One Person: I Will Control You Severely

I didn't tense up when Su Nuo's finger came out. It's so pleasant. I'll probably have a hard time forgetting you. The author, the strongest Lao Tianshi in history VS the strongest Wang Wu in modern times. Facing the Lao Tianshi who has both life and death, a born strong man, the resulting loneliness, what kind of existence is waiting for him? It's so delicious. I'm full [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

The plot of the protagonist of the game is really well written. This light yet humorous writing style is very readable and not tiring. I tied it in one breath and now two chapters a day are not enough. And it is true that compared to the game plot, the realistic part is a bit boring, but overall it is still very interesting! And can the author create a story without cp and heroine? I feel that the combination of Wang Wu and Zhang Jiu is already perfect. The other female characters currently appearing are not very popular.

OK, brothers, after reading the comments, let's briefly talk about it [thinking] [thinking] [thinking]. The first is the issue of male and female protagonists. There is no heroine, whether it is Zhang Jiu or Wang Wu, there is no heroine. I have read many books, but without exception, I can't write emotional dramas and have little experience in this field. Therefore, the female characters who appear in this book all appear to promote the development of the plot. After all, if they were all men, it would always feel weird. Of course, sometimes I get stuck and I have no choice but to drag these characters out to make the plot fluffy. (Ps: I respect women, understand women, tolerate women, and wish I could become a woman) The second is the reality part. When I first started reading this book, it was entirely because I was reading novels on Tomato and saw novels of the same type. My brain suddenly twitched and I suddenly had an inspiration☝️ So there was no outline or anything like that (I felt like fans didn't need an outline). Later, I saw other people writing about reality, and then I crossed the river by feeling the stones. As a result, when writing about reality, I accidentally substituted part of my own unlucky life, which caused bad feelings for some readers. All right. Sometimes after completing several tasks in the game plot, I get stuck, and I have no choice but to pull out the real-life plot [shy] Result, result, result, when I wrote the seventy or eighty chapters, I clearly felt something was wrong. Looking back, I couldn't change it. I could only try to reduce the reality in the subsequent content, or make the reality a little more interesting. But the main body is still in the alien world. The third thing. This book has been written for two months so far. When I first came up with the title of the book, it didn't work out well. During the verification period, it only received 3,000 reads. The first release coincided with the May Day holiday, and May happened to be the month when AI is most rampant. [Pouts] So this book has never been available, costing more than ten yuan a day. Fortunately, the other data in this book are good. Later, I started a book test of 200,000 words and prepared five book titles, just in time for Children's Day. (Oh, what a bad luck) After the best book titles were released on May 31st, there were more than 2,000 bookstores every day, which was slightly better than the first month. In fact, to a certain extent, it can be considered a failure in the book test. [Punch hard] But this book still needs to be finished. When I started this book, I had not written for nearly a year, so it was a bit unfamiliar. Now, when writing fan fiction, I practice writing skills on the one hand, and plot plot on the other, laying a solid foundation for future writing. So be it. If you have anything to ask, you can leave a message directly in this book review and I will reply as soon as I see it. [Blowing kiss]

It's very good, novel, and I love watching it. One suggestion: Can the real-life plot be reduced a little? Everyone should watch Under One Man, not the revival of spiritual energy. In reality, the woman is a bit redundant. Although I don't care, some people should be uncomfortable with it. After all, some people adhere to the principle of not watching if there is a woman. To be honest, the real-life plot is a bit cliche, but it still deserves a higher score. Come on [blow a kiss]

I personally give it a score of 7.4. One of the bad points is that the protagonist does not know the information about the period of time Wang Wu spent without being possessed. I hope that an action log can be added to let the protagonist know this part of the information. Otherwise, the subsequent plot may easily collapse. There is another person who hopes not to accept girls. Although the man named Song is a negative person, if the relationship between the two parties is not handled well, it can easily become a poisonous point. The overall evaluation is food and grass, with good potential.

It's not bad. It doesn't just follow the original animation timeline, which is a good point. Strictly speaking, the dual protagonists of this book, or the behind-the-scenes/villain in the box type (just talking about style) "game" world feeds back reality, and reality helps the "game". At present, there is a bit too much writing in the real world, but it is still acceptable. Although I said I wanted to use the female tenant (I didn't remember the name) to praise the male protagonist for getting stronger and now being awesome, but it felt like the opposite, and it felt like I wanted to force the two of them to get together. Don't force most of the real plot to be tied to her, if you don't plan to sell CP. Also, the author gives me the feeling that he is not very good at writing about emotions. Wang Wu's colleague (can't remember) unless she has a heavy proportion/foreshadowing in the follow-up. It feels a bit "weird" (?) That she always appears from strange places, like the protagonist of the Tianxiahui celebration party who wants to take her with her and transfer her to the headquarters. She is usually bickering + caring. I can feel that I want to push this pair. After all, normal people would not take someone with them, even if they have a good relationship with them, to a large event celebration banquet (except for relatives), and they have wanted to take them with them many times. As for the "game" world, there is currently no problem. By the way, can't you change the title to something else that's interesting and funny? This book has been on my page many times, just because the title has never been clicked on.

It's really fun to watch [laughs] It's hilarious. The plot of the one-person world where the protagonist plays the "game" is fun to watch. The shortcoming is that the plot of the protagonist's own world is a bit boring. It's not that it's not boring, but the plot itself is thin and boring. Although the main focus is also on the plot of the one-person world, I still hope to add more. As for the storyline of the protagonist, I don't see much charm at the moment.

It's very interesting. It's one of the better-looking fanfics written recently. Whether it's the protagonist's calm fighting feeling when he rises, or Wang Wu's own cowardice, it's all very funny, and you can see the growth trajectory of the protagonist (Wang Wu), and I'm looking forward to the next plot.

(♥∀♥) It's good-looking. It's not like most of them follow the protagonist now. We Wang Wu are really strong.

Invincible is so good-looking, and his entire plot is completely divorced from the original work. Do you know how rare this kind of fanfic is? ! ! ! I've read a lot of fics before, and they basically follow the route of the original animation, and then end at the latest updated chapter point. Because it is a bit difficult to create a purely original battle plot without being OOC. But I have read dozens of chapters in this article, and most of them are original plots. It's really rare. Very fresh! ! ! Come on, author, this book shouldn't have such a low score. Why is it so low? Who is giving low marks? Were you persecuted by the studio? It seems that this is not a book that can be produced by a studio! Looks good, I tied it in one breath. Because it is the protagonist who controls Xiao Wang's body, the protagonist and Xiao Wang create the effect of "teasing and complimenting" in cross talk. Xiao Wang would be a bitch from time to time. It's not against the rules at all, it's really funny. I hope the author can keep writing. I really don't understand why the rating is so low. It is definitely a high-scoring work in my mind.

It's a pretty good book. The setting of the protagonist controlling a character in one person is very novel. The story line in the world of one person is also exciting. There is no homogenization of content. The protagonist grows up at a moderate speed and the writing rhythm is moderate. There's nothing too bad about it, it's just that the main world plot and world view creation are relatively average, and I can't find any comfortable and enjoyable points in the main world plot.

The author mentioned in the article that there is no cp. It is not a routine for female tenants. I have not seen any ambiguous plot. Whether it is King 5 or 9, the evaluation is that the stone and fighting are fun. I think the neighbor is just an introduction to lead the protagonist into the real world of strangers. It would probably be quite long to write it down like this. At present, there are almost 400,000 words, and there are no flaws. The author is very good at making jokes, and the overall rhythm seems quite enjoyable. I hope more people can watch it [crying] It's really beautiful. The author will update more often, and he will update the novel if nothing happens.

This book should be among the top three among fics. The plot of the protagonist is well integrated with the original work and there is nothing sinister about it. It just depends on how the plot is arranged in the real world. If it is unreasonable, it is easy to lag. It can be added to the bookshelf. [You taste carefully]

If there were fewer real-life scenes, this would be a great book. If you really want to write, it would be better to write more words. The real-life events written by the author are really confusing. [Face covering] The game world controlled by the protagonist is really good. [Learned]

It's good, but some of the plots are a bit off-kilter. For example, the protagonist changes into women's clothing to reduce the sense of immersion. The Heavenly Master can detect the existence of the game, which proves that the game is just that. After the Heavenly Master ascends, he directly refines the game system in an instant. It is very reasonable. There is also a real-life plot for the protagonist, which feels meaningless. I want to be sliced ​​and studied, right?

It's a good book on Tomato. The fighting is good and not sloppy.

How should I put it~ A very strange perspective description, the latest one: One person is wearing women's clothing~ Now it depends on when the protagonist realizes that this is not a game, it will probably be more fun then🤣🤣🤣 If you are tired of reading the same fan fiction over and over again, I recommend reading this book. Since the protagonist thinks it is a gamified world, there are no restrictions on the plot. It is quite interesting~

It's okay, you can watch it. There is basically no contact with the female neighbors. They are only used as a lead to introduce other things. Moreover, the reality is rarely described. Basically, they are all under one person. Just watch them as fans under one person. There is no need to watch the real-life plot. [Understood][Understood][Understood][Understood]

There is a girl next door who has just grown up, and she is so powerful that she is unrivaled in the world. No one tastes the slightest bit of red lips, and kills the young man with one punch Yun Xiang's clothes and beautiful appearance, kill Stallone with two punches Like a pipa half-covering one's face, three punches sink a destroyer She has fair skin and beautiful skin, and can kill Kansai with one punch.

Well, reality has become stronger. Haven't you realized that the game world is real? It's obvious that if you write well, it will be better. Maybe you don't have enough writing skills, but you have to try. Don't be rigid. Why give it five stars? Because this one is considered a solid one among the one-person genre, and the others are really rubbish.

Five stars for this book. I saw some bad reviews about the heroine. I haven't noticed it yet after reading it. I feel it's well written. You book lovers can check it out. Nainaidi, it took up my whole afternoon and half of the night's study time. The author hastily coded the words. I think it's okay so far. Keep up the good work, but the updates are a bit slow.

The writing is quite interesting, at least it surpasses 80% of the one-person fandoms.

The plot of the alien plot is good. The basic rhythm of Wang Wu's minor characters and the protagonist's control of time is relatively comfortable. It is not the kind where the plot is deliberately left until the last situation and then the protagonist comes to rescue the emergency. The reality line is slightly routine and has no special highlights. It can only be said to drag the rhythm, and skipping it will not have much impact.

It's good-looking, really good-looking. Among all Tomatoes, he is the only one that I can read. It's time to create a new plot for reality, hoping that the focus can still be stabilized on one person.

Goldfinger is similar to a small world and has endless fun. Use computer games to create avatars, control the characters in the world under one person, sing, dance, rap as you like, and challenge various characters. Lao Tianshi: You are the challenger Protagonist: You are just an ordinary person who was born in an era without me.

It's beautiful, you don't need to practice, you can jump and walk as soon as you learn it, the subject matter is novel and interesting! Come on

It is very creative. On the one hand, you can achieve a lot of fun in the game, and you don't have to worry about the plot being too fast. The regrets of the Republic of China can be solved in the copy. There is also a line in reality. In this way, there can be unlimited content to write. Now is the game, and the future is reality. I am really full of expectations.

Awesome, I just love seeing these possessions (Good-looking(♥∀♥)

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