From the Devil************

It's good-looking. The heroine has always been calm, sober and brave. She knows what she wants and what to do. I like it. The author's writing style should have such a faint sense of life? The female characters in the article are also very good. I haven't seen any so-called vicious female supporting characters. At first, I thought Lucy would harm the heroine, but it turned out not to be the case. She was just a little jealous of the heroine from her own point of view (actually, I think it was more envy? Admiration? A bit twisted mood) , not to mention that she is a kind person. As expected, I still have the stereotype [face covering] and writing about male adventurers in Western fantasy (except for a few cannon fodder that promotes plot points), I didn't see a few curse words (probably not, just pretend I didn't say them). The author is too saintly. The heroine has finally embarked on an adventurous journey, and I look forward to her growth and story. How dare the author suddenly update a thousand chapters to scare me [laughs] I went back and read it specifically. When the protagonist, a novice adventurer, was robbed by two men outside the city, the author did not write any insulting words about the gender of the protagonist. It was very good.

The character design is okay, and I also like the overall theme. Maybe I haven't read many Summoner articles now, but the biggest problem is that it gives me a sense of inconsistency with AI. It is particularly obvious in the dialogue. The narrative introduces new details in the world. There are also obvious traces of AI writing enmmmm (I personally feel this way)

I think it's pretty cool, but it's a pity that it's a male-oriented term. Such as "swordsman" and "female swordsman". I think some readers need to clear up this point. There is no need to change it to female-oriented, or just add gender to all professions? Just don't favor one over the other. Of course, this is just a little suggestion from a reader of mine (not a guide to writing, who am I? I also give a guide). If the author is willing to change it, I will be very happy. If not, forget it.

The theme of Western Fantasy Summoner. I haven't seen this theme in a long time. It looks good. Looking forward to the follow-up [love]

Good looking ^ω^ From what I read so far, Alice is very normal, calm, smart and adaptable. It's an eloquent read, and I hope the author will persevere.

Give yourself a perfect score💯

Looks good, feels epic

The world view is very interesting and huge.