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The plot of World Correction is very novel, the writing is not bad, the brotherhood is well written, Ning Ning is really cute and cute, but at the beginning, Ning Ning was clearly given the character of a genius e-sports player, and he was mentioned to have won the championship in the original world. Later, it was written that he was very reckless and was directly eliminated. In the later period, Ning Ning did not play many games in daily life, which I don't think is reasonable. Ning Ning is genius but reckless, and he has no daily training. How did he win the championship? Who can turn gaming into a career without talent? No matter how talented he is, he still needs training to hone his skills. I kind of mind the champion doing this.

The world setting is quite novel, and I am looking forward to the plot. However, some of the descriptions of the protagonist's status made me a little embarrassed. For example, he is often shy and blushes, which is a bit too much. Furthermore, some plots and things feel avoidable, but the protagonist insists on it. It still depends on what the author writes next, and his writing skills can be improved.

It's good to watch, and the protagonist still has a brain. It's not the kind of mindless novel, nor the kind of real and fake young master, who pulls and pulls and puts aside the internal fighting. The protagonist is a very good person. I think, ah, if I don't talk about it, why is it bad if I don't talk about it anymore? I can't think of any good words to say, but it's just a very nice book [face covering]

It's super good-looking. Xiao Ning's settings are delicious. Although there are not many chapters, the content is really good. I saw the tweet and ran over to read it. The tweet seemed to be only a few minutes long, but it was directly pulled over to me, and it immediately tied up. It's really delicious.

It makes my heart soft and warm. I also really like Big Devil. He is a little naughty and troublesome, but he doesn't feel annoying. Instead, he is super cute. The author writes it well\(^o^)/~

This character design is so novel. Does the protagonist have no CP? I'm going to start catching up on updates. The author, please don't stop updating. Please update more often, at least 500 chapters! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I really like the content in this book. An e-sports boy travels from one world to this world. The first thing is the setting. It is very novel and has many elements of anti-traditional novels. I like it very much.

It's a good-looking and attractive subject matter, but the author has one thing that I really want to say. You labeled it as a double male protagonist, but it said no cp in the introduction. This made me originally read this theme and dual male protagonists. Why didn't the other male protagonist appear? Later, I found out that there was no cp. I suggested that the author make a big change. The rest of the reading questions are very good.

The writing is good, the plot and emotions are all online, and the characters are lively, but the only thing that makes me feel a little bad is that sometimes the description is too lengthy, but this is the only thing that I don't like very much. The others are still very nice.

This article is more beautiful than I expected, it's super beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Not going to lie, the protagonist's IQ is online, his looks are online, and his strength is also online.

It's tied, but I didn't expect that I haven't rated it yet. When I first started reading it, there were actually not many chapters left, so I read it again after a long interval. The author's writing is very good, and the characterization is very good😁Ning Ning is really cute\(//∇//)\Come on, author! Update soon! (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's good-looking, but you might not be able to stand it at first. The writing style is relatively immature, but it becomes more fluent later on. The protagonist is cute, but the characteristics of the big devil are clearly shown hahaha

Come on, I hope it won't stop updating

The two male protagonists won't be my brother Jiang Huaixi and our Chu Ning, right? Hahahahaha [Sending my heart] The author will update more than 180 chapters every day, it's so interesting

My brother is super cute! ! ! Love it, love it! The author must not stop updating! ! ! Otherwise, I will "hunt you down" [laughing evilly].

Novel setting, unique world view, rich characters I like it, I like it, I like it very much˶>ᗜ<˶

It's a great book. The look is pretty good. The voice of the Little Devil is so cute and playful.

Love watching it, the main character is cute

Good-looking, good-looking ૮₍♡♡₎ა awesome⊹꙳ ˶˙ᵕ˙˶ ⊹꙳

Author, please keep updating [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Love it, love it, it's so beautiful\(//∇//)\

So far, I haven't seen anything bad. The Chu family is getting along very warmly.

This novel is good in every way. The only shortcoming is that I clicked to read it when it only had a hundred thousand words. Damn it, please hand over the manuscript. One hundred thousand words at a time will scare me to death.

The protagonist is very cute, has a high IQ, and has his own ideas when it comes to things.

Ning Ning, the great devil [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]cute and cute [cool][cool]

Come on, come on, I'll finish it in a while, it's not enough! Especially beautiful. When can we update more? ! [Almost crying]

It feels very good-looking, the author is great, come on! ! !

The author is awesome. It's delicious, it's delicious, eat it, eat more.

I really like the character design of Little Demon King Ning, and the family relationship is also very touching! !

Super beautiful, highly recommended