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One Piece, Develop Devil Fruits, the Protagonist's Abilities Should Not Be Too Complicated
Instead of awakening the Sharingan, Zanpakutō, etc., You can use Devil Fruit to develop abilities similar to other anime characters. The main thing is a pure
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No matter it's a novel, TV series, anime or whatever, as long as it's fan fiction, it's fine
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Not bad, but in just over 30 chapters, the male protagonist is the strongest under Im, stronger than Rocks. Being too strong will test the author's storytelling skills. I hope he can write better and better in the future. The plots of these dozens of chapters recently are really hard to describe, super boring, the male protagonist really has no personality charm, the writing is so ugly, I can't stand it anymore.
It's just that the quantity is too small and not satisfying. The Tuntun Fruit is an advanced fusion material that can either be eaten by the protagonist or given to a machine. It is comparable to the fusion device of all things. The Burning Fruit and the high-temperature fruit are fused into a 10,000-degree flame on the surface of the sun, and become an enchanted version. The high-temperature Burning Fruit is fed to a weapon and turned into a flowing blade like a fire sword. The sword is the power of the sun. Whoever comes, who can evaporate the Pacific Ocean is not a dream. (Provided you have enough physical strength) The essence of fusion is to complete the concept like Xiao Yan's fusion of alien fire. After eating Devil Fruit, you can use it instinctively. It consumes not much physical energy, just like humans can breathe. It just increases the energy essence and requires physical strength. If you have different opinions, I will look at it.
It's really fun to watch, it's good not to be suppressed. I think the next fun thing would be when the protagonist pretends to be cool when Luffy comes out, or the protagonist joins Luffy's pirate group incognito and reveals his true colors, scaring the other old people [laughing] [admiration]
Well enough! I'm afraid that the starting point is too high and it will end badly later! Come on!
The writing is good, but I really don't understand why I am always obsessed with vampire fruit? Wouldn't pure gold be better? There is one more fruit [smile]
Erezhuan is boring, why are you afraid of damage? Do you need them?
Niu B's writing is so cool
Not bad, try to make it longer
You can also support it
Urgent to update, remind to update, say important things three times
Ice Homiz eats frozen fruits, Flame Homiz eats burning fruits, Thunder and Lightning Homiz eats Thunder Fruit, Magma Homiz eats Rock Berry fruits, [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking]
The writing is good so far, but why does the protagonist look down on my destiny so much? The power of the Tuantuan Fruit is not better than the darkness, it just swallows the darkness.
Great, better to have more
Looks pretty good! ! ! !
Not bad, it feels great
Not bad, keep up the good work
It's great now, hope it stays [like][like][like]
Give me a five-star support first!
It's not bad, and then it's also pretty awesome.
The book was okay, but similar to the anime itself, the fights were so lively that not many people died in total.
It's okay so far, but I'm afraid the protagonist is too powerful