] My personal opinion is not objectionable anyway [rolls eyes]

I started from the first chapter to the last chapter, and found out that this book was on the street. Who knows... Generally speaking, it is quite interesting, but I still prefer the author's first book. (This one is still a hit, haha.)

It's good-looking, and I also like the setting of the male protagonist. But I don't really want to have a female protagonist (the kind who falls in love) orz