(New writer, please give me some advice) Lin Wanxing stayed up late to read a book about ancient Chinese abuse. When he opened his eyes, he transformed into a vicious male supporting character with the same name and surname in the book, who met a tragic end.
The original protagonist was madly in love with the heroine of the original book, and madly targeted the original male protagonist Shen Yanci, seeking death without any bottom line. In the end, the male protagonist caused his family to be destroyed, and he died tragically in prison.
On the first day he came here, Lin Wanxing made a life-and-death vow:
Stay away from the male and female protagonists, clean up their lives, and never follow the original owner's old path of committing suicide!
She restrained her sharp edge, stayed away, and kept to herself. She just wanted to live peacefully until the finale.
But who can tell her——
Why is the original male protagonist Shen Yanci, who should hate her to the core, looking at her more and more wrong?
In the past, I was cold and dismissive, but now I am pressing you every step of the way;
I used to rush to kill everyone, but now I am addicted to protecting my shortcomings.
Lin Wanxing trembled: "Master, calm down! I am a vicious male partner, not your official partner!"
Shen Yanci stroked the ends of her hair with his fingertips, his voice low and paranoid:
"It doesn't matter, from today on, you are mine."
Lin Wanxing collapsed:
I dressed up as a vicious male supporting character to save my life, not to be loved by the original male protagonist! !
Reader comments
Lin Wanxing is a coward who clings to life and wants to avoid the hero's core. He pretends to be sick, pretends to be a murderer, and overturns three times in a row. The rhythm is tight and not procrastinating. The plot connects naturally, from being caught pretending to be sick, to trying to act evil to persuade him to quit, and then being gently manipulated by the male protagonist, the reversal is reasonable and funny.
The contrast between the characters is very good: Lin Wanxing is cowardly but also wants to be tough, while Shen Yanci is cold on the surface but secretly doting on the inside. The interaction is tense enough, and the sweetness and laughter are well balanced. The language is easy to speak and can be read smoothly and decompressively. There is no OOC or forced intelligence.
The only small regret is that it is a short story and does not include more psychological activities, but as a serialized chapter, it is eye-catching enough and makes people want to continue reading.
Lin Wanxing is a coward who clings to life and wants to avoid the hero's core. He pretends to be sick, pretends to be a murderer, and overturns three times in a row. The rhythm is tight and not procrastinating. The plot connects naturally, from being caught pretending to be sick, to trying to act evil to persuade him to quit, and then being gently manipulated by the male protagonist, the reversal is reasonable and funny. The contrast between the characters is very good: Lin Wanxing is cowardly but also wants to be tough, while Shen Yanci is cold on the surface but secretly doting on the inside. The interaction is tense enough, and the sweetness and laughter are well balanced. The language is easy to speak and can be read smoothly and decompressively. There is no OOC or forced intelligence. The only small regret is that it is a short story and does not include more psychological activities, but as a serialized chapter, it is eye-catching enough and makes people want to continue reading.