Douluo Dalu: The Young Lady's Mermaid Princess

The author's writing is very beautiful. I really like to read Yan Yan's growth path. The author also writes battles well. However, the only shortcoming is that there are very few emotional lines between Yan Yan and Ning Rongrong in the article. The few are still relatively few in the first 100 chapters. Maybe I didn't read it carefully, but I only saw that the author only wrote about Ning Rongrong's love at first sight for Yan Yan, and almost no subsequent feelings. He didn't write about why the protagonist fell in love with Rongrong. It felt very baffling to me. Is it just because of Wuhun? I don't feel as good as the best friend relationship between Shui Yue'er and Yan Yan written by the author. However, I really like the sisterly relationship between Yan Yan and Tianshui College written by the author, and I like the master-disciple relationship between Yan Yan and Shui Wuxin. However, could the author add more interactions between Yan Yan and Rongrong?

This is the first time I have seen someone write a fanfic about Ning Rongrong. The character design of Sister Bao is very attractive and the characters are also very three-dimensional. The writing style is simply wonderful and the writing is full of thoughts. I can pick up the pen and write it in a flowing way. The case teaches the enemy to sweep away the thousands of troops. The story of the flower life At the end of the term, the meaning is profound. Now the stone is turned into gold. The writing is brilliant. The words are written in one breath. The cover is vivid and vivid. Outstanding, insightful, correct words, strict words, well-spoken, outstanding, superb, breathtaking, penetrating the rainbow, majestic and wonderful, swallowing mountains and rivers, overwhelming mountains and oceans, smooth writing, unparalleled writing style, sharp writing style, humorous article, elegant and clear writing style, gorgeous, simple and unpretentious writing style, smooth and vivid image Sooner or later, the gorgeous clothes are full of porcelain. The stories are beautiful, elegant, graceful, elegant, impressive, and stunning. The mouth is full of beauty, the love and writing are intertwined, and the sparse chapters and sentences are like rafters. The power of the pen is penetrating through the back of the paper. It is awe-inspiring to see the spring and autumn. So when it comes out, it is not enough to watch👀 [laughing]

It's pretty good. It's the best Douluo and two-girl novel I've ever read. Please don't stop updating.

It's so beautiful. It's so beautiful. It's so beautiful. Recommended. Recommended. Recommended. Recommended. Recommend everyone to watch it. Miss Mermaid Princess is so beautiful. It's better than the others I've seen. It's really, really, really, really. I recommend, recommend, recommend, recommend, everyone, take a look.

Very good, looking forward to the Soul Master Competition

This is probably the first time the author has written such a book. Overall, it is okay, but there are some holes that have not been filled in. Some things could be written in more detail, otherwise the article lacks logic. And where did Tianshui Academy get its title Douluo guidance? In the form of a hundred thousand year soul beast, it seems that I remember that I condensed the soul ring myself? That's all for now, I will continue to read more. After all, there are too few books on Douluo Lily. I am not posting this to criticize the author, but just to make some small suggestions. I hope the author can write better↖(^ω^)↗

Nice! Big cheers for the author!

This is not bad, it looks good, but the author said later that he would write faster, and then he wrote extremely fast. This is not good.

It's so beautiful, I finished reading it without missing a chapter [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] I hope it won't stop updating [Blowing kisses] [Blowing kisses] [Laughing]

Good-looking, sweet [send heart]